Yo, what's up, this is M.W. and this is my first story so please tell me what i need to improve in with my story. Also give me some ideas for the first chapter. Okay just to give you all a hands up this story you all are about to read will be short, while of course it will it a prologue. Enjoy!
The Story of Element Zero
Prologue
I don't know how long it's been since I was able to use my eyes.
This icy prison they put me in. I want to get out of it now.
It's been so long since I was able to hear, to smell, to breathe, to touch.
To hear the explosions of the parts of this hell hole, the screams of the guards that kept me here, and the roar of the attacker.
The smell of the dead victims' blood makes me angry for not being the one to cause it.
My first breath for so long, being frozen in this cell, I quickly enjoy the feeling of using my lungs.
After just waking up I crave the feeling to touch anything. To touch the floor outside of my cell, to touch of warm blood after a kill, to touch the metal of a weapon, to touch a piece of cloth of any type, and … the touch a of a love one.
That's why I want to get out now! Let me out now…click
The door in front of me finally opens.
When the door got completely open the light from the outside went right into my eyes. I had to adjust to the light, which only took a few seconds, after I started to take my first steps to freedom out of my cell and this hell hole.
I don't know remember the name my parents gave me the only name I remember is the name Cerberus gave me, they call me Element Zero.
End
Until Next Time
Okay what I need help with right now is choosing a for my OC character, so I will put up a poll with names that I'm thinking of calling him. So the best votes wins. I will be working on the next chapter and it will be awesome. The minds the limit with me.