My first story ever any tips would be nice for improvement.
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The year is 2987 the earth is at a turning point humanity is no longer stable 7 solar super powers have emerged. The MSE also known as the Mexican Solar Empire the United Solar States of America and the Xarians which used to be the Mongolian Replublic there are a few more such as European confederacy the SFF the Democratic peoples replublic which was formerly known as south america lastly the Imperial asian empire. world war 4 ended with these new solar powers there are currently 15 colonised solar systems. Humanity has yet to find alien life we simply still war and kill each other there are also solar cities. Humans were
Still corrupt at this point we needed a iron hand to lead us or we would simply war ourselves extinct my grandfather said that was an old earth saying.
Humanity was doomed I thought but this is my story me a citizen of the USSA. I was in the army the war of 4 we called it because over 4 trillion humans died I saw the corruption of wars what we did to each other should never be allowed my name is Damien Angelo Diazamo Castroza the 27th. I couldn't hate humanity more than I ever did now so this is my story my life my love my eventual death and it will continue with my children this is solar warz. Chapter 1 Organization
At the capital of the ussa in aplha centari the 6 solar empires argue. The SFF continues to attack the Imperial asian empire and the european confederacy ceases to defend us argued empress shigumi we demand action from the solar council or war will be forced on the European confederacy and SFF. War is unacceptable stated president Adrian we cant keep warring each other if we do were only killing civilians if we continue we can expect minor rebellions. Minor ha laughed dictator Firenzique they only start small if not handled delicately we can expect the masses to arm themselves against us we don't need rebellions they only cause trouble and are written down by the dialects ptew (spits on the ground) the dialects want a universal order of peace and wisdom just like the old extinct zamon monks culture hahaha (every1 laughs in unison) with the masses at peace we control them when there angry we expect riots similar to the planet zavian city riots during are virus testing feh so we just chip em and put martial law plus we stoped contact with outside planets and told the poplulace that their families died from a SFF attack haha. Civilians their all the same cattle. just work and bring us the money. soon are plan will be complete universal order will fail and the masses will be are slaves. Mwahahaha cheers men for the organization hoora!
Chap 1 Solar Freedom Fighterz
The solar empires bastards and traitors that's what they are. They were really criminals how do I know because im the leader of the SFF the Solar Freedom Fighterz. We fight for the freewill of humanity my ancestors created the organization but we split from them and became the SFF. The organization stands for caccr which mean conquer assimilate cattle control and rule. it was meant to bring peace during the aftermath and chaos of world war 3 but they became corrupt and assassinated the members who opposed their ideals. The ancestor who opposed their ideals directly was Laura Angelo Diazamo Castroza the 16th she believed that the organization should disband since peace was achieved but they assassinated all who agreed with her and started the war of 4. Successfully overthrowing the world governments and starting the solar empires. My age is 56 years old there will be only 1 heir left my teenage son who is currently 17 Miguel I just hope he will be ready to lead soon. I fear my death is near. Our ancestors hid among the people who were only slightly brainwashed and still had will power. We faked are deaths during the zadric city explosion we slowly recruited the people and started the SFF. Over the centuries we grew powerful we lost nearly half of are members during the war of 4 how ever we will fight back for humanity because we miss the freedom are ancestors had and we want that freedom for future genartions of children our motto freewill free lives free children free knowledge freedom for all! We are the solar freedom fighterz the generations of families who want there future children free and wish to unite humanity.
General Diazamo theirs a strange craft in caccr territory we believe its non human in origin should we intercept target before the enemy and bring it here. Hmmm if theirs a chance for new allies we need them how sure are you that the craft does not have human origin 87.4 percent sure the other percent means trap right yes general the odds are decent ok go after it but if it is a trap we cant be found so. We understand stand sir self destruct on capture for the SFF (a cheer could be heard by 30 other SFF soldiers for freewill for free lives for a free humanity) good get ready and get out we got limited time in the enemies solar space before they know its us so freedom speed soldier. yes sir! 13 minutes later at the scene of the strange craft SFF soldiers remember no response then target terminated understand yes captain. Upon reaching the target they attempt contact you are in dangerous solar territory come with us for fuel supplies and rest. Suddenly a garbled transmission came through if this a trick expect war. Understood come with us. While The SFF forces departed rather quickly the solar empires failed to capture the strange craft meanwhile at caccr head quarters. We failed to capture the strange craft it left with SFF forces before we could intercept it damn(the leaders said in unison except the ec leader said bollocks)meanwhile at planet vorian in the outer solar systems after a wait time of 13 minutes a message came through. General Diazamo we have arrived. Understood clearance level 5 entry entitled use entrance 5S now we have to have a meeting with this new arrival yes Diazamo. Bring translator Givan Acevado along with scientist Joel Gomez understood sir. We may have found a way to just free humanity Sirene whos a cute little wolf you are yes you are (pets wolf). At caccr headquarters bring in the entertainment yes my lords haha what do you have planed Shigumi well remember planet zavian were gonna put mass murder on tonights entertainment. Good1 Shigumi we should turn on the sky screen I do enjoy seeing the looks on the populations faces when we show them their families are alive then erase their memories and do it again it's a riot get it riot yes I do lord Adrian its good to be in charge I'm such a evil sadistic bastard and its great to be me. Shigumi yes lord bring me my plate of extinct fried baby shrimp yes lord.
Chapter 2 the lost
The lost coming soon to a fan fiction site near you. Most corny joke ever.