Now for the confusing explanation. I wrote this for my senior thesis. It is a spin off of Stargate Atlantis(or sg-1, I guess). I would love any and all comments or reviews. But it should be known i will put reviews into my project but without any names or screen names

For those of you who understood that here's the teaser(in script form) for Stargate Gemini

All characters are mine except McKay, Landry, and Caldwell

TEASER

FADE IN:

INT. A TRAINING ROOM OR GYM

The bottom of the screen says "Cheyenne Mountain Air Force Base, 7:00 am." About 8 people are working out. JANE LINZ and ISAAC DAVENPORT are fighting (kick boxing) in the middle of the room. They continuously fight throughout the scene.

JANE LINZ is an Air Force major. She is in her late thirties. While she is rather short, about 5.4, she makes up for it in inner confidence. She can be quite cold to people because she feels no need to be frivolous with words or feelings

ISAAC DAVENPORT is an Air Force captain. He is in his early thirties. Davenport is not the most witty person in the world but can be very funny. He is great friends with Linz.

(Linz kicks out Davenport's legs so he falls to the ground)

LINZ

Come on, Davenport! You should've seen that a mile away.

DAVENPORT

appears physically sore as he stands back up

Easy for you to say, Major. I'm a little groggy. Not used to base bound duty yet.

LINZ

backs up and looks around the room calmly

I love it. There are things to do here. You don't have to sit around on a ship for 18 days at a time, waiting for something to happen.

DAVENPORT

sarcastic, to make a joke

So you didn't like it?

LINZ

rolls her eyes but seems used to the situation

No.

DAVENPORT

Come on, traveling through Space was exciting.

LINZ

Traveling through Space for 6 months is only exciting if the 'space' you are traveling through actually does something exciting. Naturally (mocking) Atlantis, 'the city of the ancient gate builders', was impressive

LINZ(cont'd)

punches Davenport

But every time the Daedalus landed there, nothing happened.

DAVENPORT

I don't know gets Linz off balance and knocks her to the ground; maybe we should count ourselves lucky. I've heard some horror stories from the stargate exploration teams.

LINZ

stands up

And, here at Stargate Command, we'll experience our own adventures. That is, once we join a SG team, and finally go through a stargate. Oh, won't it be nice to travel somewhere in less than 3 weeks.

DAVENPORT

sarcastic again to make tease Linz

but we'll miss all the scenery.

(Linz rolls her eyes and knocks Davenport's feet out from under him and he falls to the ground. A SOLDIER arrives and walks over to them as Linz helps Davenport off the floor where he has once again ended up.)

SOLDIER

salutes

Major Linz, Captain Davenport you have been requested to accompany Dr. McKay on a reconnaissance mission. Report to the jumper bay at 0900 hours. exits

DAVENPORT

Hey, this could be that stargate adventure you were talking about!

(Linz shakes her head, grabs a towel and walks to the locker room, as we:)

FADE OUT.

END OF TEASER

Thank you for reading and please review. It's due on Friday(ya procrastination) so review fast and furious. btw, I posted this in Atlantis because it has McKay in it later.