Author's Note: Sup peoples, this is understandeble giberish. I'm new at this and this my first story. (So don't judge me. There's a difference between judging and giving someone your honest opinion). This may or may not be as good as I think it will be so if you have any suggestions, please. HELP A GUY OUT! I'm still trying to figure all of these thing out. I have to admit when I first made my account I was kind of confused. I read a lot of different stories and I tried to learn as much as I could before I started making stories of my own . Please review and send me a message of what you think. So here goes nothing.


*Ace's POV*

It's been four years since the battle for planet Blanc. Lately it had been rather peaceful and quiet. Most of the villains we used to fight usually had to take at least a few weeks or maybe even months to think of a plan to...Finally destroy their enemies. At the end of it all they lose and have to take another really long time to think of another plan. Today was just another day at the office, or so we thought. It was the third bank robbery this week by a gang nobody ever even heard of before, but seemed to be one's of the toughest one around. And today, they were hitting the biggest bank in Acmetropolis. Two buildings that were crawling with guards, and had the best security system known to man. Nobody's had the guts to rob that bank in years. had to be ready for anything. Zadavia had just finished briefing us on our mission, and I started going over a plan of entry until Duck decided to join the conversation.

"Wait, wait, how come I have to go in the smaller building?" He asked. He never liked getting the smaller things because he wouldn't get enough praise from his 'adoring fans'.

"Does it even matta who goes in what building?" Does it? We really don't got time for this right now. There's a hostage situation going on and Duck chooses the worst time ever to argue about this.

"Yes, actually it does matter. What will my adoring fans think of me if I get the smaller things, Huh? They will think I'm less awesome then already I am. Not that any of my fans would ever even think of me like that." So, if ya fans would neve' tink of ya like dat, why exactly are ya still arguin?

"Duck, dere are hostages down dere, who knows how much time dey got left. We cannot be doin dis right now. So can we get back to the matta at hand."

"No!" The heck?

"Duck we ain't got time for dis. We gotta to get back to de discussing de plan." By this time I was really ticked off now.

And yet Duck still persisted. "Not until I get the bigger building!"

Then Lexi decided to join the argument "Uh, Duck there won't be any hostages left if this goes on!"

"After I get the bigger building!"

I finally gave up "Fine Duck, you can have de bigger building!" Duck smiled then his smile was shot down by glares from all around the table. "Guess dat means more woik for you dough..."

"...Oh..."


(Twenty minutes after they went over plan they went over the plan they were at the bank and in position)

I put my hand to the comm link ear and pressed a button letting my teammates hear me

"Alright loonatics is everyone in position."

Lexi: "I'm in position"

Tech: "In position chief."

Rev: "I'm-in position-ace. Well-sorta-I-got kinda-bord-so-I-started-running-around-in-circles-then-got-some-icecream-then-I-visited-my-grandma-then-I-got-a-taco-and-now-I'm-in-Acme-China. Give-me-a-second... Ok-now-I'm-in-position! Speaking-of-food-did-anyone-know-there's-a-difference-between-Lo-Mein-and-Chow-Mein?"

(i'm just going to type randomly for slam)

Slam: "Kfiawfujwauefh." (Gibberish, it's in my name ; )

Duck: *silence*

Tech: "Duck... Duck!"

Duck: "Huh...? Oh right, DANGER DUCK IS IN POSITIO-"

Everyone else: "SHHH!"

"Duck, not so loud or you'll blow our cova...And Lex's ears off." I was feeling abit annoyed at duck for hurting Lexi's ears. There was no way he didn't, with lexi's super hearing and duck just being way to loud. "Ok loonatics, remember dat de hostages in dere are. Understood?"

(everybody answers yes simultaniously...except for duck)

Tech: "Duck!

"Huh...oh right, UNDERSTOO-"

"SHHH!"

Me and Lexi were in the air over the second building. We jumped from our motorcycles and quietly. There was a brief fight when one of the six men on the roof saw us, but they didn't last long. Once Lexi and I were in the building we made our way to the back to get as many of the hostages out as we could find.


-Later-

Me and Lexi had gotten almost all the civilians out of the back of the bank and managed to do so undetected. I sighed in relief as it finally looked like we were pretty much done. "Well, dat's de last of dem."

