Ok, this is my first story…ever! So I'm going to need all the help I can get, so any help, advice, or criticism you have please give it to be--but please don't be mean -- ok so I'm going to tell you about the story, well Samantha is Justin's love interest. After running away from her abusive boyfriend (Josh) and bumping into Justin. She was hesitant with talking to him, she didn't want to let someone into her life but they end up being friends. Wonder what Josh is gonna think about this?

[Justin's POV]

I was walking around with my hoodie on, trying to cover my face from anyone seeing me. Even though it was 8:00 at night and dark I wasn't taking any chances. I was walking to fast, and it was dark so I didn't notice the girl that I bumped into. She fell to the ground, and I immediately bent down to help her up.

"Owh, ugh my ankle!" she said. "What happened? Who are you?"

"Shhhh, ok you need to be quiet or I can't help you. Just stay calm and come to my car

"NO! I'm not going anywhere with you until you tell me who you are right now!"

She was getting upset, I could tell but I grabbed her hand and whispered "trust me ok, I'm a famous singer, who's young."

"Wait…you sound familiar, are you that Justin Bieber kid? That every girl at my school is obsessed with?"

"Yes I am. I need you to be quiet and get in my car. Ok? And what are you doing walking around in Atlanta at 8:00 at night anyway?"

"Well I could ask you the same thing superstar"

I laughed. She was joking around and I liked it. I helped her up, and said" here" and gave her my hand.

[Samantha's POV]

Josh had brought me into a dark alley, and yelled at me for talking to this kid at school. He is 2 years YOUNGER than me! He is my little brother's best friend. He was asking me why he wasn't there that day. After we got done talking I gave him a hug, and ruffled his hair.

So for that I got punished, he yelled at me and hit me. But every time I tried to explain he would hit me again, I soon learned not to talk. So I let him yell at me, punch me, throw me on the floor, and the kick me. After he was done he told me to get out of there, and that he would see me later, and also don't tell a soul about this or he would kill me.

He never used to be like this, when we first started going out he couldn't have been more of a gentlemen. He was very sweet, caring, loving, and very respectful. He never touched me in an inappropriate or abusive way. That all changed two months into our relationship, when one day I was talking to Logan who had been my best friend since we were little. Our mothers have been friends since high school also. We talked all the time, but Josh got a little too jealous when I gave Logan a hug one day, and he flipped out on us both. He gave Logan a bloody nose, and yelled at me for an hour, then repeatedly slapped me.

We have been dating for a year and three months now. I have dreamed about one day getting away from him, and finding the love of my life. Then getting treated like a princess, never hurt yelled at…just love is all I really want. Really…it's the only thing I really need.

"So where are you taking me?" I asked

"Well I'm gonna take you back to my hotel. Is that alright?"

"Uhm, no I think my mom might be looking for me"

I lied though my teeth right there. I was scared that he would see the multiple wounds I had from josh. It pained me the most when I had to lie about my mother. I tried very hard not to cry, so he wouldn't notice. My mom died when I was 11, because of me. Well that's what I think. The night before I had stayed out past curfew with friends, so the next day we were driving and she was yelling at me. She wasn't paying attention and ran a red light, and a big semi, ran straight into us. The doctor said I was very lucky to be alive. I asked how I was still alive, and he said that apparently my mother's body had shielded me from dying. Even though I had bruised ribs and a broken foot, he said that I should be very happy. I was not happy at all I felt so guilty, and disgusting, I wanted to kill myself that very instant he said I should be happy. I knew it was my fault, everybody said it wasn't, but I knew in the back of their minds they all knew it was.

"Come on shawty what's it gonna hurt ill have your mom come and pick you up"

"NO! I-I mean no she's probably asleep. She has to get up really early and go to work, I wouldn't want to wake her, I'll just walk home, and I'll be fine." I stuttered.

"No I'm not going to let a pretty lady walk home by herself at night. My car is right up the road I will take you home."

"Ok fine."

I was getting nervous, what was I suppose to say when he tries to take me home, I live with Josh because my father left me when my mother died. So Josh said that I could stay with him. That's when he was nice, I regret that decision now. Justin grabbed my hand and led me to his car.

