This is my second poem, and I would really like your input on what you think of it.
Please review…
Until I Die!
Sitting here waiting alone,
Waiting for you to follow me home,
Hoping that you will care,
For it's our lives I want to share,
I feel so cold,
And it's you I want to hold,
I love you so,
And I hope you know,
For when you die,
I will forever cry,
Until that day,
That I will lay,
In the ground,
Never to be found!
-Hana-Kimi