Well here is the rewritten one :D I hope it gets as much attention as my original one did. Enjoy ^^
Update: Oh my god XD thank you so much to everyone who has faved, followed and alerted so far. Akatsuki wont return to normal until chapter 8 for new readers
~Third Person P.O.V~
"Damn it, Hidan, this is all your fucking fault!" Kakuzu growled in his lost temper and he tackled the Jashinist, biting his ear. Hidan hissed in return and tried to scratch up his partner's face.
"How was I supposed to know the damned bitch was a witch?" Hidan demanded, arching his back up as his tail puffed up in anger. Yes, I said tail since Hidan, and all the other Akatsuki members, had been turned into cats.
On a mission that enquired all nine Akatsuki members, and Tobi who had tagged along, a strange woman had approached them in need of help. The woman's face and body had been hidden in brown rags and only her voice was visible. Most of the members simply ignored her but Hidan just so happened to open his mouth and, not only insult the woman, but asked Pein if he could sacrifice her. This angered the woman and she revealed herself to be a beautiful, young witch. To punish Hidan for his mouth, and the others for their ruddiness, she had turned him and all the other Akatsuki into kittens. After that she sent them to a different dimension in hopes that no one would be able help them turn back to normal.
"If you had just kept your damned mouth shut, this would have never happened. It is your fault that we were turned into cats and sent who knows where!" Kakuzu hissed back and continued to bite Hidan. Because this wasn't the first time Hidan and Kakuzu fought for this reason, most of the other Akatsuki members either watched in boredom or did their own thing.
Tobi, who seemed to grow even more child like ever since he turned into a kitten, was trying to pounce on a cricket. Zetsu had left on Pein's orders to find shelter and the Akatsuki leader, as well as Konan, awaited his return. The four others watched the two immortals fight in either boredom or mild interest.
"This is the third time they've fought over this. Do you think they'll be a fourth?" Kisame, the largest of the cats, asked. Itachi, who was watching Hidan and Kakuzu fight in boredom, hned.
It had been about a week since the Akatsuki had been sent into the strange, forest like world. If it wasn't for the fact that Zetsu would catch mice, rats and once a rabbit, everyone would have probably starved to death. Well, maybe not because of their chakra, but at most they would suffer hunger pains. Still, hunger pains almost seemed better than eating alive and raw animals. Even then the Akatsuki would go hungry half the times while they got their water from small puddles that would show up in the grass.
So, after a full week of hunger, thirst and nowhere warm to sleep, Kakuzu snapped for the third time. The first time he snapped was when he and the others first appeared in the strange world. The second time Kakuzu snapped was a few days ago when it began to rain. With no shelter, he and the others had been caught in the cold rain which encouraged the ninja cat to attack his idiot partner.
"Enough of this foolish fighting, you two!" Pein demanded, hissing at the two, fighting, men. After an hour of doing nothing but waiting for Zetsu and listening to the two Akatsuki members fight, the orange kitten had finally snapped.
Hidan and Kakuzu stopped their fighting but continued to growl at each other. Both ninja cats were stressed out and would gladly rip each other to shreds if the leader hadn't stopped them. Yet, even though their powers were non existent in their cat forms, they knew better than to test the patients of Pein. Even Hidan, who normally didn't give a fuck who he annoyed, obeyed.
"Pein, we can't live like this much longer. If we don't find somewhere warm to sleep and some real food; we will die." Konan said calmly and seriously. The orange cat looked at the purple cat before nodded in acknowledgement.
"Yes, I know that Konan. Lets hope that Zetsu gets back soon with good news." The Akatsuki leader replied in a tried and hopeful tone. As if god, who was taking pity on the Akatsuki members, heard him, a black and white cat came into view as it ran over to Pein and Konan.
"I found a safe place to live. But it's located under a near by house. We are going to need to be careful that the humans living there wont find us." Zetsu announced once he reached the others. Everyone, besides Pein, Konan and Tobi, began mumbling amongst each other about a house being near by but no one noticing until now. None the less, they were still glad that they'd be out of the cold.
"A house?! Fucking damn it! What didn't anyone notice sooner!" Hidan swore. While he was pretty much ignored, everyone was wondering the same thing.
"Good job, Zetsu. Lead us to the house. Everyone else, follow." Pein ordered, staring at the remaining seven Akatsuki members. Being too relieved that they'd soon be out of the cold, no one, not even Hidan, argued.
