Cherub: Stolen goods

Chapter 1

He stopped gasping for breath. He clutches at the stitch in his stomach as the pain grows evermore. The instructor shouts at him to get a move on, he was almost at the start. he crosses the planks 20 feet in the with increasing difficulty. After what feels like 2 hours but was most likely a couple of minutes he gets to the last part. The zip wire. He grabs it and jumps. suddenly everything slows down and he can see what is about to happen. the branches whip him, the stings hitting him like a wasp. He can smell his sweat pulsating out of him, but not even his stench could overpower the smell coming off the lake below. even though he knew it was just mud, that didn't make him want to fall in. As the muddy brown lake loomed closer, he let go of the handle and ... Splash!