"OH MY GOD! You have Lamborghini!?!?"

"Yeah, oh god what happened to your face?"

"Oh uh well while I was walking I fell down, I'm alright though, but oh my god! Your car!"

"Yeah I know it's pretty sweet! Let me get the door for you."

He walked over to my door and opened it for me. When he opened it, it made a sound, I don't know how to describe it, but it sure was amazing. I got in then he ran to the other side and got in.

[Justin's POV]

She was different sort of…quiet, and she didn't go crazy when she met me. I really liked that, it was cool to talk to a girl, and be normal. When we got to the car I saw that the side of her lip was bleeding, and I looked like she had been hit. So I asked her, but she said she fell. I didn't press her about it. So I opened her door, and let her in. then got in the other side. I wonder why she is so shy. She's staring out the window, and she looks kind of worried.

"Is everything ok?" I asked

"Oh yeah I'm fine"

"Ok, so where do I need to take you"

She was fumbling around in her purse looking for something.

"Crap! I don't have my keys. I don't want to wake my mom up she barely ever gets to sleep! Do you think I could crash at your place? Just for tonight?"

"Yeah, just let me ask my mom"

"You live with your mom superstar?"

"Yeah who else would I live with?"

"Well I thought you lived with Usher"

"Oh no… he lives next door"

She smiled, and chuckled. She had the cutest laugh, and the prettiest smile! Gosh, I know I've only known her for an half an hour but I really liked her.

"Hey, mommy I was wondering if someone could stay the night tonight?" I said trying to be innocent and cute

"Well who is it?"

Oh god I forgot to even ask what her name was!

"What's your name again? I whispered

"Samantha" she replied with a smirk

"Her name is Samantha, and she needs a place to stay tonight, please mommy pretty please!!!"

"Oh I don't know Justin" she questioned

"Please mom I LOVEE YOU!!!"

"Oh fine, and I love you too"

"Thanks mom love you too" I hung up the phone

"She said that you could stay"

She smiled her perfect smile and said "Thank you so much, I'll call my mom later and tell her where I am."

[Samantha's POV]

WOW! I cannot believe I got out of this, and I get to stay at his house, but I feel bad lying to him like this. I just don't want to get hurt by Josh. I wish I could tell him I really do, but I don't even know him how could I tell him, without him judging me for lying to him. I'm actually starting to like him, I mean he's cute, has beautiful eyes, is a perfect gentleman, sweet, and he has this warm feeling around him that makes me feel safe.

We pulled up to this very big house; with an even bigger drive way. It was long and winding. When we finally got to the house, he got out then came over to my door, and opened it for me. He was a gentleman, a true one. Not like Josh, Justin was a gentleman, and he always will be. I'm sure of that.

"Well here we are, my humble abode" he laughed, and so did I

"Wow this is breathtaking! Your house is so big!"

"Yeah I know it's huge, my mom just had to have an enormous house for her to be happy"

I laughed and said "Well if I had a house like this I would be happy too"

Now we both laughed. He led me to the house and opened the door for me

My mouth came open with a little pop, it was astounding. The house was so big; it had grand, winding stair cases, and a huge chandelier. I had never seen anything like it before. I really was blown away by its beauty. Justin was staring at me so I looked at him and he grabbed my chin, and closed my mouth.

"Would you like something to eat or drink?" he asked. I was feeling hungry

"Could I get a glass of water?"

"Sure shawty"

I followed him into the kitchen. He went straight to the fridge.

"Wait. I don't want water from the fridge, I like tap water better." I smiled, then bit my lip "that might seem weird but I just like it better."

"Wow, that's funny"

"What?"

"I like tap water too; everybody thinks I'm weird because of that. You just keep getting better and better."

What did that exactly mean? I guess we'll find out.

Ok so I don't think this is a very good chapter, but trust me the others will be better. This is my first time writing a story, so should I write with less detail? Do I need to make my chapters shorter? or longer? I want your guy's advise I would really appreciate it. Thank you all very much I'll be updating soon!