Well. If you're wondering what happened to a few of the chapters, skip to the bottom. If you're new, read this. This is a Fanfic telling what happened in the world of Hetalia from 4000 B.C.E. to 750 B.C.E. Now of course it's not official of Canon, I'm writing this to clear my mind. So Please Review. Oh, and Upper Nile is Egypt, Jomon is Japan, Hebei is China, and Sumer is Iraq.
Year: 4000 B.C.E.
The sun seemed endless, beating down endless waves of heat against the defenseless inhabitants of the world. In the distance, there were a few people moving, but they seemed to disappear in the horizon perhaps. The few crops that could be grown dried out instantly, and water seemed scarce. There seemed to be little hope in the horizon, but defying the rules of earth, was a small hut, sticking out in the middle of nowhere.
It seemed to challenge nature. The sunlight beat down on it with all the force nature could muster, but the hut remained. But the sunlight had no malice, but it was as if the sun warned the hut to return, as the pile of rubble it once was, before it was too late. What would be too late?
The small hut was packed like hell. It was burning, the heat unbearable. The hut was about an average modern day bathroom. But it as filled with bickering, and disputes, just as strong as those in the U.N.
"No, I want the Nile!" There was a loud bang.
"You're just choosing it cause it's close!"
"Well, I think-"
"Noone cares!" The four young nations, all unnamed, were arguing, once again.
Their little home in the Sahara had turned into a desolate wasteland of sand and heat. What once was beautiful grassland filled with herds of animals, was destroyed by human carelessness. What was survival for the four countries was slash and burn and destruction for the very force of earth.
"You people are so immature aru." A young boy with his black hair took it upon himself to stop the pointless bickering. "I am the oldest, allow me to divide it aru!" He took the map, and wrote the words CHINA all over it. Looking all to pleased with himself, he looked back at the others and happily said; "There, I take all."
"YOU CAN'T TAKE EVERYTHING! AND SINCE WHEN WAS YOUR NAME CHINA!" The third nation yelled out. He stood up, and immediately, his brown shaggy hair exploded from his crown. A third nation, a young girl, with long black hair nodded in agreement.
"Well, that's why I saved a little reservation here." The black ponytailed boy pointed to a small set of islands, with Reservation written on them.
"The fourth Nation, A quiet young boy who usually didn't interact with others, nodded. I agree with him."
"Quiet!" Sumeria yelled. "Girl! You have anything to say?"
She raised her head. "Well-"
"Okay, time's up! I, will decide. Girl!"
"Yes?"
"You get the Upper Nile!"
Upper Nile looked at the map with a confused look. "Isn't that the southern-" She was immediately interrupted.
"Ponytail dude!"
"Aru?"
"You get the yellow river."
"You better not make a name for my people based on my river name." Hebei knew his words were falling on deaf ears.
Upper Nile turned her head away from Hebei, smiling innocently.
"Quiet asian dude!"
The quiet asian nation turned his head up.
"Eh, I'm tired. You get those islands."
Jomon Nodded.
"I'll take the two rivers, twice as good!" Sumer yelled.
"Twice as much flooding." Upper Nile giggled.
Sumeria blushed. The turned his head away not to meet her head. "Let's go. Upper Nile, you go with me, Hebei goes with Jomon. Understand?"
Everyone looked content for the fact that their beginning had been handled by a loud boy who obviously knew nothing of the areas that he picked.
And suddenly, everyone quickly departed the small cramped hut. The future looked bleak, with the only reason to keep going on was that staying where they were seemed even bleaker.
If you're wondering what happened to a few of the Chapters, it's that I've seriously edited a few of them. Although some of them seemed well written, the ones I ENJOYED writing, there were a few others, that I was forced to drag on, and even rolled my eyes reading over. And so I've removed a few chapters. Others, I've completely revamped. And a few, I just added a little more detail, like this one. Except the fact that I removed the entire ending. So be it. If you want to hate, go for it. I rarely take offense.
