Hey there all you wonderful people who are reading my story. I Know this may seem like another story were people form our world end us in Tortal but it isn't! Any way they want a disclaimer so: Tortal and the characters from it do not belong to me O.K? So I hope you enjoy the story it's my second but my first was removed so I hope this can stay on so here we go. The italic words are thoughts and bold words are sounds.
A tall blonde girl stood pacing the stage and talking her friend backstage over a walkie talkie planning for the concert that was to take place that night at the Sanctuary.
"Do you have the Microphones?" the blonde asked her friend.
"No, Kira said she'd leave them by the sound board in the balcony. Remember Sue?" asked Susan's friend
"Oh yeah thanks Kat, Did are the bands here yet they are supposed to start sound checks and practice in ten minutes."
"Part of Skanonymous and part of the Reverse Effect are."
"Kathleen we picked up part of the Reverse Effect and Skanomus is helping me set up so I know their here I meant one of the other bands"
"Oh them sorry Susan, no they aren't but there equipment is."
"Great so lets set up the equipment and get the rehearsal started."
Later that night
The crowd was filling the pews (benches) while the bands Kathleen, Susan and Kira (the assistant sound technician) were in the back talking and getting ready for the concert. Well at least two of the bands were there. Were the other performers? They were supposed to be here hours ago! Thought Susan she looked nervous and here friends Kathleen and Tomy, one of the members in one of the bands, asked her what was wrong. When she said what was bothering her they sighed "Stop worrying Susan, go read a book or something!" exclaimed Tomy. "He's right Susan we can't do anything about it we should just start and hope they get here soon.
Susan went up to the balcony with Kira and Kat stayed back stage to watch for the other band. "The Rock and Rock Solid are proud to present The Reverse Effect, Skanonymous, Switchfoot and Stacie Orrico." the Susan's voice rang over the sound system. Well by the end of The Reverse Effects set Stacie Orrico was there and she gave her performance. As Skanonymous stepped out on stage Susan called Kat on her walkie-talkie to see if the Switchfoot was there yet.
"Kat are they there, please let them be here please," Susan said and thought desperately.
"Sorry Susan but...Creak... they just got here."
"Good I'll be right down"
Skanonymous was just finished and got off the stage while Susan, Tomy, Devin, member form Skanonymous, and Kat were all setting up for the last band when all of the sudden out of no were came a bright silver light which covered the stage all at once the four people on the stage fainted and disappeared. Everyone in the audience gasped and freaked out when they saw the four were missing.
Let me know what you think about it.