I wrote this one for English class and it seemed like too good a story not to post. So I am going to focus my attention on this story. Any comments, questions or concerns please post.
I also changed my name to Mrs. Hale Jasper's Wife.
Chapter One: The Start
The love of my life doesn't love me… doesn't want me. I ran through the woods after him, trying to get a logical explanation from him. My breath was coming in desperate pants and wheezes. But that didn't matter because I didn't want to live without Edward.
I let out a long shaky scream that eventually died down to let my tears fall. I curled into a ball and just let the sobs that were escaping me rock my poor weak human body. That's why he doesn't love me. I'm too weak for him. He wants a more durable woman. Like Rosalie or Alice. Well, they are already married so he'll probably go for Tanya.
I heard a twig snap and felt an ice cold hand on my back. Relief flooded me as I stood up to look into Edward's perfect gold eyes. But instead I found myself staring into Victoria's evil red ones.
"Well, well, well. I found Edward's weak human and no Edward. Did he leave you?" she sneered evilly, enjoying my pain. I grimaced as she traced the veins in my neck with her finger.
"Please, kill me. You would be doing me a favour, you witch!" (AN I don't swear. So imagine any word you want there)
"Hmm, well I guess it wouldn't make sense to kill you now. Oh but I can do much worse. I know exactly what I'm going to do with you," she said leaning in towards my neck. "This will hurt… like hell and I don't care," she said grinning, showing her too-white teeth.
Then I felt the pain of her teeth sinking into my throat. As the world went into fiery darkness I welcomed death. Then I felt myself fall to the ground. I heard one thing before I fell into my own personal hell. "Enjoy your eternity" followed by a sick laugh.
When my heart finally did stop, I sat up and looked at my surroundings. I was surprised at how clear everything was. How much I could see and hear. It was totally incredible.
That's when I felt it. It was a burn in my throat like fire and a smell with the promise of removing that burn in my throat. I ran towards it while marvelling how fast I was running. When I got to the smell, I came face to face with a man and a woman on a date. They saw me but before the screams had a chance to leave their mouths I had already finished them off.
That's when reality hit me. I finally had what I wanted, to be a vampire but it meant nothing without Edward.