heys guys,
i was sitting at home one day being bored but in a creative mood, so i wrote a poem. the only thing is that it doesn't rhyme, but thats how i like writing poems; freely writen. anyways, then i was sitting in Sose with nothing to do and wrote another one. i then thought, hey, i should put these on fanfic and see what other people think!
so here i am, with my newest edition to my collection of things of fanfiction. i hope you enjoy of the poems i put up, and please tell me what you think even if it is to make a suggestion on how to make them better, because it really does help and i do appreciate it.
i will put who's point of view it is if i think its really necessary, but this one should be pretty obvious.
Brother,
Where are you?
Where have you been all this time?
I need you here by my side,
To guide me through life
To pick me up when I fall
And set me back on my feet.
I need you, I love you
But this love is changing.
Everything you have done,
To our family, to yourself, to me
This love is changing……
You went away, when I needed you most.
You never came back,
You never said sorry
It's changing……
All my childhood, I always looked up to you,
I always loved you, wanted you there
I still do.
But the things you have done,
Are changing me inside.
This love is changing, into something dark.
Where are you, I need your help.
I can't take this anymore
Why do I feel this way?
Why do I feel so much hate?
Is this what you want? For me to hate you?
Brother, I need your help
Help me stop this hate that grows every day,
That takes away all my love.
I don't want to hate, but I can't help it.
Brother, where are you?
Brother, I need you here.
Brother please, save me.
so there you are, the first one of the many that are to follow.
please review and tell me whether you think its good or bad, or anything you wish to suggest.
thanks, BlueBB