Hello this is my first story so please give me any of your reviews i dont cae if they are critical actually that would just mean your honest so enjoy my story i'm hopeing to make a long series from this also tell me what you think of my idea fo the basis of this story
Summary: All seems normal in naruto's life until unexpected stangers from the land of the Whirlpool appear and Naruto learns more about the family he never met
I do not own Naruto or any of its characters or ideas
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All was quiet, it seemed like your normal night in Konoha. Except for the three ninja inconspicuously perched outside the gate. They wore all black tactical ninja suits and spoke in hushed tones except for their braggart of a team mate.
"Hey what do you plan on doing are we just going to sit here all night or are we actually going to move?" he questioned with impatience and a little to loudly.
"Rito-kun, your being loud again" said a shy voice
"Well maybe if somebody would actually tells us what we were going to do instead of just having us sit here" accosted Rito
"Rito stop yelling at Mika-chan and quiet down would you, or I'll go over there and make you shut up!" said the young but experienced ninja
"Oh your scary" cried Rito sarcastically
"What was that it almost seemed like you were trying to make fun of me, but that's not possible because I know you would never do something like that. So rephrase that or see how many ways you can feel pain"
"Yes Sir Hitan you majesty" he spat barely keeping all the venom out of his voice
"That's much better"
"T-thank you Hitan-kun" Mika said shyly
I wish I could be brave and talk to Hitan-kun normally but all I ever do is end up looking weak I hope he doesn't think I'm useless I don't think I could live with that she thought to herself
"All right, Rito, Mika, our recon here is done lets head back to camp we will catch up to our target in the morning"
"What?! Why don't we just go grab him and stick him in a room some where, waiting till tomorrow will just be a waste of time" Rito said with no hint of humor in his voice
"Rito-kun!" Mika scolded
"What?"
" Because Rito-kun our objective is to watch him for now, so no funny stuff you hear"
"Ok ok I get you"
They then left without a sound quickly sprinting into the night
It was a bright and sunny morning In Konoha, Naruto thought nothing would surprise him and make him upset not with the chunin exams coming up and his improvements with Sakura (so he thinks) he even had practice with Hinata tomorrow who he had become pretty friendly with, yes today was going to be a normal day. Little did he know he couldn't have been much farther off.
He found himself sitting in Ichiraku's with everything peaceful except for the loudmouth sitting on the other side
"Man, we're never going to find him we've looked all over without a single clue" this guy was tall and weird looking Naruto thought
"Be quiet Rito your disturbing the other customers" said the guy in the black cloak with a strait sword at his side "anyway my dad told me he has blond hair blue eyes" now he had Naruto's attention "and wears an orange jumpsuit, geez, you think he would be easy to find"
Why are they looking for me I better keep listening and find out
"Well that guy down there has blond hair and blue eyes Hitan-kun" adding Mika gently
Oh shit
"Well well, what a surprise lets jump him Hitan"
"Rito calm down I'm sure we can be civil he will understand" said Hitan just when Naruto launched at him with a lot of shadow clones
"Well I see you aren't completely unskilled but cant we try to talk this out"
"Why should I and what do you want from me!" barked naruto venomously
Naruto sent in his shadow clones and surrounded Hitan. Hitan's eyes turned from green to blue and formed into three armed bladed spirals that touch at each side of his eyes
"No more fooling around" he said with some conviction
Before Naruto could even speak Hitan became a blur and within a spilt second Naruto was on the ground embarrassed with all his shadow clones dispelled
"It didn't have to be this way you know I did try to talk this out with you"
"Ha ha man you should have listened to Hitan, now you just had your ass kicked" Rito snickered
"Shut up, anyway the assholes name is Rito and this cute kunoichi is our team medic Mikan" she blushed at the compliment
"Wait what's your name?" Naruto said still embarrassed from his beating and trying to change the subject
"Oh sorry let me say this again my name is Hitan, Hitan Uzumaki the team captain, the tall one is Rito Toshita he is our weapons specialist" this was the guy that was being loud earlier he was taller than Hitan he had light brown hair and was wearing a loose gray coat and dark blue pants "and this girl here is Mikan Itsuchi our team medic" This girl was petite and tan with long black hair she wore her hiate around her right bicep and had on a dark blue shirt and tight black shorts, He thought she might be even be prettier than Sakura! Until a thought brought him out of his stupor.
"Wait, wait a second …….did you say Uzumaki" Naruto questioned looking anxious
"Yes nice to meet you Naruto, I'm your cousin from the land of the whirlpool and these two are my team we are here to protect you "
"I didn't think I had any family, are there other Uzumaki's?"
"Yes we are the strongest clan of the whirlpool feared by ninja across all countries the noble Uzumaki clan"
"Then if there are others do you know who my parents were?"
"I'm sorry, that just something I don't have the authority to tell you, well anyway we will talk more about this away from prying eyes do you think we could go to your home to talk Naruto?"
Hinata was walking down the street in the market district after team practice hoping to get a look at Konohas knucklehead ninja before she went home
I hope a get to see naruto today, well we do have practice together tomorrow so that's good too but I have to get stronger so Naruto will see that I can be strong and not just shy
Just as she was finishing her thought she saw Naruto walking down the street with three unusual ninja in tow she quickly hid herself in an adjacent alleyway even though she had gotten up the courage to talk with Naruto recently.
