This is my very first time writing a fanfiction, so please be gentle with criticism. I've been told I'm fairly decent at writing, so I decided to try my hand at a Bionicle fanfiction. Characters will probably be OOC. I'm trying though. Also, I might not put all the six in here, just to give me some elbow room. Or I might put seven. I never start off easy, do I?
I give credit to an author on Deviantart who's name escapes me. That's where I got some ideas from. If I find who they are, I will credit them.
Anyways, please enjoy. (This is a self-insert if you hadn't figured it out already)
When I was younger, my biggest wish was always to visit another world. I would wish on stars, birthday cakes, New Years, everything. As I got older, I stopped wishing as much. But the flame of hope was always burning. The hope that I would meet some of my favourite characters, from the world of Bionicle.
Present day...
I threw myself onto the couch, put my feet up, and turned on the first of the Lord of the Rings trilogy. It was bound to be a good night. Pizza, So Delicious "ice cream", LOTR, and no parents to tell me what to do. I was amazed that they had actually let me stay home alone for an entire week. Just two years ago they would have been trying to get my siblings to stay with me. I guess now that I was sixteen, they decided to let me loose a bit. It was only a week after all. I shoveled a large scoop of "ice cream" into my mouth, not taking my eyes off of the screen. A sudden thunk from the laundry room made me tear my eyes away from the screen. I pressed stop, and the screen went black. I put down my bowl, and tossed off my fuzzy blanket. I slowly walked over to my laundry room, where voices were coming from. My blood turned to ice. We didn't have a gun, or anything I could defend myself with. The baseball bat was upstairs, and the stairs were in view of the laundry room. I stood frozen with fear, as the people in the laundry room supposedly got their bearings. I heard the door open, but before the supposed burglars came out, everything went black.
"What is this creature?" I felt someone, or something poke my arm.
"It is not like anything I have seen," the voice was cold, calculating almost.
"I hope they didn't hit their head too badly," the third voice was a female, thank goodness. At least I have one ally in this group of males.
Then I realized. Group of males? Did I just faint in front of a group of guys? Of all the stupid things to do...now I look like an idiot! Can this day get any worse!?
"Kopaka! Come try this cold-icy treat!" Another voice chimed in.
Cold-icy treat...oh no! That's the last straw!
With superhuman strength, I opened my eyes, and pushed myself off of the ground. What I saw made me want to pass out all over again.
I attempted treespeak. And it was pretty bad. XD Just a short chapter for today. I'll try to get a longer one next time. This is just me testing the waters, so to speak. I hope you enjoyed! If you have time, drop a comment. I would love to hear (gentle) feedback. Thanks for reading! :)