"ESTELLE!!" The young mage screamed as she came running towards her friend."AHHHH!" She yelled as she jumped in front of splattered every where "RITA!" They screamed in horror. Estelle was in shock her best friend had just taken a fatal hit fir her right in front of her.....but that wasn't the end of their pain. "Dammit!" Yuri shouted in anger as he charged toward Zagi. " Hahahahaha" Zagi laked evilly as he took another stab at Rita, then throwing her to the ground in her own puddle of blood. Then...."SHANK!" Rita looked over to see Yuri kill Zagi. "Rita it's alright. Your going going to be fine. I will not let you die. I promise." Estelle said as she held Rita in her arms and started to cry. "Good-bye" Rita said as she started to cry. "Rita don't talk like that i will make sure that you don't die even if it kills me..." Estelle said confidently as she started to heal Rita's wounds. " HEY GUY'S WHAT DID WE MISS??!!" Karol said in a happy voice while entering with Raven. " hey wait wheres Rit....." Raven began to say but stopped Estelle healing Rita's die body in her arms. " Wh...What hap..hapenned?" stuttered Raven as he started to cry. " Rita..... Rita!! Come on Rita fight.. Fight!!" Karol said as he started balling. "I..I'm ss...sorry" were the last words that left Rita's mouth before blacking out.. " how could this happen" Estelle said while in hysterics hugging Rita
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HaHa ya i know it sucks and its short but its my first and im only 13. So please review tell me how i did and what I should change. ^_^