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anyway...ON WITH THE STORY!

CARTER POV

Carter here,after defeating the Lord of Chaos Apophis everything went back to normal...if you call magic flying everywhere,demons sometimes trying to attack us,but...that's normal for us,if you live with the Kane family.I saw Shelby chasing some of the ankle biters with her crayon's,sparks flying clapped outside and it was raining hard.I heard a knock at the door and I got up from the couch and opened the door and two soaked boys where standing there.

They looked like twins one looked 11 and the other looked 15, they both had grey bangs and the younger one had black hair and the older one had red hair that looked like people ran there hands through there hair and they had one red eye and one blue the younger one had a grey sweater and a red shirt and black pants and blue other had a red sweater and a blue shirt and grey pants and he had Black were both radiating a strong magic."Is this Brooklyn house?"The older one said

"Yes" I answered."My name is Wicked blade and this is my younger brother Wicked critine"

"well come on-"I got interrupted by someone calling me "CARTER, SOMEONE HELP!"

"SADIE!THAT'S MY SISTER "I screamed[yes Sadie i care it's not a big deal]. I was about to go run up the stairs but Wicked critine beat me to ran up the stairs and i followed him.

I ran to Sadie's room and i saw biggest demon ever he had evil black whole eyes and he had red scaly skin and super sharp claws on his feet and his hands and he had bat wings and he had Sadie backed up in a corner and i saw Sadie's wand broken on the floor.I tried to pull my khopesh out of the Duat but my hands were shaking to hard and i was so frighted.Calm down.The voice of Horus said.Easy for you to say,your not facing a demon who's so big he doesn't even have to use tippy-toes to reach the ceiling,and who invited you back in my head!?

I felt useless that i couldn't save my own sister,nice pharaoh/brother i am![Sadie said that I shouldn't even be pharaoh ,shut up so i can tell this story.]I saw Wicked critine put his hands in front of him and a dark aura surrounded him and a shadow ball started forming in his demon opened his mouth and fire started forming in his mouth.

"You dare challenge me!"the demon bellowed.

"Yeah i do"Wicked critine said in a mocking can a 11 year old be this brave already?

The demon turned around and Sadie screamed as the demon shot fire at her.I thought she was a goner and a shadow shield formed around her before it hit her. I looked at Wicked critine and he still had the dark aura around him and he still had the shadow ball in his hands and it shot out a black force that knock the demon down and he landed on Sadie but the dark shield was still around her.

But the demon wasn't done because he started screeching and demons crashed into the window and it shattered and I heard the ankle biters shriek.I heard Shelby say "He cant possibly kill all those demons!He need help Carter do something!"

Wicked critine must have heard because he said "Oh really?"and suddenly a blanket of shadows covered the room and I couldn't see anything."SADIE!" but my voice was muffled from the shadows.there's something about wicked critine i don't trust Horus said in my mind.shut up you don't trust anyone they just came here to train!

I had my doubts.The shadows started to clear and all the demons were gone but Sadie had a deep gash on her stomach and on her leg that was also deep and Wicked blade and I ran up to Sadie and carried her to the Medical room and Jaz was about to go and heal her but Wicked blade said he can handle it"heal!"the hieroglyphic for heal burned grey in the air and immediately all my sisters wounds healed.

Jaz stared in amazement at Wicked blade "your a healer?"She asked.

"No."he answered. Felix came in dragging Wicked critine "What happened to him!" Sadie shrieked "He just fell,he probably used to much magic."Felix said in a worried tone

"BOOO!"Wicked critine shot up suddenly and we all screamed except Felix and they both fell on the floor laughing their head off

"wicked critine your not a ghost so stop acting like one."Wicked blade rolled his made them laugh even harder."Nice job wicked critine!"Felix said slapped high fives.

"You both are sick"i said shaking my head."Your life is sick!"Felix said still laughing."By the way since you have magic which path of the god do you follow."I asked one of Felix's penguins came in and went to Felix."Hi my penguin!"Felix penguin looked at wicked critine and wicked blade for a brief second and the penguin ran of"Whats with your penguin Felix?"I asked."I don't know I better check on it"Felix ran out of the Medical Room."you were saying something about the path of the gods?"Wicked blade asked."ya which path do you follow?

