Okay, I know I'm working on "Tears of the Unforgiven", but I decided to post this earlier than I planned. This is a rewrite of one of my older fics. You can see the original at http/ this version, Valerie does not appear. Somes scenes are cut, lenghened, or condensed. Many of the parts are new, though it stills follows basically the same plotline.
Lets face it. The original stunk (especially the ending) and hopefully I'll do the story justice here.
Prologue
The Girl couldn't believe the tiny slip of paper was finally hers. She had studied month after month, taken test after test, and she had achieved her goal. A Driver's license.
Unfortunately, the girl sitting next to her, her best friend, wasn't so lucky. She had done as much studying and tests as her friend, but had failed to achieve the standards.
"Don't worry Lucy," encouraged the girl, "You'll get your license soon. In the meantime… up for a ride in my car?"
Lucy burst out laughing, "What car? Didn't your parents say they get you a car over your dead body?"
The Girl wasn't amused, "Then lets take your dad's car. I'm sure he wouldn't mind."
That made Lucy stop laughing. "The Striker Z! Hannah, listen to yourself. You know dad loves that thing more than life itself. Knowing you, you'll total it!"
"It's nice to know you have so much faith in me." Replied Hannah sarcastically.
"Look, I don't feel like getting into a car accident okay? Cleo is still missing and I was going to put up fliers."
"It's only 11:30! Where's your sense of Adventure?"
"I'm still trying to get a license for one."
"Suit Yourself, I'm just going to have to tell your dad about how you broke that lamp."
"You win," Lucy glared at her friend, "Just be careful okay."
"Don't worry, It'll be fine…