She let the last civilian out the back way "It looks like it, unless there's another room somewhere but i'm not sure there would be. We've covered every room from the maintenance closet to the money volt." She said as she plopped on a chair next to the wall.

"Dey ain't even know de meaning of de woids 'please exit in a calm an' oiderly fashion.' One lady kep' pushing everyone out of de way so she could get out foist."

Lexi laughed when she remembered that. "Yeah I know, I was the one that got pushed into one of the guards."

"Neh he wasn't dat smart tryin to take ya hostage."

Lexi laughed as she poked the unconscious man on the ground. "He wasn't, was he?

I smiled playfully. "Nei, it's almost impossible to take de ballistic bunny hostage." Lexi lifted an eye brow when he said that. "Almost? Is that some kind half-baked complement?"

"Not sure if I should answer dat. Anyway now dat we got dese hostages out we should get de others. "

"Theres more? I thought we got all of them."

I shrugged, "Most of de hostages are up dere wit de goons, dey keep a few civilians with them for show. If dey kill de hostages or the hostages get out dey would have sometin else to lean on. Dese were just a last resort." Suddenly a flash of red light went straight threw the door and at the last second I dove to the floor before it could hit me. 'What de heck!'

"Wakey wakey!" *the door knob starts to turn* "Boss says as soon as our ride comes." *the door starts to open* "I get to have my fun with all of you-" In a blur the door smacked straight into the goons face. Before he could fall back I grabbed his shirt and pulled him in the room. Still holding on to his shirt I kneed him in the gut before gripping his head and bashing it against my knee sending him staggering back. Before he could recover I swept his fee and grabbed his shirt again before he could fall and threw him into the wall. "WHAT THE HE-" But stopped in mid sentence when he opened his eyes and there was a sword to his neck.

*gulp*

"BOSS-THE-LOO-" Right before he could finish Lexi kicked the communicator that was in his ear. (And possibly broke his ear, if that's possible... Is it...?)

"I wanna know who ya boss is. Sing. Now."

"You and your girlfriend won't get anything outta me." Whether I was blushing or not, I couldn't tell. But I really hope I wasn't. I try not to . I must be doin a bad job or sometin." "Hey, dumbass. Watcha thinkink about? That snapped both me and Lexi out of our thoughts. (it snapped Lexi out of her thoughts to because she was thinking the same thing as Ace)"Don't talk about Ace like that."She threatened "And what are you gonna do about it...doll." Suddenly murder flashed through Lexi's eyes. she asked as sweetly as she could."Ace can I have a moment please" Before she could even turn around and look at him he was gone. she turned back at her victim. "I'm sorry what did you say before" "I said DO-" *Lexi grabbed him by the throat*

*five minutes later*

I was starting to feel worried...It's been five minutes and I was worried for the sucker trapped in the room with Lexi after he called her... *gulp* The D word... 'All de guys in the Loonatics neve' even tink bout sayin it cause we're all afraid Lexi would hear. I'd be surprised if he's still breathin.' I decided to go back in to the room when suddenly,

"I PROMISE I WILL TELL YOU EVERYTHING I KNOW JUST PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!"

*ten minutes later*

"WHOA WHOA WAY TO MUCH INFORMATION!" Said a very irritated Lexi.

"Nei, when ya said EVERYTHIN we didn't want ya to tell us EVERYTHIN."

" Sorry"

"Ok well Lex let's get moving."

"Wait what are we gonna do with him"

"We'll deal wit him latte', but right now if what he said is true were gonna need to hurry. Besides, he ain't gettin outta dat any time soon." I said as I pointed to all the rope we tied him up with. Lexi just shrugged and we were off. After about two minutes of sneaking around the bank we were almost at our goal. When thugs came around the corner and saw them. As soon as they noticed who we were the they ran off trying to warn the others. Ace and Lexi chased them down and when the finally reached them they noticed there surroundings... it looked like they were surrounded by over 60 goons and they all had BIG guns. and most of them had civilians with them. Ace pressed on his comm link. "Nei, Slam... we could use some back up right about now.


*after the fight at the building two*

(normal POV)

Suddenly Techs comm. link buzzed "Nei, aye Tech?"

"Yeah chief?"