"I follow Thoth"Wicked blade said."Which path do you follow?"I asked Wicked critine."I am not saying."

"Okay I'm not going to pressure you but you have to tell me sooner or later"

"I'll say when the time is right

We all got out of the Medical room and I headed to my room and Khufu followed eating a box of Cheerios I still don't trust that kid he's hiding something...or someone Horus said

WICKED CRITINE'S POV

I finally finished unpacking my stuff and I flopped down on my bed and sighed my room looked awesome with my own bathroom a dresser with a big mirror on top and a flat screen TV a desk and the bed was so comfy and I had a walk in room was bigger than my old home...home i felt tears coming in my eyes.

Please don't cry we've come to far to for you to cry now,look I'm away from my family to to be with you,well i can still see them but still why don't you go play a prank on someone for good times sake...like that Sadie 's her name right?

I follow the path of Anubis of coarse I didn't tell Carter that because for some reason Anubis wanted me to hold it back.

"What kind of pep talk is that?!" I i got up from bed."L'mun!"and i turned invisible because that's what it does.I went to Sadie's room and I went to her bathroom and I emptied her tooth paste and replaced it with glue I closed the cap and put it in her medicine cabinet then I heard humming I peeked out the bathroom door and I saw Sadie.

Anubis!Now is a great time to make a portal!

Cant you make a portal. he said

You know I suck at portals! I heard the humming coming closer.

Anubis!Suddenly a red sand portal appeared.

"Huh?"Anubis's portals are usually black but I didn't care as long as it was a portal.I jumped in the strange portal just as Sadie entered.I got dropped off at a desert,but it was no ordinary desert,the sand red and their was a man standing there,he must have be a god because he had a animal head which looked like a sha which was a resembling of a greyhound or a Jackal, of coarse like all Gods he had a human body,kilt,gold neck collar sandals and kohl lined eyes."Hello son,long time no see,looks like you found a host to invade."

Anubis who is that man?And why did he call me his son?

Wicked critine he is talking about me...that is Set the God of Evil Aka my father.

WHAT!

I immediately made a ball of shadow and shot it at simple caught it as if it was a normal ball and crushed my shadow ball."Anubis you actually are hosting a strong mortal."Set said.

"immortal,I'm immortal for your information,i was born like that."I I spoke but it wasn't my voice It was Anubis's."Father why did you bring us here?!"Set said"Well I was just going to warn you a greater evil is coming and i was planing on helping."

"Are you sick or something because it sounded like you said you wanted to help."I said in my normal voice."I'm telling the truth a great evil is coming and you will need my help to do it,now I will make a portal to send you back to Brooklyn House but you have to tell the people who live there in the morning what I just said,I hope I can trust you to do that."

"Oh can you do me a favor?Can you send me to my room?"A sand portal appeared and I jumped in and I was in my room.I suddenly felt really tired from all the power i did today,doing that blanket of shadows really took its toll on me my knees buckled and I crumbled on the floor(not literally crumbling to rocks,you know what i mean)and my vision turned black.

When I opened my eyes I saw black and i felt like I was falling i tried to talk or scream or do anything but nothing a demon came at looked like a cadaver with muscle and sinew but no lidless eyes glowed red and he had really sharp fanged with a murderous grin he grabbed my arms and pined me in the air.I was finally able to speak."who are you!"

"I'm Face of Horror and we will meet soon to see your strength"and suddenly he disappeared and the world around me started to shake,if i was even in the suddenly I heard my name being called.I shot up instantly and i woke up on the clung to my pajamas and I started to shake with fear of my horrible dream but something really puzzled me why did the world around me start to shake?and who called my name?

Sun light streamed through the open window."Wicked critine your ok!"A female voice said. I looked and saw Jaz standing by my bed."I tried calling you for breakfast but,you didn't wake up and you were shaking really bad I tried also shaking you awake but that didn't work!"She looked really worried."Well I'm fine now,thanks Jaz for trying to wake me up."

Her face looked flushed when I said that comment.I think she has a crush on me."Well I'll be down there soon"And with that she walked out.I got dressed and was too lazy to brush my hair even though its easy to brush but i have a lot of hair so it would take a while to brush.I was still shaken from my dream.I walked down the stairs and went to the balcony.I grabbed a bagel,bacon and waffles.I sat down next to Shelby.I threw bacon to Philip of Macedonia he happily ate the bacon.I rose to me feet."Everyone may I have your attention!"I turned there direction to me.

