if you read this can you please comment this is my first fan fiction and just want to see how it goes
Freedom wars
This is a story about Bob based on the game and how he met her...
Day one
It was just a normal mission just go in take down other hostile sinners, (sinners was the name given to those who are imprisoned for the crime of existing) and rescue any civilians, (those who have completed their sentence) in the area. Intel we got was to load up just in case. I had my trusty SL-44/ET a very powerful sniper rifle just for long range fights and for the up close and personal encounters I had a AMW Exodus a spear that is used to give some room. My loadout was unique to my teammates because I was the only one who could fight in any conditions. but my accessory (android who was assigned to give us orders) was the firepower she had a AAW-M3/ES rocket launcher out of all the big guns this takes the top spot in firepower and destruction. The rest of my team where ready for action as the great amount of sinners are teams were made out of a four man group. Well silver is are medic she is the. Most caring person till you hurt her or her team, then she goes berserk on any sinner or enemy around (the nickname silver comes from the flash of her silver Kris knife as it rips apart any abductor). Then was Cal he was are heavy gunner with two Autocannons a MG-M7 and a Dragonfang. This was the normal group we normally got a Newby to train in the field but not this time we got the she-devil herself Natalia woo. So the thought in my mind was this mission is serious.
We were on the drop ship flying to the Abandoned city sector when Cal made his usual comment "are we there yet", knowing fully well that we were going to be on this tense and silent ride for another hour or so, so like every mission before me and silver reply with "no shut up", so for five minutes the silence continued, and then he asked the question again but Natalia beat us to the shut up she snapped "speak again and I will double your sentence sinner" the disgust in her voice was on a new level, shes in a bad mood so that means a serious mission great just what I needed to have in my mind as I get ready.
It had been under a minute since we landed when She started giving orders to my team Iwas not having this after this, I will have a word with her after this mission but because she was a good sinner I will let her do her thing but I found my usual spot on top of the main building in the courtyard I used my thorn, (a long type of rope that can be sent over 25 feet from a launcher attached to my right arm), to get up to the top and then looked through my scope to see if there were any enemies i'm glad that I did
From my sniping point I could see the sinners surrounding the civilian, but this civilian had a thorn and a gun so I radio my team to run to help and jumped of the building shooting the thorn using it as a swing to launch me up into the air try as I was falling slowly to the ground I aimed my gun and took one shot at the sinner, Who now had a Aftershadow pointing at the civilians neck, (a massive long blade similar to a katana), the bullet hit the target in the shoulder and he went down his comrades were frantically looking where the shot come from but I had already used my thorn to latch on to a random building. I dropped down gently, checked my ammunition in my SL-44 seeing that I had enough rounds I pulled my Exodus from my back replacing the SL-44. Thoughts in my mind was had my teammates started attacking cause I don't want a group of sinners vs me fight.
I was in luck as I ran round the corner Cal. Started firing to cover me. I saw another sinners going for the civilian so I threw my Exodus at him hoping it would get there in time.
It did collide with him (him from what I could see) and the force from the impact launch him into the air as he flew. Great now charging. At the enemy bare handed as I ran I saw the Aftershadow that belonged to the sinner i shot while I was in the air. So continuing my run I started running for the sword and as I reached down to pick it up I heard. A click behind me. I know that a gun was pointed at my head I heard that was a loud crack and i turned round to see the sinner on the floor in a puddle of his own blood Kris sticking out his back. my first thought was silver but when i looked at the handle it was black like a normal Kris not silver like Silvers modified one, so as I turn around, I saw her smiling at me blood covering her blond hair and her face, she was wearing a black coat it looked leather but what struck me more was that she was smiling.