Yeah, I know I still have 2 stories I haven't finished yet but I need to get this down before it slips away. (Hey, I like the sound of that!)
Title is from a good movie so go see it.
Swimming, musicalvoices and bright, flashing lights were the first things that Danny noticed.His limbs felt heavy and his head hurt like a bitch. When he opened his eyes everthing was dark except for the steady flashes and a soft green glow to his left. He was aware of a humming sound and it took him several minutes to place it: he was in a moving car, the back seat to be specific. Turning his head only sent lighting racing through his skull and he groaned.
"Don't worry, son. I'll get you to the hospital and you'll be fine in no time," came a voice from the front seat. Son? My parents are dead, right? What hospital? What's going on?
"Cop it star," no that wasn't right,
"What is it, son?"
"Hop to mar," no that wasn't right either.
"Are you feeling any better?
Danny was now aware ofa pattering sound and a steadythump.
"Stop the car!" yeah, that sounds right.
"Sorry, son. I cant' do that. You're very sick, you need some serious help. And I intended to do just that."
It was rain on the roof of the car and the windshield wipers doing their job.
"Wheres yous taking me?" damn, my head hurts.
"Smithsgrove Sanitarium. "
"I'm not crazy," sounds better.
"Son, you don't even recognize me! You. Need. Help."
"What are you talking about?" is HE crazy?
I'm getting you some help, then you're coming home with me to Maine.
"I don't know what you're talking about," he is crazy.
The car slowed and then finally stopped. All during the conversation Danny had been getting ready for his chance to escape. The man got out of the front seat and opened the back drivers side door. Danny felt rain hit his face and twisted in the seat, facing his abducter.
"I'm not going anywhere with you, ya freak!"
You people know what to do so do it.
I'm waiting for 2 reviews (1 for every story I haven't finished) before i post the next chapter.
So go do it. Now.