Because of you ((against Paul x zoey))

Monday morning I got up and straightened my bed sheets. The wardrobe doors opened with a squeak. A black skirt, a white top and a red tie where obliged for school. I brushed my bright orange short hair grabbing my keys on the way out. I grabbed my black shoes and pulled my knee-high socks up.

I peddled through the crowds on the way to school. The chain clacked into place when I put the bike down. A couple of bikes to the left, he was there. With his lilac hair floating in the wind he gave a friendly smile. We where friends ever since we knew how to speak. And to me he where almost nice. Not hostile like he was to the others but I guess I took this as a wrong sign.

After second period we met up as usual at the bike racks. We talked usual, school … trying to cover my secret crush on him. Until I blurted out; "will you go out with me".My face turned red. You still had your calm, cool and collected attitude.

"I'll tell you later" at the end of the day his answer was still the same. Tomorrow, same answer. Days later his answer was the same.

A couple of days passed, I got sick of being treated like nothing had ever happened. So, I went up and asked you, "Paul, tell me now" "Sorry your not my type,to be honest your ugly." My heart was shattered into millions of tiny fragments. Why did he have to be so cruel, I thought we where friends.

At the end of period I just ran to my bike. With a twist of the key the bike chain fell to the floor. I peddled back to the house. Mom wasn't going to be home for awhile so I headed up the bathroom. My shoes went clonk for the last time against the wooden floor.

I looked myself in the mirror, a quick change should make me pretty. One here and one there...

My mother walked in the bathroom, she dropped her shopping bags, eggs smashing. I was lay in the bath filled with water that was now red. Blood red. On the mirror, in pink lipstick was inscribed ; Am I pretty enough for you now Paul Samuels, from Zoey?!

My body was covered in scars. Doctors couldn't revive me I'm stone dead, like the way you love me, stone dead....

Okay Manny I know you have already read this but I made it a little different and I think it's better. Tell me if I have any spelling mistakes this time please.