Four Piece of One Piece
My first fanfiction. Constructive comments are welcome.
It was a normal day on the Grand Line. Well, as normal as a day on the Grand Line could get. So far, the pirate ship Thousand Sunny had been attacked by two Sea Kings, gone through a freak cyclone, and boarded by a crew of killer pandas. Yep, just a normal day.
Luffy, the captain of the Thousand Sunny, was eating his seventh meal of the day. Zoro, the ship swordsman, was sleeping (any surprise there?). Usopp, the ship sniper, was telling the ship doctor, Chopper, a story of how he, the mighty Captain Usopp, took down a giant sea dragon with only his pinky. Chopper, being the youngest among the crew and the most gullible, listened attentively to his hero with his eyes aglow. Sanji, the ship cook, was proclaiming for the thousandth time how beautiful Nami-Swaaaan looked, while simultaneously yelling at Luffy to stop eating all the food. Nami, the ship navigator, was counting how much berri she had (what a shock). Franky, the shipwright, was dancing and screaming "SUUUUUPPPPPAAAA!" Lastly, Robin, the ship's archeologist, was reading a book. (Oh. My. God.)
Little do the Strawhats know that they'll soon embark on another great adventure!
"Four Piece of One Piece"
Chapter 1: The Encounter
"Here you go Robin-chan, your afternoon tea." Sanji purred, setting a tray of food on the table next to Robin.
"Thank you, Cook-san" replied Robin, paying no attention whatsoever to Sanji's flirtatious actions.
"Oi, Luffy! You idiot, stop eating all the food!' said an exasperated Sanji.
"Ah! Sanji!" said Luffy, who continued to wolf down food like he was faced with a famine.
Luffy stretched out his arm, and quickly stole Robin's food. He then wolfed that down, along with the meat that he was stuffing down. This infuriated Sanji.
"LUFFY YOU MORON!! DON'T TAKE OTHER PEOPLE'S FOOD! ESPECIALLY NOT ROBIN-CHAN'S!"
"Hehehehe…Hahahahaha" laughs Luffy.
"You bastard…" Sanji hit Luffy on the back of the head with a powerful kick, sending Luffy flying into the sleeping Zoro.
"Wha-..? Ahhhhhh!!" says Zoro, who was propelled through the air and into the wall. "Luffy!! What the hell was that for? And you! Shitty Eyebrow! What's your problem?"
"What did you call me marimo!?" shouts Sanji angrily.
"You heard me lover boy, you wanna fight?!" says Zoro menacingly as he draws out his swords.
When the two were about to fight, Nami burst out of the ship's cabin, grabbed both Sanji and Zoro by their necks, and banged their heads together. She yelled, "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TWO DOING!?! I'M TRYING TO COUNT MY BELLI HERE, AND YOU GUYS ARE TOO FREAKING LOUD!"
Sanji got up with hearts in his eyes and exclaimed, "Nami-Swaaan is sooooo beautiful when she's mad!"
Zoro got up and muttered, "Witch woman…" which promptly earned him a punch in the face.
Franky watched all of this with incredulity, and whispered to Robin. "Oi oi, are these guys always like this?"
Without looking up from her book, Robin replied, "All the time Mr. Shipwright-san."
"And that's how I, the mighty Captain Usopp, slew the evil squid with nothing but my right pinky!" said Usopp to Chopper.
"I thought it was a sea dragon?" asked the confused reindeer.
"Ah…well..uhhh…It was a sea dragon squid!! Yeah, that's right, a sea dragon squid that was thiiiiis big!" blustered Usopp, holding his hands apart as far as he could.
"Wow Usopp! You're so cool!" exclaimed Chopper admiringly, his eyes all aglow.
"Hey guys! There's a ship coming toward us! It looks like a pirate ship!" said Zoro.
"I wonder what they wan- WOAH!!" yelled Luffy, as a cannonball hit him straight on. Luffy bounced the cannonball back into the ship, and said, "Never mind! Everyone get ready to fight!"
My first chapter of my first Fanfic. I know it's kind of short and boring, but it'll get better. I promise.