First FANFIC EVER! Please Review! Tell me the Likes and DISLIKES!

I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE Characters And SO FORTH ! This is ALL BASE OFF OF the wonderful and talented Stephanie Meyer. I Am ONLY Letting My Imagination run WILD!

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" Isnt La Push JUST Amazing ! Just look at this scenery! Oh Noah can we PLEASE move out of the city and into La Pash". Mommy said to daddy as she stared out her window in gazed

"Oh Lily, I don't know what about work and all of our friends?" daddy said in a very soft and caring voice. My mother quickly turned around to face daddy. Face to face.

"Oh Noah, we'll make friends here and who said we can't commute?" my mother said ever so sweetly. She knew exactly what she was doing, daddy could never say no to my mommy. Whatever she asked, she got.

" We'll talk about it more when we leave Emily's house, does that sound ok?" my father said. My mother battered her long and beautiful eyelashes and kissed daddy on the right side of his cheek and whispered, "Si". Daddy seemed like he had just been kissed by an angel. Mommy was too beautiful; she didn't at all look Native American. She told me she never had a daddy only a mommy. After kissing daddy I remember mommy turning around in her seat and asked me with a simile

" Baby? Do you like La Push too?"

I remember particularly yelling at her and jumping up and down from my child's seat , "yes yes yes yes yes, beautiful, beautiful like mommy! YAY!". Mommy and I just giggled and then reached out to take my hand and held it there till we arrived.

As daddy was turning our car, we arrived at a little yellow house with beautiful flower pots outside of each window. The house was face towards the forest of La Push, I remember believing that auntie Emily had to have owned the ENTIRE FOREST.

"We're here!" mommy and daddy both sang. As we were getting ready to exist the car w a woman came running outside to greet us.

"Oh you've all made it! I finally get to see my little niece"

I remember still being in my car seat and looking at my auntie. Mommy told me before we left that Emily was my auntie. As I watched mommy and Emily exchanged hugs and kisses

and daddy un-tieing me from the back seat. I remember seeing the scars on Auntie Emily's face and I remember I started to feel so sad that I began to cry. Who would be such a

monster and do this to my auntie! All of a sudden mommy and Emily rushed over to my side while papa tried to comfort me.

" Claire sweetie whats wrong, please tell mommy" mommy looked like she too was going to cry. It was rare of me to cry and when I did mommy and daddy were always frighten. I

remember Auntie Emily turning red and sliding her hair down to the side where the scars were. While looking down at her little feet she spoke softly

" o lily please forgive, I think….. no I know it's me"

As mommy held me close to her chest, auntie Emily began to walk way. I reached out to auntie Emily and said, "No! Auntie! No!" She looked at me in shock, not knowing if it was a

good thing that I called and reached out to her. I struggled from mommy's chest so that Auntie Emily could hold me. Mommy at first did not let go of me but then she did

" Emily, I think Claire would like you to hold her"

"yes yes yes" I said. By now the tears were by my cheecks and have stopped, or so I thought

Auntie Emily held out her arms as entrance as I left mommy's arms. I remember looking into auntie's face and thinking that she too was too beautiful like mommy. I remember lifting up

my little hands to touch her face but hesitated because I though it would be rude. Never breaking eye contact, Auntie Emily held my hand and placed it beside the side where her

scares where. I ran my pointer figure through each scare. Each scare had its own destination; each line was too red and too thick. And then the tears began just as I began to talk to

auntie for the first time in my life.

"Auntie, why? (snuff snuff snuff) I love you" and with those final 3 words I wrapped my arms around her neck and began to cry.

"Sweetie, Auntie Emily is fine, promise"

I looked up from the nook of her neck and asked with tears in my eyes

"No hurt no moe, promise auntie Emily? Promise?"

"Yes Claire, I promise. Would you like a cookie? I baked some just for you."

I didn't smile and hug Emily back with joy because of the cookies, ok so maybe it was, but because she smiled and promised me that she wasn't hurt no more.

Auntie and I made our way back to the house while mommy and daddy held each other. I don't really remember what they were saying, seeing as Emily and I were the first to enter the house, but I think it was along the lines of

" am so proud Noah"

" I know baby, so am I"
I remember auntie Emily handing me the biggest cookie I'd ever had in my life!

"This one I made especially for you" she said as she placed the big cookie in my hand while stilling holding tight onto me. Being the little piggy that I am, I spoke with my mouth full

" Yum Aunie, ese ookie gud"

"Why thank you Claire"

Auntie sat right next to mommy and daddy while I ate my cookie in her lap.

" Emily, so where is this infamous Sam your always talking about. Am beginning to believe that he's some made up character since I don't see him anywhere" Just as mommy finished her sentence a very tall walked in.

" Oh am not made up, here I am. If anything it's my Emily whose made up she's too beautiful and too kind to be human, she's a goddess, my goddess" I remember looking up to see

the man approaching auntie with every word he spoke. And as he spoke, auntie began to stand up but the man gestured for her to remain sited. The unspoken connection my auntie

and this man had was indescribable. I remember it was the way mommy and daddy were. Together, an item too inseparable. The man took Emily's face with both of his big hands and

began to kiss each of her scares till he finally arrived at her lips. How could I forget I was still in auntie's arms! Ewwww. I think for a moment there the man forgot that everything in the world existed except for my auntie because when he looked down at me, he crouched down.

" Hello, pardon my rudeness, my name is Sam. Am your Auntie Emily's fiancée. You must be Claire" I looked at him in awe but not before looking at auntie. She nodded at me as if

telling me he was telling the truth. And with that I turned back to Sam and nodded my head as well. Next Sam stood up and went over to greet mommy and daddy. As all 4 adults took

a seat in the small kitchen and began to talk. My eye lids began to get heavy and heavier to keep open. I remember snuggling closer into auntie's chest and my final words being, "Emily". And then everything went pitch black.