this is first story so please tell me if you like it or not, so........
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Kagome stared at the cloud deep in thought "there going to find out sooner or later, I guest it's just a matter of time before they find out that..." kagome's trail of thought had been broken by a silver haired half demon.
"Kagome! What ya doing? we got jewels to find"
"carm down Inuyasha! I'm Coming" she said in a slightly annoyed voice. They walk toward the well as and jumped in, they were surrounded by blue light as their feet touched the bottom of the well. They climbed out of the well to be greeted by the usual smiling faces. Sango, miroku, Shippo and Kirara had been standing there for 20mins waiting for Inuyasha to come back kagome, as They all shared a polite greeting they then set off to search for the sacred jewel.
They reached a small village and as usual miroku had told some phoney story to the owner of the largest house to get them a free meal and place to stay. Inuyasha had already started a fight with shippo about the last pickle which had ended with a very happy shippo and a very flat Inuyasha, kagome sighed as she noticed the miko Kikyo near by "I bet Inuyasha will be running off to her any minute now" she thought and as if on queue Inuyasha told everyone that he was going for a walk and left. They all stared at kagome with simplify in their eyes (they all knew that he was going to see Kikyo) "I think I'll turn in" said the young miko with a fake smile, they all said good night to each other as they all went to bed.
~~with Inuyasha~~
"She's close by" he thought as he wondered further into the forest, he came across Kikyo standing there with her soul catchers flying around her.
"Kikyo" Inuyasha said in a gentle voice.
"Inuyasha, so nice of you to join me" she said not caring if he was there or not.
Before they could say anything else Inuyasha growled as he turned to face Kugura. "what are you doing here Kugura" as he put one hand on his sword ready to draw "I have come to pass on a message from naraku, he says that in one week he will take down the barrier around his castle so you will be able to find him easily". "WHY IS THAT THEN!, he leading us in to one of him traps again" Inuyasha shouted furiously, "I don't know his full intentions but I think he wants to finish it" and as Kugura said that she took out her feather and flu off saying one final thing "we'll be expecting you, Inuyasha".
~~back in the hut~~
It was morning and everyone had woken up including Inuyasha who crept in last night hoping he went unnoticed, kagome knew about this but decided to keep quiet about it.
Before they set off Inuyasha told them what happened during he's "walk". They all looked shocked about this not expecting naraku to lead them to his castle.
"So naraku finally wants to finish this" miroku said while staring at his right hand.
"It seems so, it looks like we'll have to spend our week wisely" Sango said as she thought of her brother.
so what do you think of the first chapter?
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