As I was asked, this is the translation of my drabble A kiss goodbye. 100 words, in both English and French.
(Original was written for 'Nuit du FoF' over the theme 'Traitor')
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Long kiss goodbye
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A moment in eternity, a second getting lost. Just, lips to lips.
Jesus knows what it means, as well as Judas does.
It's treason, goodbye.
Jesus fights time to make the moment longer, when it'll be over, there will be nothing left but regrets, pain, guilt. Judas will have to live with this. Die with this. And before his Father, what will become of him ? He closes eyes half a second, and finally ends the kiss. When he can see again, Judas' eyes say I'm traitor, don't forgive me.
Jesus' say I love you and I will love you.
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If some sentences or expressions are just too weird just tell me, my English's far from perfect.
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