Suddenly a voice yelled"CARTER!I'm totally going to kick you butt!"A angry voice yelled and Sadie came and she had a toothbrush stuck to her people tried no to got to his feet."Sadie what makes you think that I did that!"Carter yelled back."Because I'm always pranking you so you probably decided to prank me but I didn't think you would go this low to use permanent glue!"

"ANUBIS I CANT BELIEVE YOU MADE ME USE PERMANENT GLUE WHEN YOU SAID I SHOULD PRANK her!"I yelled."Your hosting Anubis Wicked critine!"Sadie cried.

And yet again Anubis took control and spoke "Sadie I'm so sorry that I made him prank you,and i also should have told you this before but i know this will break your heart but...i hav-"

I interrupted him by saying "Anubis you don't have to say your secret."I said"Wait your the one who pranked me!"

"I'm sorry!I thought you wouldn't be this angry because it was just a joke,it wasn't meant to be permanent!"I cried."Wait Sadie before you do anything rash he-"Carter didn't get to finish his sentence because Sadie yelled"HA-DI!"She must have gotten backed up from a goddess because a mortal couldn't possibly do it this powerful.

I got blown back and hit the railing really hard and you could actually hear my bones crack and I dropped down and I thought I would be a goner because I was to weak to reach out my hand but someone caught me by by hand and tried to pull me up.I looked up and it was Shelby trying but she wasn't strong enough and I could feel myself slipping.

"HELP!"Shelby scream and I looked up and I saw her slipping and she started to fall too and she toppled of the balcony and I grabbed her with one hand and the side of the balcony with the other hand Jaz grabbed my hand and tried to pull me up and Walt helped to and they pulled us both and lay us both on the floor and the last words I heard before I passed out was my brothers panicked voice.[My brother claims that he didn't remember panicking...oh yes you did don't lie to the readers!]and with that i passed out with my back hurting.

When I woke up I was in the Medical room and Jaz was leaning over me."Oh thank the Gods your alive!"She hugged me but then realized what she was doing and quickly pulled away.I tried to get up but a jolt of pain so powerful I had to lay back down."Don't move or else your back won't heal."I looked her strait in the eyes"I have to tell everyone about something please!I'll be careful I promise"I pleaded."Well..."She must have saw how important this info was because she said"Alright fine but just be careful with your back"she sighed.

"Thank you so much!"I hugged her and she jumped a little with me hugging her I surprised her even more.I kissed her on the lips just to see how she would react and I could see she was blushing like crazy.I pulled away and ran down the stairs to everyone I stopped in the middle and asked if everyone was here."Everyone is here except Cleo,she's in the library."Felix said.I ran to the library and called Cleo and we came to were everyone was were the Thoth statue stood.

Once again Anubis took control."Sadie I need to tell you that...I'm sorry but I have a wife and kid...I know you will probably be hurt but I had to say this."

"Anubis how dare you not tell me this!I will never ever forgive you for this!"Sadie ran up to me and kicked me.I doubled over in pain and i cursed in egyption.I could see tear starting to come in her eyes."THAT'S IT!I HAVE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU HITTING ME WHEN I NEVER HIT YOU!"I screamed at her and suddenly a black aura started to form around me"It's time I took my hit!"

I fell to my knees and the black aura disappeared."Anyway."I said a bit more and Sadie backed away from me.I started to tell them of what Set had said and my horrifying nightmare about Face Of Horror."It's not like Set to try and help...he could be tricking us."Sadie said."And worst of all Face Of Horror is back."Carter said in a grim tone.

That's it for now Everyone! REVIEW PLEASE AND TELL ME WHAT I MISSED this is my First story i wrote so i want your honest opinion and Also wicked critine and wicked blade that's there full name and i forgot to put that wicked critine and wicked blade are immortal but that doesn't mean they don't get hurt,they still do...they just don't die, man my hands are hurting. from my next chapter i will try and put wicked blade more i didn't do Sadie because a lot of people have Sadie more often in there so once again...REVIEW and please tell me if it sucks or not thank you!