This is my first fanfic so please read and tell me how I can improve it
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Never Be Gone
I remember the day when I said my feelings for you… That was the first time I've ever opened my heart and said what is inside.
You just stared back at me and said, "Aya I can't accept your love. You know who I love." Those words kept on echoing inside me like a never-ending sad melody. After that you left me alone as a cold breeze passed by me.
For a very long time I've pretended that I was okay, that your rejection was nothing. I started to wear a mask of happiness to hide all of my sadness. I painted it with full of smiles to cover up my tears.
Then one day I heard you got what you wish. You and Ran settled down together. You're happy because you are with the one you loved but did you ever think about my love for you?
I'm on with a fake smile whenever with them but I kept on crying when I'm all alone. Whenever I see you with Ran I can't help but wish that I was in her place.
One gloomy afternoon I walked at the park and I saw the both of you so sweet. Then, as the rain just pour down Ran opened her umbrella for the two of you to share while I was just standing there soaking wet because of the rain. I can't help it, I can't hide it. My tears started rolling down from my eyes together with the rain. As I walked back home, two things are for sure, that the story if Rei and me will just remain as a story or an illusion and that my love for him will still continue as long as this pain will reside in me. And I know that this pain will never be gone.
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