So, at top speed, Zetsu turned back around and ran the way he had come. Running as fast as they could while in the bodies of cats, the others followed behind him. While in the bodies of cats, none of the Akatsuki members had access to their powers; even their speed seemed slower. However that was only because the ninjas still weren't completely used to walking on four legs; they were still fast, just not as fast. Despite all this, the Akatsuki managed to keep most of their strength, proven when Zetsu captured and killed a rabbit three times his size. Soon Zetsu lead the group to a high, unjumpable, fence.
"I dug a hole over here. Kisame, you'll need to dig a little more so you and Kakuzu will be able to fit." Zetsu said before he pushed himself under the fence. Kisame rolled his eyes but waited until everyone else, besides him and Kakuzu, were on the other side to make the hole bigger for them to fit through.
Now standing on the other side, the Akatsuki saw that there really was a house standing in front of them; a big house. Well, to be fair, everything looked really big to the ninjas right now. After all they were about ten, if not more, times shorter than they usually were. However, the house looked two stories at most, if there wasn't a basement. Right now it looked as if the Akatsuki were standing in a backyard.
A mini playground was set up in one corner of the yard, silently hinting to the fact children lived in the house. A small, windowless, shed was found in the other corner. It probably only held yard stuff; lawn mower, rack and maybe a few other outdoor things. A small patio sat outside a door that most likely lead into the back of the house. On the patio sat a few wooden chairs around a wooden table; stained to survive wet weather. The house was dark, telling the Akatsuki the humans inside were asleep.
"Hurry up! It's over here." Zetsu called out as he ran towards a hole on the side of the house. The others easily followed and ran into the hole, out of the cold.
"This is really the best you could do?" Hidan asked as he looked around the dark, dry spot. The others glared at him.
"Hidan, for the last time, shut up. At least we are out of the cold." Kakuzu grumbled but held his anger back thanks to Pein's glare. Hidan grumbled and a conversation about their new situation soon broke out.
~First Person P.O.V/In the house~
Well, it was ten at night and I was extremely bored. The rest of my family had decided to go to bed early today so I was left awake and alone. Even the family pets were off sleeping somewhere. Normally I could stay up for hours on my computer or doing something else, but tonight was different. Not only was I too bored to play on my computer but it was also too late to go into town to visit with my friends; even though a few of them would most likely still be awake.
I live in the outskirts of town with my parents and young siblings, right in front of a small forest. Well, the forest was big enough, and on both sides of the forest, but small enough to be deprived of deer, bare and wolves. We have rabbit, raccoon, skunks, fox and all those other animals though; it is why my dad installed a large fence to keep them out of our backyard. Anyways back to the subject at hand, since I live in the outskirts of town, it would take me about twenty minutes to actually reach town and five or so minutes longer to see my friends. However, even if it was a Friday night, I don't think my friend's parents would like me coming this late.
So, to pass the time, I went down to the basement suite to lay on the puffy, white couch my parents kept down there. The reason I called the basement a suite was because it actually looked as if it could be a house on it's own. The basement a main living room, it's own kitchen, two bathrooms -one with a tub and the other with a shower- and three bedrooms; or three rooms to do whatever with but were currently bedrooms. Hell, of my parents wanted to, they could rent out the basement to a family of five. Yet, and thankfully, I was promised the basement when I get out of high school. I had another two years to go for that.
Soon, after doing nothing but lay on the couch for an hour or so, I began to get even more bored. I wasn't exactly tired, but I was so bored that the feeling was the same. So I just accepted the fact to go to bed early on a Friday and closed my eyes. To help me fall asleep sooner, I tried to clear my mind. Yet, when that didn't end up working, I began to think up the next chapter in my Vampire Knight story. I was a fan of both Vampire Knight and Naruto but, right now, I was more focused on Vampire Knight which helped in the focus of my stories.
Oh, by the way, my name is Ashlen Parker. I am a sixteen year old girl that still lives with her parents. I have long brown hair, which curls when wet, and green eyes. I also have two younger siblings, a younger sister who is twelve and a younger brother who is seven. My sister was kind of a brat who always disobeyed our parents and tended to get in trouble a lot. My brother was also a brat, but more in the annoying, little brother kind of way.
"Meow, meow."
"What the hell?" I whispered to myself in confusion. Sitting up from the couch, I looked over to a wall where I heard the meows coming from.
"Are those cats?" I asked and got up off the couch. Walking over to where I heard the sounds, I pressed my ear against the wall where I heard the muffled meows get louder.