"Deres been a change of plans. We can't help ya out over dere we gotta get dese civilians to safety and then get dese thugs to de cops. Can ya deal wit no back up for now?"

"Uhh, yeah we should be ok for now" "OH CRAP, I gotta go one of the goons is tryin to make a run for it, CYA." Tech chuckled to himself and then got serious again. "You guys ready?"

"Ready." rev said as quiet as he could.

*silence*

"Duck!" Tech quietly shouted.

"Huh... Oh right, REA-"

*SHHH!*

Tech, Rev, and Duck were going try to to surprise attack them. But all there plans went south for the winter when the leader saw the security footage of what happened at building two. He was pissed. "I want the entire place on lockdown until our ride! I KNOW YOUR HERE LOONATICS SO GO HEAD AND SHOW YOURSELF!"

*silence *silence*

"Well alright then" (he looked at one of the hostages...who looked surprisingly familiar. He was a bunny ) "Maybe I should kill one to speed up your thinking!" the bunny begged and pleaded "WAIT PLEASE DON'T KILL ME, I'LL DO ANYTHING! HERE TAKE MY WALLET, PLEASE!" The man just grinned evilly. he wasn't going to let him live.

"Well, ok, but only because you begged." He reached to take the wallet. They had to act now. They knew that after he got the money that rabbit was dead, And right before Tech was about to give the order the something unexpected happened. The bunny's face turned from sad and afraid to lethal. The bunny grabbed the leader's hand and sent a powerful roundhouse kick to his temple followed by a quick punch tothen punched him and took him as a human shield. he took the gun out of the leaders holster and knocked the leader out cold with a choke hold. he then dove behind a the front desk for cover from all the people shooting at him. The three loonatics were so shocked by this... strange turn of events that they completely forgot to help.

The bunny then started shooting back and had really good aim for a civilian. He didn't shoot to kill which gave him even more points because it was hard not to kill with all of this going on. after about ten minutes of shooting he took out 45 thugs and ran out of ammo. he figured now would be the best time for hand to hand combat since there was only about fifteen left. That was nothing for him. He waited until they were almost out of ammo to make his make his move. They really were not smart. He dove from the desk did a single roll and swept one thugs feet. Another tried to tackle the rabbit but failed when he moved out-of-the-way and he accidentally tackled teammate. Another goon took out his and said "I'M GOING TO CUT YOU INTO RIBBONS RABBIT!" Now he was pissed "It's bunny to you." the goon then lunged at the bunny but he just simply moved out-of-the-way. He turned around and tried to slice him.

(these are the knife slashes to show you what direction the knife went) - \ /|-/\/ - \

the thug then tried to stab him again but the bunny bent over backwards letting the knife pass over him. He then put one hand on the ground for support and balance as he kicked the knife out of the thugs hands rolled backward and then did a backflip dodging a whole mess of lasers being shot at him. When he landed he picked up a pistol from a fallen enemy shot 10 more goons than two thugs came out of nowhere and surrounded him he had his gun aimed at one thug but he had two guns on him. "Give up already you can't win this it's two against one if you shoot one of us one of us shoots you." he stared with confidence and said "We'll see."he let the gun drop and right before it hit the ground he kicked it at an angle so it went backwards over his shoulder hitting the goon in the eye then caught it behind his back and aimed it back at the guy in front him. "You got anything else to say smart mouth." "Yeah actually I do RABBI-" and before he could finish his sentence he got a round house kick to the face. He was out cold "didn't think so." "The others thugs would have gotten it worse if they hadn't run off-" suddenly he felt a sharp burning pain in his chest and he collapsed on the ground. "YES finally I FINALLY GOT YOU." suddenly the three loonatics that were 'still' in shock a few seconds got snapped out of trance and finally thought to go and help." My ride is here but before I go" *he aims his gun at the bunny's head* "I'm going to kill you, you SON OF A BI-"

*something hits him on the back of the head*

"You gotta be kidding m-"

*he falls flat on his face*

"Come on" (Tech starts to reach for the bunny's arm) "let's get him to a hospite-

*Electricity shoots through Tech's body*

"SSSDHDHDHDHH YYYOWWWW!" Then Tech turns into dust and the wind blows him away. After a few more seconds Rev snaps out of his trance of confusion and looks at the screen below his wrist.

