This is the intro for my new story as you can see. Please let me know how it is. I appreciate any ideas, comments, or advice!

Kicho (means Precious)
Three years old Orphan You'll learn more about her in the story. There's not much more to tell.

Kaiori 15 orphan Ex-ninja. She used to go to school with Sasuke. They weren't friends but they weren't enimes either. Kaiori now works in a tea shop as a waitress.
You'll learn more about her in the story.

Sasuke Uchiha 15 Orphan Jounin ninja. He's secretly the personal anbu for the Hokage, Tsunande. He returned to Kohona a day after his 15th birthday after killing his brother the day before. The whereabouts or status of Orochimaru is unknown. All that is known is that Sasuke had blown the village up a week before killing Itachi. It was reported that there were no survivors.

Sasuke isn't cold and secluded. He is however still Mysterious and closed off. Get on his bad side... and you'll regret it. Most of the story will be told from Sasuke or Kaiori's pov.
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Friday, December 5, whatever year it was at the time. Or as Sasuke Uchiha would say, The day his life changed forever...