It was definitely cats, and more than just two by the sound of it. Since it was coming behind the wall the cats must have been hiding out in the hole a fox made two months ago. That was before the fence was put up and my parent had just been too busy to fill in the hole. The dogs were too big to fit in the hole so they didn't worry about it; until our youngest dog began digging to make it bigger. So, as soon as they could, my parents said they'd fill in the hole as soon as possible.
Frowning to myself, I turned around and walked into the small kitchen. It was a kitchen, dinning room, living room combination kind of thing. The kitchen was against the far wall and had tile flooring for easy to clean spills. The middle of the room was a small dining room table, which was good for four to six people. The rest of the space was used as the living room with nothing really dividing the three spaces except the tile floor turning into carpet at the dining table.
Anyways, walking into the kitchen, I opened the fridge and grabbed the leftover turkey leg I didn't think anyone was going to eat. Next, pulling out a large soup bowl from the top cupboards, I ripped the turkey leg into small pieces and tossed them into the bowl. Throwing the bone in the trash can, I collected the bowl of meat and walked back upstairs and opened the door to the first floor to leave the basement.
Exiting the basement suite, I found myself back in the hallway. Instantly going left, I walked towards the kitchen, where our backdoor was located. Luckily my shoes and jacket were still there from earlier today. It was only early fall, two weeks into the school year, but come night time it was quite cold and I would need my jacket. I could handle going outside bare foot though; sometimes I do it in the winter when I am extremely bored or want to get purposely sick. Yeah, I really do not enjoy school.
Quickly grabbing my jacket, I pulled it on before stepping outside. It was dark, cool and the stone patio was cold against my feet. Ignoring that cold, I walked over to where I knew the hole was. From here the meowing had gotten much louder, indicating I was right about their being more than two cats I didn't know how much exactly, all I knew it was more than two; maybe even three or four. That was weird because we lived on the outskirts of town with only one other house around; the one across from my parent's.
"Hello?" I called as I gazed down and the hole. The meowing suddenly stopped which got me to frown a bit.
Lowering myself to sit on my knees, I bent down to my stomach so I could stare inside the hole. Without a flashlight it was near impossible to see down the hole in daylight so at night, where it get dark around six to seven in the evening at this time of year, was even worse. I couldn't see anything at first, yet, after a moment of squinting my eyes, I finally made out the glowing eyes of... one... two... five... eight... ten... yeah, ten cats.
"Wow, that's a lot of cats." I whispered to myself before noticing all ten pairs of eyes were looking at me. Even though I couldn't make out the actual figures of the cats, I still smiled at them and pushed the bowl of turkey towards them.
As my vision slowly began to adjust, and with the help of the moon light behind me, I was able to make out the dim figures of the ten cats. I held in a laugh as they first looked at me and then the bowl before back at me again. This happened a couple more times before the cats sniffed the meat and looked at me once again. They meowed and blinked at me, as if questioning me about the food I was giving them.
"Don't worry, it's just turkey. I'm guessing you guys must be hungry so I brought out some food." I said and pushed the bowl just a little closer to them. The cats, or rather kittens -it was still too dark to see for sure- just eyed me and the bowl again before looking around at each other.
If I didn't know any better, it would have looked the cats were discussing if they should trust me or not. I'm sure animals could communicate with each other on a level but I haven't seen it done in person before. The ten cats looked back at the bowl for the.. I don't know, fifth or sixth time. Thinking they were nervous for the food, I decided to show them it was safe by eating some myself, even if I wasn't a big fan of turkey. Really, it's too dry for me; I like chicken better.
"You don't have to look so worry, it's just flightless bird meat." I said before I plucked some into my mouth. Damn, I don't even like turkey cooked and it's worse when cold.
Thankfully, I must have not made a face since a really dark kitten slowly walked up to the bowl. If it wasn't for his bright, orange face, the cat would have been really hard to see. Still, as it came closer to the bowl, he grabbed a piece of meat in his mouth and ate it while the others watched,
"That's a good boy." I cooed and reached my hand into the hole so I could pet the cat on it's head. Instantly it looked up from the meat to stare at me, licking it's furry little lips.
