Yeah, this is my first story *squeals* so exciting. This is in Breaking Dawn, page 444, last paragraph to page… 446, first paragraph, Renesmee's POV. Oh, and thanks for reading this story, you have no idea how much it means to me. And thanks to goteamedward09, who gave me the idea for the last paragraph.
Note: Stephenie Meyer is a great writer, I could only hope to be a decent writer. I am not her, unfortunately.
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Jacob stretched his arms so that Momma could hold me, but my Jacob didn't want to let go. He shuddered when he touched Momma's skin. Probably because of the body temperature difference between them, if Momma was as cold as Auntie Rosalie.
I didn't shudder because of the temperature- I was used to it by now. I looked up at Momma and smiled. I was so, so happy to finally see her. Then, gently, I made myself bring a hand very slowly to her face, so that I could show her my memories.
The hands around Momma tightened as I reached towards her. She seemed oblivious, though, as she stared at me.
When I touched her face, I concentrated on giving her the first memory-and only- memory I have of her.
Momma's face had been twisted in pain, she had been sweating and there was blood everywhere. I gently made the her face in the memory smile, made her eyes glow. The image grew larger, Momma's face came closer- and then I dropped my hand and smiled at Momma.
The room was silent. I don't think anyone but me and my Jacob were breathing. Everyone was waiting for Momma to say something. Inside, my organs felt like someone was tap-dancing on them. Will Momma like me? Or will she think I'm a half and half freak who gives people memories? I was getting a bit impatient, and the tap-dancing turned into mini vampires punching my insides. I felt like I was about to cry. Will she accept me? But I love her. That has to count for something… right?
Ooh… thriller! Read the book and see what Bella says. Sorry about the shortness. Reviews-even anonymous ones- accepted. In fact, not ONLY accepted, but LOVED. So PLEASE review, I love seeing all of your ideas.