I don't own Kingdom Hearts (duh)
It was around dusk when it happened. The city streets were paved with people, but no one seemed to notice the strange cloaked figure slinking around quickly. My heart told me that it was my job to follow him and find out what he was up to. I threw caution to the wind as I let go of my mother's hand. She yelled after me but I didn't listen. It was my time to shine.
I had always followed orders and had always stayed with my mom wherever we went and now it seemed like my destiny to chase the strange man or woman under that black cloak. My heart was filled with excitement as I continued. He looked at my face and pushed his way through the crowd aggressively as if he was frightened of me. I wasn't that ugly. I had bright bluish-grayish eyes and light brown hair that went down to my shoulders. My glasses were the same color of my hair and were Constantly sliding down.
"Joanna!" my mother cried. Tears came to my eyes as I heard this but I continued running anyway.
A sudden shriek blasted out of the crowd and everyone started running in the opposite direction that I was going. A small black monster attacked a man of about thirty years. He fell instantly and a heart shaped object flew out of him. It morphed into another little monster! I turned away so I wouldn't see anymore. The cloaked stranger was running faster than before and it was hard to keep up.
The figure stopped at a large color screen. I looked on with much interest. He took out a large black staff and yelled to the heavens, his coarse voice ripping through the air like a knife through soft butter.
"SHOW ME THE KEYHOLE!!!"
With a flash of white light a large keyhole appeared. It covered the screen but nothing could be seen on the other side. My heart almost exploded with a mixture of fear and excitement. He lowered the staff and muttered a few words. It began to sparkle with the essence of darkness and was about to let loose a beam of energy straight into the keyhole. I gasped and something in me snapped. Everything inside of me was yelling at me, telling me I had to stop him. I ran out and yelled, hoping to surprise him. He failed to notice for he was too busy with his work. I quickly grasped his arm and began to tug ferociously. He roared and it sounded like a thousand bats screeching. He grabbed my throat and whisked me away. All I could hear was his insane laughing. I hit the ground and ran back up to him. I tugged his cloak and yelled. He sneered and swat me with his staff. When it came into contact with my skin, the sheer darkness of its core burned through my soul. I remained where I was and continued to take the evil magic. Tears of pain formed in my eyes but I held strong, for I could not let this lunatic have his way.
A blast of flames seemed to appear from the staff of a little animal that was standing on two legs. It scorched the back of the criminal. The evil man threw me very hard and while I was sailing through the air I screamed bloody murder. It was what most thirteen year olds would do in this situation. As I braced myself for impact with the ground, something caught me. I opened my eyes cautiously and looked at my savior.
"Gawrsh, are you okay?" A giant black dog thing asked.
I bit my lip and a sudden explosion knocked me out of its arms. We both went flying but thanks to my rescuer I didn't take much damage.
I looked up and saw two other figures running towards me. The little one resembled a white duck, and the taller one was definitely human and had a large key in his hand.
A key to open the keyhole? I asked myself. There was no time to ask the boy, because the cloaked monster had noticed them and was approaching. I ducked out of the way of his horrible staff. I bounded toward the keyhole to get away from the fight. Nothing was more exciting than this. I watched the three "heroes" fight the madman and his staff. The cloaked figure's hood flew off, and I realized this "he" was a "she". I couldn't tell what her hair color was like because it was hidden by another cloak with two horns. I chortled when I thought about the outfit underneath.
The battle went on, both sides never showing signs of giving in. I looked at a large electric clock nearby. It had only been two minuets. I hid behind a fountain and watched with pleasure.
Suddenly the woman lifted her staff high and yelled a few words in another language. Pools of darkness surrounded the heroes and more of the evil heart-eating monsters were back!!!
The boy with the key fought strong, but he seemed to be losing. He was too busy fighting one monster that he didn't see one behind him. It was in a posture I had seen before with the man in his thirties...
"Behind you!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. He turned just in time to stop the monster. I sighed with relief for everyone was safe.
My yell had brought up the attention of the insane woman. She glared at me furiously and jumped up. She swooped like a hawk and landed in front of me. "You are really getting on my nerves. First you follow me, then you stop me from filling the world of heartless, then you save the key bearer. Ugh, you know too much. I'll just have to end it won't I?" Her ugly thin lips curved into a smile.
"Leave her alone!" The key boy said.
The lady roared and shot a blast of green light from her staff at me. It soaked all of the energy from my body. I started breathing in short gasps.
