This is the rewritten version of chapter one. I have deleted chapter two and three but they should be rewritten and up by tomorrow.
The morning sun hit Sasuke's eyes as the unwelcoming sunlight invaded his room. He pulled the dark blue covers over his head to block the sun from his vision. Sasuke, who was no older than fifteen, was not a morning person; actually he wasn't an any kind of today person.
The alarm clock was ringing loudly in his ear from the bed side table. Sasuke tried to ignore the constant ringing as best he could, but it was just getting too much. Lifting his left hand he smashed the clock to pieces.
"Shit Itachi's going to kill me." Sasuke cursed as he watched the alarm clock fall to the ground with a thud. That was the fourth alarm clock in three weeks that he had broken.
The teen finally threw the covers off him and forced himself to sit up, wiping furiously at his tired eyes. Sasuke glanced at the calendar and groaned as he realized what day it was, the first day of school.
School was hell for him and he hated it, pushing himself out of bed. He took a glimpse of his bed and wanted nothing more than to just jump back into it, to just curl up into that welcoming warmth. He sighed leaving his only sanctuary behind as he headed for the bathroom to get ready.
Sasuke stumbled into his en-suite bathroom and over to the mirror that hung on the wall. His reflection was shown clearly in the misted up mirror.
To say the least Sasuke was defiantly not and ugly person in fact it was the opposite he was beautiful. He had luscious raven black hair with a tint of blue. The hair stuck up the back and the front came down at either side and framed his pale face, his bangs fell into dark eyes. The raven's skin was pale and it glistened in the sunlight, his dark eyes were like staring into a never ending black hole.
It made Sasuke sick at how he looked, like a girl. He knew most people would kill to have looks like his but to Sasuke it was a nightmare. But lucky for him no one except a few people knew he looked like this.
Sasuke peeked into the mirror and cringed before leaning to get the items he would need to get ready. First a bottle of foundation, he used this to cover his silky pale skin. It also made him come out in a rash so it looked like he had acne on his face. The next element was a colouring that made your teeth yellow. Sasuke's teeth were sparkling white and completely straight. The last item on the agenda was a pair of large thick black framed glassed, that had a thick lenses that hid Sasuke's pretty eyes.
Sasuke grinned at his appearance. You would never tell he was really a beautiful swan under an ugly duckling's disguise.
Sasuke's style wasn't any better either he wore baggy clothes that hid his body and colours that clashed horribly with his complexion. Sasuke love dhow he could fool people with his façade, well most people were closed minded so it wasn't hard.
After finally finishing getting ready he strolled out of his bedroom.
The walked to the kitchen was a bit of a long one, the house he lived in was huge. Sasuke never understood why they needed a big house like this there was only three people living there. There used to be four with his parents but they died a few years back. Sasuke didn't like to think about it. Now there was only three living in the house. Sasuke and his brother along with Itachi's work colleague Orochimaru.
Sasuke cringed as the name resounded in his head. He hated Orochimaru with a passion. He was a sick fuck who creeped him out no end. There were other factors why he hated the very ground he walked on but he wasn't going to go in detail.
Sasuke entered the large kitchen to find his brother and Orochimaru seated at the table. Itachi had a coffee in hand and Orochimaru was just staring at him, his eyes roaming his body.
Sasuke frowned in disgust knowing what the man was thinking about.
"Good morning little brother, sleep well?" Itachi asked as he took in his little brother's appearance. He hated it when Sasuke dressed that way but didn't think anything of it. He just thought it was the style. It wasn't absurd there were a lot of strange fashions now days.
Sasuke turned away from Orochimaru and smiled at his older brother.
"Yeah I did, thanks for asking." Sasuke replied as he ran a hand through his extremely messy hair. Sasuke had applied oil to it to make it look slick and greasy.
Itachi nodded and peered up at the clock hanging on the wall. The digits read 7:30 which meant Sasuke had to make a move.
"Sasuke you better make a move you don't want to be late." Itachi pointed out. Sasuke gave a slight nod of understanding.
"Ok Itachi I'm off. I'll see you later." Sasuke replied as he grabbed some money of the side and moved into the hallway to gather the rest of his things.
School didn't start until eight forty-five and Sasuke only lived around the corner, but he liked to get to school early to avoid the crowds.
Sasuke heard footsteps coming up behind him and instantly stiffened. He turned around and glared at the man as he felt a hand touch his shoulder.
"What do you want Orochimaru?" Sasuke hissed through gritted teeth. Orochimaru just smirked at him.
"I we're still putting all that stuff on our face. Oh well the less people after you the more for me." Sasuke hated the sound of the man's voice. It sounded like snakes hissing and it was so unnerving.
"Yeah like you stand a change, you motherfucker." Sasuke smirked. Orochimaru's eyes hardened but his smirked remained planted on his sickly pale face.
"Well it doesn't matter either way I can still have you anytime I want." Orochimaru whispered into his ear as he leaned in close. Sasuke shivered at the contact.
"Yean because that's the only way you'll ever get some by force. It must be so hard being as ugly as you?" Sasuke mocked. He felt his head swing to the side as he was backhanded harshly. He paid no attention to the stinging sensation in his left cheek. The youngest Uchiha was grinning in triumph at having gotten such a reaction out of the man.
"Shut your mouth" Orochimaru sneered. Sasuke just grinned.
"Did I just hit a nerve?" Sasuke asked with mocking innocence. He knew he was making his predicament ten times worse and knew he would be punished severely for his display right now. But hey it was going to happen anyway. He decided to have a little fun while he was at it.
The truth was though he was absolutely terrified but he wasn't going to let Orochimaru see that. Sasuke's nerves were dancing around inside of him as his eyes stared defiantly into Orochimaru's golden ones.
"It looks like you still need to be taught a lesson even after last night." Orochimaru sighed. Sasuke shivered slightly as he thought back to last night. He still had bruises under his shirt and a sore ass to prove it.
Orochimaru made sure he never left bruises where anyone can see them especially Itachi. The older raven would not hesitate to kill him if he ever found out.
Itachi loved his brother more than anything in the world the only reason why Itachi didn't know what Orochimaru was getting to was that work was hectic. He owns the Uchiha Corporation. He had got the company the day his parents died. Itachi got the company and Sasuke got the house, the money was split between them.
The other reason why Itachi didn't know of the abuse going on under his nose was because Sasuke was too ashamed to admit anything to Itachi. He was afraid that Itachi would be disgusted with him and hate him, so he kept quiet.
"Well I love punishing you so I'm really looking forward to our time tonight." Orochimaru interrupted Sasuke from his thoughts as he licked the shell of his ear.
Sasuke glared at him his disgust and shoved him away.
"Get off you sick fuck." He then quickly grabbed his bag, swinging it over his shoulder before strolling out the door and slamming it behind him.
So what do you think do you think the rewritten is better than the original or should I change it back...well please review.
Please don't flame me. I do accept constructive criticism.