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Chap. 1
Charlotte's POV
The whitecoats shoved me back in my cage again. They called me useless, and I appreciated that. For the last couple of days I have been defiant. I have had enough of these tests and I was ready to escape. Nobody here wanted that though, the whitecoats just wanted to torture me and call it science. But I had a reason to get out of here, I had to find my twin brother Nicholas. I would have been defiant a long time ago if I knew he existed, but now I know who he is and the fact that he is alive gives me fuel to get out of here.
I sat up slowly, my feet were burnt from the "torture maze" as I called it. And my wings were sore from poking, and prodding. I started to look around and map the area. My emerald green eyes caught sight of an air duct, there was an opening right above me. Now if I could only get out of this cage and fly up there. The door to the room that I was being held in crept open and a couple of whitecoats came in. The kids in the cages around me slowly backed into their cages, I on the other hand didn't. I stood my ground ready to bite anything that tried to touch me. As the whitecoats got closer to my cage the anger fueled inside me. And suddenly I was frozen. Jeb Batchelder stood before my cage. He was the only whitecoat I ever trusted, but he disappeared four years ago, along with the other six kids that were 98% human and 2% bird like me, one of them supposedly being Nicholas.
"Hey Charlie, I missed you sweetie", Jeb said acting as if we were best of friends. "I need you to come with me real quick."
He opened my cage door, but I didn't move. Ever since he left I cursed his name, I had trusted him and then he just left. Gone, all I had of him was small memories and out of nowhere he was back and expected me to forgive him on the spot.
After a couple minutes of coaxing he finally got me to come out. He promised food, which at the moment I was getting sick from the lack of food. He grabbed my fore arm, which made me uncomfortable, and took out of the room. We walked through the School to a small office like room. I memorized the path which we came a left, then a right, another right, a left and so on and so on.
When we got in the room Jeb let go and broke into a nervous sweat. He quickly checked the room for any cameras or microphones. It was nice to see him actually attempting to act normal but I kept defiant. I made a check list of what I wanted to know about.
1. Was Nicholas Alive?
2. If so where was he?
3. Will Jeb help me escape
Yeah, I had my wants pretty much narrowed down. I just wanted to know my brother before I died. I really didn't care if I died at the School I just wanted to know my brother.
"I know you know about Fang", Jeb said finally sitting down at the table with me.
"Who?" I asked not knowing who Fang was.
"Nicholas" I tensed at the name. How did he know? Jeb continued, "He goes by the name of Fang, and I know where he is right now"
"He is alive?" I asked hope rising in me
"Yes, but he does not know about you." Jeb said "Not yet though"
"What do you mean by 'not yet'?"
"I mean I am going to get you out of here and to your brother"
Apparently my face lit up because Jeb continued.
"It's going to be hard though. I will be able to get you out of here and give you directions, but I cannot go with you, you will have to travel alone. It will be about a nine hour flight and you may want to stop here and there for food and sleep." Jeb started to press on but, I stopped him needing, answers for different things right now.
"Are you going to give me money for food?" I asked cutting Jeb off
"Yes, I don't have much but, I can give you some." Jeb answered
"Where am I traveling?"
"To the western mountains of Colorado, there is in E shaped house over a rock cliff edge."
"And what do I do when I get there. Just say I am your twin sister and expect them to let me in"
"Partially yes, you tell them you are Fang's sister, and Jeb sent you here"
"Okay, so when do I get out of here" I finally managed to say
Jeb handed me a backpack with supplies and said "I love you sweetie" and as he said those last words alarms started going off. Red lights were blinking sirens were going off and instinct took over me. I busted out of the room looking for an exit. I finally found one leading out to the courtyard. I ran out the door and took flight.
I flew above the School, the left wing was on fire. Then I looked at the view. I have never been out side of the School. It was somewhat beautiful, the mountains and the free birds. And then it hit me, I was finally free. I was free from the place that held me captive my whole life. Ir felt amazing, I was whizzing through the air going as fast as I could, I could feel every stroke of my wings, they were strong and hard. They were solid black and matched my long black hair. I changed my course by fifteen degrees, and coasted when I could. I was finally headed to find my brother.
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