Super smash bros. brawl: Waluigi script

My very first fiction( typed anyway ). Don't expect much, it's just how I think the cut scene's would look if Waluigi had been included in Brawl,( not all of them, of course ), and would be more like a script for them, not an actual story( hence the name ). This is a sample of the full thing. Read and tell me what you think.

Terms: WCS: Waluigi cut scene, PTWS: Princess that was saved, PTWNS: Princess that was not saved

1st WCS, after the Kirby/Mario fight.

Winner revives loser, shakes hand's, winner looks up at sky as a star appears, Waluigi drops onto the arena platform, close up on his face as banner introduces him, looks around then stands tall and points thumbs at himself as he yell's "WA-LUI-GI"! Looks at the loser, points, and runs towards them.

Switches to two-on-one fight, player controlling Waluigi, only has to defeat one to win

2nd WCS

Character that was defeated falls to the ground as a trophy with the character that wasn't defeated sliding back beside them, Waluigi laughs triumphantly, then looks up to the sky and laughs even more. C.t.w.n.d. turns and looks behind them, looks shocked as Halberd approaches, turns and revives c.t.w.d., Zelda and Peach then join them on the field, Waluigi runs and jumps on to the princess's platform and watches as the Halberd drops the shadow bugs and the newly created Primid attack.

Game plays the same through the attack by Petty

3rd WCS, After Kirby defeats Petty

Petty explodes, sending Kirby and the PTWS flying across the arena, leaving the PTWNS dazed in the remains of her cage. Wario appears with Waluigi jumping in beside him, they laugh and high five, Wario turns and aims at the PTWNS, Kirby and the PTWS run to her, only to Waluigi block their way. Wario fires the dark cannon, turning the PTWNS into a trophy, who then jumps to the trophy and picks it. Waluigi push's Kirby and the PTWS out of the way and jumps to Wario's side, laugh in at them mockingly. Suddenly Wario jumps up and, using Waluigi's head like a spring board, jumps out of the stadium, leaving Waluigi sprawled on the ground. He sit's up and looks around, catching a look at the Sub-space bomb, which only has a 1:30 remaining on the timer. This, combined with the realization that Wario is no longer there to get out of the arena before the bomb goes off, makes him scream in terror. He then see's Kirby and the PTWS running off and chase's them. Kirby summons the Wrapstar, which he and the PTWS jump on. They fly away just as the bomb goes off, sucking the arena into Sub-space, with Waluigi literally behind them, barely holding on to the edge of the star.

So, what do you think? Like it, don't like? Review and let me know. And yes, I can see how suddenly making Waluigi the playable character seems a bit out of place, but hey, its my fic and I am a Waluigi nut, after all.