I updated dis after I saw the mistakes I made. Ok they weren't
mistakes but I did change some things. Whatever. Oh ya be4 I
forget. I am gonna write another ch. as soon as I get the
chance. Thanx 4 the nice reviews!
I hate to write all this disclaimer stuff but here goes:
Disclaimer: I do NOT own any characters or actors from BMW blah blah blah + if I did I'd turn this into an episode not a story @ fanfiction. Well mayb I do own Kyle I donno iz there a kid named Kyle correct me if ya know!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Cory was sitting on the cold bare floor shaking furiously but trying to hide the thought that he was scared. The empty coke bottle on the floor was spinning around and around. For Cory it seemed to laugh an evil laugh towards him. It was Cory's first high school party and the kids were playing spin the bottle. All the seventh graders were at Kyle's house (Kyle was one of his classmates from school). He watched kid after kid spin the dreadful nightmare. Worst of all they all looked so at ease.
"Cory, Cory!" Shawn, his all-time best friend called to him.
"Yeah what!"
"It's your turn to spin the bottle."
"Oh." Cory said with a nervous tone in his voice.
All the kids from seventh grade from his school stared at him with wide eyes and sly grins. It was an uncomfortable place to be at that moment
After gazing at the substance in front of him. he touched the dreadful bottle. I felt cold and slippery under his fingers. He felt like he wanted to throw up. He wanted to think of an excuse for not spinning to bottle but making excuses was never his strong spot, so he forgot about the idea. The lights were dim which was a bad atmosphere for Cory in a time like this
"Come on!" everybody urged. "Spin it!" "Spin it!"
Closing his eyes he gathered his courage and spun the bottle. Everybody watched as the bottle continued to spin round after round. Cory prayed that he was NOT going to end up kissing Topanga (the fluffy hair-ball, as Cory and Shawn called her). Finally Cory started to open his eyes slowly, first the right one then the left, but he regretted the action the moment he did it. He was so caught up in his thoughts he forgot that the bottle was still spinning. Now that he opened his eyes he could see that the bottle was going slower and slower and slower every round.
Suddenly everything was black and all Cory could see was a bottle three times larger than him spinning and laughing a hardy laugh in his face. Cory could have cried then but he pulled himself together. Stay strong! He ordered himself. He blinked a few times so that he could get back into the real world.
"Ahh," Cory whimpered.
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What was the scream for?
Find out by reviewing my story. A few good reviews and next chapter. Hey, I know its short. Sry! Hehe!
I hate to write all this disclaimer stuff but here goes:
Disclaimer: I do NOT own any characters or actors from BMW blah blah blah + if I did I'd turn this into an episode not a story @ fanfiction. Well mayb I do own Kyle I donno iz there a kid named Kyle correct me if ya know!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Cory was sitting on the cold bare floor shaking furiously but trying to hide the thought that he was scared. The empty coke bottle on the floor was spinning around and around. For Cory it seemed to laugh an evil laugh towards him. It was Cory's first high school party and the kids were playing spin the bottle. All the seventh graders were at Kyle's house (Kyle was one of his classmates from school). He watched kid after kid spin the dreadful nightmare. Worst of all they all looked so at ease.
"Cory, Cory!" Shawn, his all-time best friend called to him.
"Yeah what!"
"It's your turn to spin the bottle."
"Oh." Cory said with a nervous tone in his voice.
All the kids from seventh grade from his school stared at him with wide eyes and sly grins. It was an uncomfortable place to be at that moment
After gazing at the substance in front of him. he touched the dreadful bottle. I felt cold and slippery under his fingers. He felt like he wanted to throw up. He wanted to think of an excuse for not spinning to bottle but making excuses was never his strong spot, so he forgot about the idea. The lights were dim which was a bad atmosphere for Cory in a time like this
"Come on!" everybody urged. "Spin it!" "Spin it!"
Closing his eyes he gathered his courage and spun the bottle. Everybody watched as the bottle continued to spin round after round. Cory prayed that he was NOT going to end up kissing Topanga (the fluffy hair-ball, as Cory and Shawn called her). Finally Cory started to open his eyes slowly, first the right one then the left, but he regretted the action the moment he did it. He was so caught up in his thoughts he forgot that the bottle was still spinning. Now that he opened his eyes he could see that the bottle was going slower and slower and slower every round.
Suddenly everything was black and all Cory could see was a bottle three times larger than him spinning and laughing a hardy laugh in his face. Cory could have cried then but he pulled himself together. Stay strong! He ordered himself. He blinked a few times so that he could get back into the real world.
"Ahh," Cory whimpered.
**********************************************************
What was the scream for?
Find out by reviewing my story. A few good reviews and next chapter. Hey, I know its short. Sry! Hehe!