Caught completely off guard, I let out a small scream as the kitten, as I could now tell as he was out of the hole, pounced at me. Hoping my parents and younger siblings could not hear me, I broke off into a laughing fit as the kitten began to lick my face. Scooting backwards, I grabbed the kitten and allowed myself to sit cross legged before I put the kitten between my legs. Strange, but his purr sounded deep for a cat that looked so young; well old enough to be away from the mother, but still. He looked about a few months old at most.
"Come on, stop that. That tickles." I found myself giggling as the kitten continued to lick me. Because I found myself more of a tomboy than a girly girl, I blushed at the fact that I giggled rather girly like but was glad that no one was around to hear me.
The kitten simply meowed at me and, after climbing up my jacketed chest, sat on my shoulder to nuzzle my face. Luckily my jacket was thick enough that I didn't feel his little claws climbing on me. Chuckling, I allowed the kitten to sit on my shoulder for now, petting his head, as I looked back to the hole. Noticing the other kittens, besides two, began to eat the meat, I smiled but then frowned as I looked up at the nearest window of the house.
My parents and younger sister hated cats. They thought that cats were just loud animals that never left you alone and smelled. Not to mentioned that hated the little fact of cat litter. The only person that enjoyed cats as much as I did was my even younger brother. He was only seven years old but loved cats as much as I do. Sadly we don't get many cats and when we do, they always tend up running away once they make it outside.
Hearing the cats meow again, I pulled my attention back to the cats and frowned deeper. If my parents were going to fix that hole, the kittens couldn't stay. If my parents found out about the kittens, they'd round them up and take them to a pound and I could not allow that. Sighing deeply, I took the orange faced kitten off my shoulder and him back with the others. I couldn't help but laugh a blond kitten hissed at the orange faced kitten, causing him to hide behind my leg. It was so cute.
"OK, little kitties, I got some bad news. My parents are going to be fixing that hole soon so you can't stay in there. So, let me take you inside." I said, picking up the orange faced kitten before the blond one could hurt him. Standing up, I looked down to see all nine other kittens.
Huh... was it a trick of my eye or did the kitten that looked like a tiger just nod? It must have been, right? Maybe it was just a trick of my eye although I did start to get a weird feeling in the pit of my stomach. It kind of felt like I had seen this kind of thing somewhere before. Shaking off that thought, I smiled down at the kittens as I lead them to the back door and into the house.
"Ah, that feels so much better." I sighed as my feet hit warm tile floor. The kittens stared up at me, which got me to chuckle.
"Sorry, my feet were cold out there. Anyways, how do you like my home? My parents bought it after splitting seventy-five million dollars in a lottery." I grinned down at the their kitty faces as I lead them back towards the basement suite. "Anyways, because I can't let me parents or my sister know about you, I will have to hide you in the basement." I explained and opened the door to the basement. As if they understood what I said, I saw the kittens, minus the one in my arms, nod their heads.
Once again shrugging off the nod, I lead the kittens downstairs. To my luck, the cats were at least old enough to climb stairs on their own. I don't think I could carry ten cats all at once and making two or three different trips were out of the question as well. Not to mentioned I already held the orange face kitten in my arms. Upon stepping off the last step, the kitten in my arms began to struggle so I let him go and looked down rest of the kittens.
Now that I was inside and had time to look at the kittens, I noticed how odd they looked. The black kitten with the orange face I had been holding was bothering the same blond kitten from outside. Strangely, the kitten had a somehow familiar puff of fur over his left eye, which looked blue according to the one visible eye. That kitten continued to hiss and swipe out his clawed paw at the orange faced kitten. Feeling bad for him, lead the kittens over to the living room area, picked up the blond kitten and sat with him in my lap.
~Third Person P.O.V~
"What the hell, un?!" Deidara shouted as he felt himself get picked up. Turning himself around as much as possible, he hissed at the human girl but was ignored as he was sat in her lap.
"You should play nice, little guy. I'll just keep you with me so he wont bother you." The girl answered as she scratched Deidara behind the ear. The terrorist kitten growled but stopped short after a glare from Pein.
"Pein, do you know what's going on?" Konan asked as the girl studied each and everyone of them. The Akatsuki leader shook his head.
"No, but it might be wise to, until further notice, act like normal cats. This girl is our means of safety right now and we don't want to give her a reason to throw us out." He answered calmly. The others gave small nods in agreement as the girl completely ignored them.
At the moment, Ashlen was staring at the blue kitten, otherwise known as Kisame. While she was amazed at not only his size but fur color as well, Kisame stared back in irritation. He could already guess what she was thinking and it annoyed me. While his blue skin and shark like appearance could benefit him, Kisame didn't take too likely to people that mocked his looks. After petting Deidara a couple more times, Ashlen allowed the annoyed kitten to to jump out of her lap.