The woman disappeared into a hole of darkness that appeared out of thin air. She laughed triumphantly as she slipped through the black portal. I sighed deeply and looked at the boy and his comrades. He held up his key and a tiny beam of white light flushed out of it. When the light hit the colored screen, the keyhole flashed white and broke into a millions pieces of black glass. My heart told me I was safe, but my body was screaming in pain from the blow. I let out a sudden gasp and the boy and his partners came rushing towards me.
"Are you okay?" He asked. His body loomed over me.
I swallowed and muttered "Yea, just peachy."
I weakly began to pull myself up. Pain flowed through my veins.
The boy nudged the white duck creature, and it pulled out a jar filled with green liquid. He handed it to me with a sneer on his face. I slowly and cautiously took the strange bottle.
"Drink that and you'll feel better," The boy assured me.
"Who are you, and why do you have a giant key?" I asked abruptly.
"My name is Sora, and these are my friends Donald and Goofy." The boy pointed to the creatures. "I've got the key blade, and I've been using it to destroy heartless and seal worlds."
"Do you mean the heart-monster things?"
"Umm...yea, those. The heartless steal people's hearts to create even more. Few people can truly control them. I only know maleficent, but there's bound to be others."
I looked at the night sky. The bright lights of the city made it impossible to see any of the stars. The heartless were out on the loose, and by now they must have stolen so many hearts...
I went to look at Sora, but he, goofy, and Donald were gone. I opened the jar and slowly devoured the green substance. After a brief second, my body felt normal again. All of the pain had flown out of me. I heard a loud noise and saw a brightly colored spaceship fly away quickly. They were all aliens? I shook my head in confusion. I was all alone now, and fear was filling up my heart. If the heartless came, I would be a goner. I looked around and walked toward the place where the lady Maleficent had disappeared.
My body froze, and reality seemed to twist away from me. The entire earth was bending out of shape. It twisted and swirled and right before it disappeared completely it reappeared, but with a different setting. My eyes widened as I looked around in complete awe. My breathing became quick again and I forced myself to take a step forward. Only one thought flashed in my mind.
"Whoa."
Did you like my story? Please review!! I need to know what needs improvement. Please also help me out by telling me what should happen because I'm totally improvising.
It was around dusk when it happened. The city streets were paved with people, but no one seemed to notice the strange cloaked figure slinking around quickly. My heart told me that it was my job to follow him and find out what he was up to. I threw caution to the wind as I let go of my mother's hand. She yelled after me but I didn't listen. It was my time to shine.
I had always followed orders and had always stayed with my mom wherever we went and now it seemed like my destiny to chase the strange man or woman under that black cloak. My heart was filled with excitement as I continued. He looked at my face and pushed his way through the crowd aggressively as if he was frightened of me. I wasn't that ugly. I had bright bluish-grayish eyes and light brown hair that went down to my shoulders. My glasses were the same color of my hair and were Constantly sliding down.
"Joanna!" my mother cried. Tears came to my eyes as I heard this but I continued running anyway.
A sudden shriek blasted out of the crowd and everyone started running in the opposite direction that I was going. A small black monster attacked a man of about thirty years. He fell instantly and a heart shaped object flew out of him. It morphed into another little monster! I turned away so I wouldn't see anymore. The cloaked stranger was running faster than before and it was hard to keep up.
The figure stopped at a large color screen. I looked on with much interest. He took out a large black staff and yelled to the heavens, his coarse voice ripping through the air like a knife through soft butter.
"SHOW ME THE KEYHOLE!!!"
With a flash of white light a large keyhole appeared. It covered the screen but nothing could be seen on the other side. My heart almost exploded with a mixture of fear and excitement. He lowered the staff and muttered a few words. It began to sparkle with the essence of darkness and was about to let loose a beam of energy straight into the keyhole. I gasped and something in me snapped. Everything inside of me was yelling at me, telling me I had to stop him. I ran out and yelled, hoping to surprise him. He failed to notice for he was too busy with his work. I quickly grasped his arm and began to tug ferociously. He roared and it sounded like a thousand bats screeching. He grabbed my throat and whisked me away. All I could hear was his insane laughing. I hit the ground and ran back up to him. I tugged his cloak and yelled. He sneered and swat me with his staff. When it came into contact with my skin, the sheer darkness of its core burned through my soul. I remained where I was and continued to take the evil magic. Tears of pain formed in my eyes but I held strong, for I could not let this lunatic have his way.
