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Prologue

The silvery pool of primordial ooze swirled in its tiny crater.
This is the land of the not yet there, the unfulfilled
potential, the cradle of life. Unfortunately this certain pool
contains something worse than life. It will still play a vital role
in the story of life, just a darker and more evil one.
The ooze looked at the world and was disgusted, so many stupid lives about to pop into existence.
The ooze was angry - well, as angry as oozes can get. For a small puddle of not much it was highly intelligent.

Who knows what it will evolve into.

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