"Hey, does it even matter if we act like normal cats, hm?" Deidara asked as he made sure Tobi was far away from him. Pein looked over to him with a questioning look.
"What do you mean?"
"Well, someone is likely to blow our cover. Besides, we don't know what cats act like here, yeah. In our world we have normal cats and ninja cats. We haven't come across cats in this world yet, hmm" The young bomber explained. As Pein and the others thought of the youngest member's logic, Ashlen's voice pulled their attention to her.
"Poor guy, did someone dye your fut blue or is that natural?" The girl asked the blue, ninja kitten. Kisame scoffed and glared at the girl and watched curiously as her hand slowly got closer.
Reaching over to the blue cat, Ashlen carefully lifted him off the floor to get a better look at him. Quickly caught off guard by the weight of the kitten, the girl instantly put him back down. Raising a kitty eyebrow at the girl, Kisame watched as the girl settled for stroking his head a few times, much to his annoyance. Maybe if he were human and the girl was a little older he'd have enjoyed it but, right now, it just seemed degrading.
~First Person P.O.V~
To my surprise, the large blue kitten had soft fur. It didn't feel like paint or dye was stuck in it; it felt real and natural. As I pulled my hand away from the blue cat, I finally noticed that the other nine were sitting in front of me. Some of the kittens were looking at me but it looked like the others were smirking at the blue cat. Again I got that uneasy, familiar feeling in the pit of my stomach. Trying to shake it off, I returned my attention back to the cats.
"Well, why aren't you a pretty little thing." I cooed at a silver kitten with purple eyes. Instantly it hissed angrily at me and I blushed, feeling as if the cat could understand me.
"Oh, I guess you're a male then?" I asked, rubbing the back of my neck nervously. Unless it was my imagination, the other kittens, even the blue one that seemed annoyed at me a moment ago, snickered.
Shaking that thought away, I looked at the kitten next to the silver one. He was a tanned color kitten with green eyes. Strangely the cat had stitch markings all over his body, including around it's mouth. The kitten was looking over to the silver kitten and meowed something. Whatever the tan kitten said must have angered the silver kitten because, the next thing I knew, the two cats were fighting.
"Hey, stop that!"
"Hiss"
I looked over to the cat that had hissed; the orange cat that looked like a baby tiger. Instantly the two kittens stopped their fighting and I doubt it was caused by me. Taking a closer look at the tiger look a like, I noticed that he also had really odd eyes. They were white, almost a pale purple, and swirly. I knew I had seen those before but at the moment I just couldn't remember at the time. As for his strips, there was three on each side of his nose, some on his back and legs. However, there was no strips on his tail, which was rather odd. I blinked out of thought when I then noticed the cat was looking at me.
"Don't worry. You are all in safe hands." I attempted to insure the cat, reaching out a hand to rub the top of his head. This time the kittens didn't make that snickering sound, but some did make what sounded like gasping sounds.
"OK, you cats are really weird." I said as I pulled my hand away from the cat. The orange one kitty growled softly and a few of the others meowed quietly.
Deciding to ignore the cats I turned my attention to a cat I'm sure was female. Her fur was deep purple and she had eyes that matched. In my curiosity I reached out my hand away and pat down her back a couple of times. This time the other kittens did nothing but watch me.
The next kitten I saw reminded me greatly of Zetsu from Naruto, or in this case, the manga version of him. The kitten's whole left side was black while his right side was white. In the anime Zetsu's left side isn't completely black since his hands and feet were white. The kitten even had a small patch of green on the top of his head, just like the color of Zetsu's hair. His eyes were even the same color as Zetsu's; a golden yellow. Strangely, by the way the kitten was looking at me, I swear he was saying he was hungry. It may have been because I was getting really tired but I shook off the thought and turned to the last kitten.
The second last kitten, sitting beside the blue cat, was completely black. There didn't seem anything really wrong with him. However, upon taking a closer look, I noticed the color of his eyes were quite odd. The kitten's eyes were red, a bright red as well. If that wasn't it, there were small, black things in his eye as well. This kitten, like the Zetsu look a like, also looked familiar.
