Hi, if you see this story under Alanna The Half-blood Witch that is because we are the same writer.


She was a jewel

A white flame

A Noldorin princess

From the West

She wander through my forest

I became entrance by her

She stole my heart

I could not live without her

She became mine

We walked under the sunless trees

Hands entwined

A child soon entered our lives

A son

In time she became weary

Longing to return to her fair city

I was afraid to lose her

So I prevented her from going

She became angry

She and I became estrange

When I was away

She and my son ran away

When I found out I pursued her

Encountering her kinsman on the way

As I reached her fair city

I saw her

Her white raiment trailing behind

She and my son entered the gates

I crept forward

Trying to enter

The guard caught me

The questioned who am I

The husband of Aredhel Ar-Finiel

I answered

They brought me to their king

Beautiful were their halls

The king sat on his throne

Beside him was her

My wife with fire in her eyes

The king requested that I live here forever

I refused

I ordered my son to come home with me

My son remained silent

Alas I cannot do the to my wife

As she was the sister of the king

The king gave me two choices

To live here or to die

I chose the latter for myself and my son

I threw a poisoned javelin at him

But my wife shielded him

I stood there in shock

The guards dragged me to the dungeons

Soon cries of grief were heard

She had died

The king came with the guards

The dragged me to a cliff

They looked at me in anger

My son just stood there silently

I cursed him before they threw me off the cliff

Then I remembered her

Beautiful as she was

In reality she was never mine


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