Well here is my first poem, story, whatever you want to call it. Um...i know it sucks but, it's my first and i don't write poetry...so plz be nice. If it's really bad let me know and i'll take it off. So plz review and let me know how I can fix it thx... luv2read15


Come Back?

I feel it in the water.

I feel it in the earth.

I smell it in the air.

I hear it in the fire

I feel it in the spirit

Much that once was lost, for none now live who remember it because they fear it

I do not

I remember emotions, family, fairness, friends, bonds

We must remember!

All of us must remember for it will save us

Life is like a river always moving on

like the earth always fixing its self

like the air always changing

like fire always there

like the spirit always bringing things together….

Remember

Will it come back?

Only time will tell….