A blast of flames seemed to appear from the staff of a little animal that was standing on two legs. It scorched the back of the criminal. The evil man threw me very hard and while I was sailing through the air I screamed bloody murder. It was what most thirteen year olds would do in this situation. As I braced myself for impact with the ground, something caught me. I opened my eyes cautiously and looked at my savior.
"Gawrsh, are you okay?" A giant black dog thing asked.
I bit my lip and a sudden explosion knocked me out of its arms. We both went flying but thanks to my rescuer I didn't take much damage.
I looked up and saw two other figures running towards me. The little one resembled a white duck, and the taller one was definitely human and had a large key in his hand.
A key to open the keyhole? I asked myself. There was no time to ask the boy, because the cloaked monster had noticed them and was approaching. I ducked out of the way of his horrible staff. I bounded toward the keyhole to get away from the fight. Nothing was more exciting than this. I watched the three "heroes" fight the madman and his staff. The cloaked figure's hood flew off, and I realized this "he" was a "she". I couldn't tell what her hair color was like because it was hidden by another cloak with two horns. I chortled when I thought about the outfit underneath.
The battle went on, both sides never showing signs of giving in. I looked at a large electric clock nearby. It had only been two minuets. I hid behind a fountain and watched with pleasure.
Suddenly the woman lifted her staff high and yelled a few words in another language. Pools of darkness surrounded the heroes and more of the evil heart-eating monsters were back!!!
The boy with the key fought strong, but he seemed to be losing. He was too busy fighting one monster that he didn't see one behind him. It was in a posture I had seen before with the man in his thirties...
"Behind you!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. He turned just in time to stop the monster. I sighed with relief for everyone was safe.
My yell had brought up the attention of the insane woman. She glared at me furiously and jumped up. She swooped like a hawk and landed in front of me. "You are really getting on my nerves. First you follow me, then you stop me from filling the world of heartless, then you save the key bearer. Ugh, you know too much. I'll just have to end it won't I?" Her ugly thin lips curved into a smile.
"Leave her alone!" The key boy said.
The lady roared and shot a blast of green light from her staff at me. It soaked all of the energy from my body. I started breathing in short gasps.
The woman disappeared into a hole of darkness that appeared out of thin air. She laughed triumphantly as she slipped through the black portal. I sighed deeply and looked at the boy and his comrades. He held up his key and a tiny beam of white light flushed out of it. When the light hit the colored screen, the keyhole flashed white and broke into a millions pieces of black glass. My heart told me I was safe, but my body was screaming in pain from the blow. I let out a sudden gasp and the boy and his partners came rushing towards me.
"Are you okay?" He asked. His body loomed over me.
I swallowed and muttered "Yea, just peachy."
I weakly began to pull myself up. Pain flowed through my veins.
The boy nudged the white duck creature, and it pulled out a jar filled with green liquid. He handed it to me with a sneer on his face. I slowly and cautiously took the strange bottle.
"Drink that and you'll feel better," The boy assured me.
"Who are you, and why do you have a giant key?" I asked abruptly.
"My name is Sora, and these are my friends Donald and Goofy." The boy pointed to the creatures. "I've got the key blade, and I've been using it to destroy heartless and seal worlds."
"Do you mean the heart-monster things?"
"Umm...yea, those. The heartless steal people's hearts to create even more. Few people can truly control them. I only know maleficent, but there's bound to be others."
I looked at the night sky. The bright lights of the city made it impossible to see any of the stars. The heartless were out on the loose, and by now they must have stolen so many hearts...
I went to look at Sora, but he, goofy, and Donald were gone. I opened the jar and slowly devoured the green substance. After a brief second, my body felt normal again. All of the pain had flown out of me. I heard a loud noise and saw a brightly colored spaceship fly away quickly. They were all aliens? I shook my head in confusion. I was all alone now, and fear was filling up my heart. If the heartless came, I would be a goner. I looked around and walked toward the place where the lady Maleficent had disappeared.
My body froze, and reality seemed to twist away from me. The entire earth was bending out of shape. It twisted and swirled and right before it disappeared completely it reappeared, but with a different setting. My eyes widened as I looked around in complete awe. My breathing became quick again and I forced myself to take a step forward. Only one thought flashed in my mind.
"Whoa."
Did you like my story? Please review!! I need to know what needs improvement. Please also help me out by telling me what should happen because I'm totally improvising.