Chapter 1: Uncle Magnus

This story is just basically about Jaune Arc's Family one by one visiting him for the Vytal festival by sending him his Uncle "Magnus the Red" first in a box.


"Our Fearless leader is improving, just keep on practicing and you'll be able to kick ass before the festival!" A young energetic girl exclaimed.

"Indeed." A calm looking young man said.

"See Jaune just a few more practice and you'll be able to hold on you're on." Said a beautiful redhead said.

"Thanks guys, I won't let you guys down!" Exclaimed a blond young man.

Jaune and his Team JNPR had just done training and decided to go back to there dorm. As soon as they arrived they saw their dorm door is wide open. They looked at each other and shrugged thinking it was Team RWBY, once they enter they were greeted by a huge box with strange symbols on it but to Jaune these symbols were familiar to him.

"Uhh guys" Jaune said meekly as he went in front of the group and engaged his shield." stay behind me and slowly back up to the door and evacuated everyone from the school immediately."

"Jaune what's this suppose to be?" Nora said excitedly." Is it your birthday?"

As soon as she said that she immediately run to the box but was stopped as Jaune grabbed her back of her shirt and slammed into the ground.

"Owie"

"Jaune what is this?" Asked Pyrrha as she saw her partner hastily grab Nora.

"I can't explain it right now but we need to immediately evacuate the school right the FUCK NOW!"

Nora ignoring his warnings slipped away from his grip and tapped the box.

"Boop"

The box immediately started shaking and started lifting from the ground and inside the box a huge Red Demonic human busted out blasting Nora to the door frame.

"NO PATHETIC BOX CAN HOLD ME LIKE THIS!" The Red Demon roared as he started rambling about the ultra smurfs. His back was facing Team JNPR.

"Where are those ultramarines i swear on..." He said as he turned around to find Jaune lifting his shield up shielding his team, Ren pulling Nora up from the floor and Pyrrha aimed her weapon on the demon.

"Oh hey Jaune long time no see." Said the Red demon as he calmed down next to him on the floor is a man in Golden Armor.

"Jaune who is this and why does he know you?" Pyrrha asked as she looked at Jaune who looked pretty stressed out.

"This" He gestured to the red demon." Is my Uncle."

"Hello there young lady" Jaune's Uncle greeted." My name is Magnus The Red."


So I'm new to this I tried to make some fanfiction before but it didn't go well for me so I deleted it. I'm open to reviews, criticism and help.