Okay so I've read through my stories and realized how little effort I've been putting forth so I decided to go through my main ones and redo them! So I hope you all review and tell me if I have improved!

Please enjoy and review KibaXHinata, A survival story

Disclaimer: I Don't Own Naruto At all and never will

She tore through the tall trees, ignoring the pain as the branches clashed along her white skin like a whip leaving small red welts in their wake. Her pearl like eyes were surrounded by veins, as she used her keen eyesight to see through the rain that seemed to pour harder and harder by the second. She cursed at it feeling as though it was attempting to slow her down and give up her pursuit. They had been gone for way too long, she knew something was wrong when they hadn't returned earlier. She felt her heart pound with every passing second because she knew that he would never break his promise to her no matter what. The messenger that she had snatched from Tsunade's hand had said that they had been ambushed, 'where any of them alive?' it had been over 3 hours ago. Her felt her world slow again and she felt the burning sensation flow through her lungs, heart and behind her eyes. His image flashed through her head for the millionth time. 'Please god let him still be alive' she jumped faster than she had ever done before. Her body seemingly no longer attached to her mind. She went from tree branch to tree branch, faster and faster. The little sunlight that was able to make it through the trees reflected onto a ring that encircled her ring finger. Her fists tightened "please" she whispered, only for her voice to be lost in the sound of rain and her heart beat as she pushed herself even farther.

She jumped as fast as her limits would allow, ignoring all the pain that she was inflicting upon herself by doing so. She heard the sounds of metal clanging, and her nose picked up the scent of blood and decay. 'Their still fighting!' Relief immediately swamped ran through her. 'If they were fighting then they were alive, right?' those thought kept her going to the place were everything would be revealed.

She tore through the remaining trees coming across the beaten forms of Naruto and Shikamaru fighting against three tall men that wore the insignia of sound. The relief that had filled her shattered 'where was he??' She thought wildly as her heart slammed against her chest. She let her eyes dart back and forth across the battlefield. She advanced towards Naruto and Shikamaru as they took one of the men down. "Naruto" she said firmly her stutter long gone. Ever since her father's disownment she had asked the aid of her friends to get ride of the weak habit, but only one person truly gave her the confidence that she needed to prove herself to herself.

Naruto knew that voice 'Hinata' he thought as his heart slowed, he kept his eyes away from hers. He felt his stomach twist again. "I'm Sorry" he whispered hoping for it to get drowned out by the rain, knowing that when she found out she would be shattered.

However she heard him loud and clear, she had trained her ears intently after a fight with the sound had left her blind and defenseless. 'NO' she thought as she felt her heart stop and her blood run cold 'it can't be' she looked at him as he turned his head to her, his eyes reluctantly locking with hers "no" she whispered, but she knew it was true the look in his eyes told her it was true. He could never lie to her; he was one of her closest friends.

She was shaking now. However she didn't shake from fear, or even from the immense sadness that was welling up inside her. She shook because the rage she felt was ripping through her body. She turned her unique eyes that he had always said he loved to the two remaining men. Her blood was boiling; he was all she had left! She loved him and he truly loved her! She was his first and Only love! And he was her everything!

She entered her stance and with speed that only the lost poses she shot off at the two remaining men. She twirled as the first mans arms reached for her. She spun up inside of his guard, and smiled as she pumped her chakra right into his hard chest causing his heart to explode. She swiftly glided away from the dead man, avoiding his lifeless body as it fell to the ground, and to the next and last man that she would kill for this pain that was welling up inside her heart. She spun in towards him, however he had watched her before so he was able to counter her attack. She was pushed back; she could feel Naruto and Shikamaru at her back wanting to help but too drained in order to do anything except get in her way.

She forced her face to become blank and calm as she set up for her move 64 points attack (I don't know the names and I am too lazy to look them up) She attacked with all the energy that she had, her every hit meeting its mark. She watched as he fell to the floor, his eyes wide in shock and blood falling from his mouth. She tuned to Naruto and looked at him. He turned and began to walk away from the scene. That was all it took for her to know to follow him.

As they walked they went through the nearby trees and the scene she saw made heave continuously until she vomited in the nearby bushes. She wiped her mouth as she slowly stepped towards the carnage. She saw Chouji's still body that had been pierced with numerous weapons, he laid still and unmoving, Ino laying limp across his torn body her face in his neck as a spike stuck out of her back, she was wrapped around him in a never ending embrace. She finally noticed the salty tears that had begun to fall down her face. She felt her stomach drop and her breath speed up as she saw a bundle of fur that had been white, however due to the substance that now stained it had become drenched in a red blood color. Not even near to its true resemblance and form. She put her hand over her face as she tried to keep her sobs from wrenching out of her throat.

She felt an arm wrap around her shoulder trying to give strength to her. She looked up seeing crystal blue eyes that held pain and regret for her in them. They had been close ever since she finally told him her feelings. He had told her that he cared for her as a sister and that he could never betray his friend who loved her more than anything in this world. That was when she finally saw him. He had always been their but she had never noticed. She grabbed his hand thankful for his support as the scene become less and less bearable. The smell becoming stronger every second, she continued her walk through the hell that she had entered.

She still couldn't believe it. As they had walked Naruto had told her of what had caused this. "Orochimaru" was all he had to say. But she could tell as his eyes went dark and tinted red that Sasuke had been there as well. As she listened she tripped falling into the mud. She turned to see what she had tripped on and instantly froze. Her body went into convulsions. As her body trembled she forced herself up and slowly crawled to the body that was covered by blood.

Naruto looked away from the scene knowing her next reaction. He felt more tears stream down his already soaked cheeks. As he squeezed his eyes closed as her scream finally ripped through the silent night that he would always remember had rained blood.

'NO' was all she could think as she screamed that first time. Her hand slowly moving to that face that was always smiling yet was now covered in blood. She wiped the blood from that face carefully it was so cold, pale. "Dead" she whispered 'NO' he couldn't be! She gripped her stomach 'Not Yet' she grabbed onto him burying her face into the blood soaked shirt. As the sobs that had been trapped in her throat violently ripped free. "KKKKKIIIIIIBBBBBBAAAAA" She screamed in a voice that made those who had been running to the scene and those at the scene who were still alive feel her heart being ripped into pieces.

Wow….That nearly made me cry writing it….I was going to have him live but….I am sooo sad. Ok I don't know if this will be a one-shot or if I will add on more chapters. IF YOU WANT MORE CHAPTERS THAN PLEASE REVIEW AND TELL ME. Or else this is it Kapeesh.

Christina