Lady_Ravenclaw:..........**Very frightened** ;) My first Fic, please be kind, its a poem
and my grammer and punctuations pretty bad, safe to say my english teacher didn't
really.......understand, what i was talkin about.
Deslaimer: I don't own Inuyasha or anything to do with it, it belongs to a certain
Rumiko Takahashi, lucky, lucky women.
**One true Love**
He walked a steady line, and wondered where she went.
The wind crept by him slowly, and soon he caught her scent.
It danced beneath his nose, and whispered in his ears.
He knew that she was leaving, and holding in her tears.
It wasn't hard to tell, he knew the reason why she cried.
And he could never fight her pain, no matter what he tried.
Plus every time he hurt her, in this place where demons dwell.
She would creep to her own safe haven, her home straight through the well.
And every time she left him, he felt his heart go numb.
But the though of hearing her cry, was like a painful beating drum.
He always would alow her, three long days and nights.
Hoping she'd think it over, and return to his anxious sight.
He'd wait forever sitting, in that one same old tall tree.
Waiting for her to return, on that day that he marked three.
He knew she'd be late again, but waiting hurt like hell.
So he fiercely leapt off his sitting branch, and dived into the well.
As soon as he emerged, he was tackled from above.
And glanced upon the laughing face of Kagome, his one true love.
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Like i said this is my first, I'm not a very gifted writer, especially when it comes to
poems, but i hope at least some of like'd it, and please share any ideas you wish to shar
and i beg you to be easy on the criticism...Thanx XXXX OOOO
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Afterthought:...this is basically about Inuyasha's pain when Kagome leaves, cause no
what he says we all know he's as sad without her, as she is without him. ;)
and my grammer and punctuations pretty bad, safe to say my english teacher didn't
really.......understand, what i was talkin about.
Deslaimer: I don't own Inuyasha or anything to do with it, it belongs to a certain
Rumiko Takahashi, lucky, lucky women.
**One true Love**
He walked a steady line, and wondered where she went.
The wind crept by him slowly, and soon he caught her scent.
It danced beneath his nose, and whispered in his ears.
He knew that she was leaving, and holding in her tears.
It wasn't hard to tell, he knew the reason why she cried.
And he could never fight her pain, no matter what he tried.
Plus every time he hurt her, in this place where demons dwell.
She would creep to her own safe haven, her home straight through the well.
And every time she left him, he felt his heart go numb.
But the though of hearing her cry, was like a painful beating drum.
He always would alow her, three long days and nights.
Hoping she'd think it over, and return to his anxious sight.
He'd wait forever sitting, in that one same old tall tree.
Waiting for her to return, on that day that he marked three.
He knew she'd be late again, but waiting hurt like hell.
So he fiercely leapt off his sitting branch, and dived into the well.
As soon as he emerged, he was tackled from above.
And glanced upon the laughing face of Kagome, his one true love.
************************************************************************************************
Like i said this is my first, I'm not a very gifted writer, especially when it comes to
poems, but i hope at least some of like'd it, and please share any ideas you wish to shar
and i beg you to be easy on the criticism...Thanx XXXX OOOO
************************************************************************************************
Afterthought:...this is basically about Inuyasha's pain when Kagome leaves, cause no
what he says we all know he's as sad without her, as she is without him. ;)