A little opinion on self insertion fics..By:demon ashura
Here's the general plot of many selt-insertion fics. I wrote it maily as humor, and used Outlaw Star/Jim as an example. o_o;
Rated: Fiction T - English - Humor - Words: 405 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 6/17/2001 - id: 321454
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Self-insertion opinion
by: Ashura
written: 6/17/01
disclaimer: I don't own Outlaw Star, But I do own Lisa. o_o
notes: .......I mostly hate self insertion fics. So I wrote the basic concept of one. O_o; (It's stupid on purpose, in other words)
One day Lisa was laying on her bed, watching Outlaw Star on her huge, big screen TV. She was dreaming about how hot Jim was, and how she'd just love to &$%^ with him. While she was dreaming about Jim, on her way to the overly large walk-in closet, she started to wish Jim was real. Then she tripped on a cord that suddenly came out of nowhere and fell into the TV.
When she woke up she was in the Outlaw Star! And Gene, Melfina, Aisha, Suzuka, and Jim were watching over her. Since she had giant 36DD boobs, Jim fell instantly in love with her. Later, in Jim's bedroom, Jim and Lisa confessed their love for each other. So, then after one night of wild,hot,explicit,steamy sex, Jim & Lisa decided to get married and they did.
Meanwhile at Lisa's housemansion, her friend Em came over. Em somehow got into Lisa's room, and she looked at the TV and saw Lisa and Jim @$ing. Of course no one else in the whole world saw that version of Outlaw Star, only Em. Because it was on Lisa's TV. Em got really jealous that Lisa & Jim were married and 'working on children', so she jumped into the TV somehow and made Jim & Lisa stop *!%#ing. Lisa just paid Em a kajillion dollars to go away, because she was so very incredibly rich, so Em went away & Lisa and Jim lived happily ever after and Lisa never got pregnant because she & Jim were 'careful' and because she didn't want to, and then they both lived incredibly happily for the rest of their lives.
Fin
AN: See? I could swear on the holy cheese that almost every frickin' SI fic I've ever read (whether it's outlaw star or ANYTHING) had that general plot (maybe not the sex-y-ish parts, but you get the drift) There's only one good SI I've ever read, and that was 'A ripple in time' by Gokou_chan, so go read it or I'll feed you to Hannibal Lecter! @\/o *twitches*
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