The last kitten had deep, red fur and amber color eyes. He, who I was guessing was a male, was actually a very cute kitten. Besides a few lines around his limbs and neck, I couldn't see anything weird with him. The kitten's amber eyes just stared at me in an almost emotionless way. Yawning tiredly, I pulled my attention away from the kitten to rub my eyes and stand up. I was tired but I guess I should get them some food and water before I went to bed.
Looking behind me I noticed that all ten kittens were following me. I still had that feeling in the pit of my stomach that something wasn't just familiar, but wrong as well. If it wasn't for the fact I was getting tired, and I had just found ten stay cats, I could have probably figured out why I felt like this. For the last time that night, I think, I shook off the thought and opened the fridge again.
"Are you guys still hungry?" I asked and pulled out ten cans of tuna out of the fridge. As if answering me, the orange faced kitten began to meow almost viciously and pawed at my leg as the others seemed to take their time getting closer.
"I'll take that as a yes." I laughed and brushed the kitten off my leg so I could get ten, tin, small bowls from the same cupboard I got the soap bowl from. Glancing down to see the kittens looking up at me in curiosity, I smiled and emptied each can of tuna in a different bowl.
"OK, everyone, I am giving everyone their own bowl of tuna, so I don't want you to fight over the food." I said as I placed the bowls on the floor one by one. Unlike what they did with the turkey, every cat but four, instantly dug into the tuna. Probably because I mentioned it was tuna before I set it done; I really don't know.
The kittens that didn't instantly dig into the tuna was the tiger kitten, the female, the black kitten with red eyes and the kitten with red fur. It didn't bother me, they must have just been curious about their new home to focus on the food. Again, I was too tired to put too much thought into it. Perhaps I will put more thought into it tomorrow, once I had enough rest. So, ignoring the four kittens that weren't eating, I walked over to the shower bathroom, opening the door. After making sure the shower door was opened, I turned my attention back to the kittens, most of which were all looking at me know.
"Now, before I leave you alone down here, I have a few rules." I said, clapping my hands together. This caused all the remaining cats that were eating to look at me.
"Rule one, if you have to pee please go in the shower in the bathroom. It will be really easy to clean out that why. Rule two, do not come upstairs unless I give you permission; my parents have no idea you are here and would gladly send you to a pound. Rule three is be quiet and follows the same reason as rule two. Rule four, if you hear someone coming downstairs, please hide. I will call out if it is me but I don't want my family finding out you are here." I listed off my rules even though I am sure the kittens had very little idea what I was saying. Still the kittens did that weird nod thing and went back to the food.
Shrugging, I just turned around and began to make my way up the stairs. However, I only managed to make it about half way before I felt a tug on my pant legs. Confused, I looked behind me to see the big blue cat and the black cat with red eyes gripping my pants with their teeth. Huh, for cats that looked no older than a few months old -though truthfully the blue cat looked like an adult- they sure were strong.
"Come on, let go. I need to go to my room so I can get some sleep. I'll come back sometime tomorrow morning." I told the two kittens, who released me. Thinking that they understood me I took a few more steps upwards but realized the two kittens were still following me.
"No, you can't follow me. I wish you could but I can't risk my parents finding you. Please just stay down here for now." I said and stared down at the two kittens. It didn't look like they were going to listen to me but, after a meow from the tiger kitten, the two kittens stopped and walked back down the stairs.
'OK, that was weird. I'll give it more thought tomorrow.' I thought as I made it all the way up to the first floor door. Opening it, I gave the kittens downstairs one more look.
"Remember, keep quiet and, if you hear someone coming downstairs, hide. Good night, kitties." I said, waving before I stepped into the hallway, shutting the door behind me. Sighing tiredly, and contently, I made my way to my room.
'There's something really odd about the kittens. They seem so familiar, it's like I've seen them somewhere before.' I thought as I entered my bedroom, closing my door behind me, I threw off the jacket I forgot to take off earlier and collapsed on my bed.
'Oh well. Maybe I'll figure it out tomorrow.' I thought sleepily. Yawning again, I closed my eyes and willed myself to fall asleep.
So, what did you think of the changes :D I edited it to fix all my mistakes and, if you like rereading, thank you for all the responses so far
Things you can expect to change
1) Longer chapters; going to add in more details. Chapter will now be 4,000 if not longer
2) No, nun-human, OCs or requested OCs -Might consider having camo OCs, OCs that appear in the background or one chapter only-
3) Name changes
4) Story will take place around fall, so school will be involved
5) Since the story no longer takes place in the summer, settings will change.