"Uh-tech-remember-that-energy-scanner-you-gave-the-other-day?"

"Yea- wait a minute, I NEVER GAVE YOU AN ENERGY SCANNER!" He yelled as he started to regenerate.

"Oh-I-guess-I-shouldn't-have-said-that-anyway-the-point-is-i'm-getting-a-MASSIVE-energy-surge-from-him!"

Now Tech was really interested

"Just how massive?"

"Uh-...massive-enough-to-power-two-cities...At-once...for-two-months...basiclly-he's-full-of-more-power-then-duck-is-full-of-himself!" "Is that even possible"

"HEY I can't help it if I was blessed with ruggedly handsome good looks!" "Ok-maybe-I-was-wrong."Tech looked at his scanner and his eyes widened in shock."WOAH this guy has enough energy to feed my babies for DECADES! And the tower for that matter...Forget the hospital were taking him to Zadavia. Contact Zadavia and ask her if she can meet us at HQ."

*three hours later*


*the random bunny's POV*

I started to open my eyes when suddenly I see a- OH CRAP IT'S A COYOTE! I stared at him cautiously and moved back against the wall. "Who are you and where the heck am I?!" I demanded. 'Eh not very much of a greeting but heck the last thing remember was being shot and waking up to a bunny eating predator. Think I have a right to know.

"Don't be startled, it's ok. Perhaps you've heard of me, my name is Tech and I'm a member of the loonatics."

"Yeah, and I'm a member of the banshees. And by the way, telling someone your a lunatic doesn't help them calm down AT ALL!" Tech simply shrugged.

"Hey you wanted the truth."

'Wait a minute, isn't the Loonatics a group of super heros. Wasn't there somebody I know in that group.' Oh man my chest hurts so much I can't even think. If what I can remember a coyote was in the group, and he did help me from what I can see from all of these bandages I guess I'll have to trust him for now.'

"OK... But If you lied to me I'm gonna throw you outta that window over there."

"Fair enough." Tech reached out a hand for me to shake. After we shook hands he explained everything. "I'm still confused. Did he just agree to be thrown out of a window. he then started telling me about his team and someone he mentioned sounded familiar...extremly familiar. Once he was done he started giving me a tour of the tower. As soon as he was done someone came threw the door I turned around to see m-

"Aye Tech you gonna tell what dis doohickey can do? Or are ya just gonna let me look at i-" *he dropped the object* "My baby!" Tech said as he rushed to the fallen object.

"YOU!" Ace said furiously as his eyes started glowing deadly yellow.

"Me..." Was all I could really say. He looked really pissed. The woman that had Tech said was Zadavia had come in the room a few minutes ago and looked really confused. By this time all the loonatics were in the room looking dumbfounded.

Zadavia, sensing something bad was about to happen, decided to help."Uh Ace can I talk to you for a moment. You too loonatics." They all answered yes, except for Ace who just stormed off into the meeting room.

*normal POV*

There was a long period of silence until Lexi decided to speak up."Uh Ace...what was that all about?" After she said that everyone started asking questions like 'who is he' 'how does he know you' 'how do you know him' 'why does he look like you, he looks like an exact replica of you.' (that last on was duck). Once they were all done with there questions Ace started thinking. 'Dey gotta right to know. besides it's not like they're gonna stop asking you, so ya might as well tell 'em now. He took a deep breath and said. "His name's Jason bunny. I was angry and upset cause we got a bad history, and I know him because... *he looked down*

"He's my little brother"


Well that's the end of this chapter. Sorry if it didn't make any sense to you. overtime I came back to my story to go over my mistakes I found out that a lot of the words I typed were missing so I had to go over it 7 times. And that was just yesterday. At the fifth time I went over it today I said. "you know what, the heck with this I'm going to check over it one more time and then I'm done." That may have been a mistake though. But I'm still happy to finally be done with this chapter! And again please give help. I noticed that I never really explained everything very well so I will try to do that better next time. Please, tell me what you think and what I should try to work on. I've been really tired lately and have been distracted. I got hacked three weeks ago and I had to change my password five times...this week. *PS.* I'm not sure if you noticed but I'm not very good with romance so if you could help me with that two I will be very thankful.