I wonder who they are I haven't ever seen them around Konoha before are they ninja from another village?
Just as she was finishing her thought they had arrived right next to her
She let out a squeak of surprise just as Naruto noticed her.
"Oh hi Hinata-chan"
"Hello Naruto-kun"
"Who is this Naruto, could this be your girlfriend perhaps?" said Hitan adding an air of humor
Hinata blushed a deep crimson at being called Naruto's girlfriend something that did not go unnoticed by Mikan. Naruto also looked quite embarrassed
"N-no she is just a friend of mine" he barley stuttered out
"Oh that's right Hinata meet my cousin Hitan Uzumaki and his friends"
"Hello its nice to meet one of Naruto's friends this guy here" pointing to Rito "is Rito Toshita I have the unfortunate title of being his best friend"
"Hey what's that supposed to mean, everybody loves me isn't that right Mikan-chan?"
"W-well Rito-kun I don't know about that" she said
He was speechless and looked at Mikan pouting, Hinata just laughed
"I thought I could count on you Mika-chan" he said as though he were about to cry
" Well where was I oh yeah, and this girl here is our beautiful medic nin Mikan Itsuchi"
She again blushed at his offhanded compliment
"Thank you Hitan-kun nice to meet you Hinata-chan"
"Nice to meet you Mikan-san"
Hinata found something awfully familiar in Mikan's demeanor but couldn't quite put her mind on what it was, this girl seemed to be acting pretty strangely. She looked at Hitan it seemed with almost pure admiration she had seen that look before in herself for none other than Naruto, yes it was pure affection she saw in this girls eyes
I will have to talk to her later we seem to have a lot in common maybe together we can find a way to confess to the ones we care about to finally tell them what they truly mean to us
"Well than Hinata would you like to come to my house with us?"
Naruto said interrupting Hinata's thought
"Oh sure Naruto-kun I would like that, I wouldn't be imposing would I?"
"Of course not Hinata-chan you are always welcome at my house"
That comment filled her with warmth made her feel deeply for him at that moment
"Thank you Naruto-kun that really does mean a lot to me"
"Alright everyone lets head out, lead the way Naruto" said Hitan
They arrived into an unexpected environment, the apartment was small but no means unnecessarily messy, with a small bedroom, an economically sized living room, and a small bathroom, it was quite comfortable.
"Not bad Naruto I would have expected worse" said Hitan
Rito huffed displeasure "You call this a home jeez, just my closet back in Whirlpool is bigger than this"
Quickly receiving a crack on the back of the head from Hitan
"Cant you at least try to be nice I guess you want to sleep outside again, anyway shut up or I'll make you walk back to Whirlpool with weights on"
"That doesn't sound so bad"
"My weights"
Rito did shut up knowing full well how heavy Hitan's weights were and wanting no part in wearing them
"Okay I get you Hitan" Hitan looked victorious
Hinata found Naruto's apartment comfortable and cozy not at all like the Hyuuga clan house it felt like coming home
Home
Just the thought of living with Naruto with this as their home made her feel giddy
"Alright now that we're here, I want all this explained." said Naruto
"Okay Naruto I was sent here by my father who told me to find his sisters son and to protect him, he told me that sooner or later some very bad people are going to come after you so we are here to protect you from any threats that may arise."
"Your dad's sister was my mom?" said Naruto
"Yes, making me your cousin like I said before"
"What was she like?" asked Naruto with pain in his voice that was easy to detect and that greatly bothered Hinata
"From what I heard she was a very kind person and loved you very much" Hitan knew all to well how it felt to not have a mother, to not know the very person that gave you life in this world it did bother him but he did not lose his composure
"Thanks, that's something that I really needed to hear" it seemed as though he were of tears
Hinata walked across the room and sat next to Naruto on the couch and put her arms around him
"P-please don't cry Naruto-kun, please don't cry" she was now almost crying as well, Mikan looked on at them with jealousy, she sure she wished could put her arms around Hitan, she blushed as soon as she realized what she had just thought
"I don't know If I can see you like this anymore"
"I'm sorry Hinata-chan" he said returning her embrace "Please, I don't want to see you cry over me" At this Hitan motioned for Rito and Mikan to follow him into the bedroom
"As long as you aren't crying Naruto"
They both weren't crying anymore and pulled away from each other then they noticed what had happened and both of them blushed furiously
"T-thanks Hinata I didn't really think anyone took the time to care, I really appreciate it"
"Your welcome Naruto, if you ever need someone to talk to I'll always have some time"
At this Hinata left with a wave and Hitan and the others were standing with Naruto in the living room
"So Naruto, I guess its time to take our leave be ready early in the morning tomorrow" said Hitan
"Huh, why?" questioned Naruto
"Because tomorrow its time to start your training of course"
"But I have practice with my team"
"That's okay you can bring them along as well" With that he started to leave with Rito and Mikan and as he was exiting out the door he added under his breath
"Your all going to need it"