OK well here is my second story and I hope it's better than my first one

This first chapter is told in ash's point of view

Ages

Ash: 15

Brock: 17

Dawn: 14

TEAM ROCKET WHY WON'T THEY JUST LEAVE ME ALONE. Just a few minutes ago I was peacefully eating dinner with my friends now I'm running through the forest trying to catch team rocket too get Pikachu back.

"Give it up twerp" Meowth yelled at me "ya you don't stand a chance" Jessie stated as the trio began to laugh at me mockingly. I was catching up but they were nearing a cliff and fast. I had to make my move and fast, I made a desperate leap to try and grab onto Pikachu and I barely made it. I guess the arm just could not take my wait because as soon as I grabbed felt it tighten up then a few seconds later it broke in half.

I quickly pulled Pikachu into my chest as we fell to our soon to be doom as I screamed at the top of my lungs. We were rolling down the hill as my whole body started to fill with pain and before long a thick liquid was spread out all over my body blood. I opened my eyes which I just realized were squeezed shut and I saw my hat flying away in the distance. I made a desperate attempt to stop my constant rolling by planting my feet on the cliff but all I did was separate myself from the wall of death after my legs gave out and was now free falling I closed eyes preparing for the death I was sure about to come and I whispered to myself "dawn I love you" yes I had fallen for the blue haired coordinator years ago it took me a while to recognize it, actually it took me about three years and now we are traveling in johto I was just about to try my luck at the Pokémon league one more time and I made a bet with myself if I won I was going to ask her out but now this. Well I guess this is it it's only fitting I end my journey with the one I started with right...

"Go pidgoet!" I heard a man yell I opened my eyes in surprise to see the bird Pokémon flying towards me at full speed as I fell. I hit a feathery being but it wasn't a very soft landing. "Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh" I let out a blood chilling scream I as hit the bird Pokémon. Then I felt the Pokémon land and place me on the ground as the man returned his pidgoet. My eye sight is becoming blurry from the pain and I felt the same man place his hand on my head "man he's burning up swinub use icy wind" the man said. The next thing I knew I felt a cold breeze going down my body as I started to black out

Normal point of view

"I'm worried Brock why did he have to run off like that" the blue haired coordinator said worriedly as the two went running after Ash. "Ya I know Dawn but you know Ash" the brown haired man known as Brock said to the girl known as Dawn.

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" they both heard a blood chilling scream "that sounded like..." dawn started but was cut off by Brock "ya I know lets go" they both started running off into the direction of the scream they saw ash's hat drift by in the wind. dawn then ran up to the edge of the cliff and saw the blood on the side but no sign off ash there isn't even a blood trail Dawn fell down on both knees and started crying. Brock decides to goe up to comfort her he knows how she felt about the young trainer and he knows why she is so sad and in fact he could fell tears welling up in his eyes for his long time friend. "Goodbye ash... forever" Brock stated.

Ash's point of view with ash and mystery man

"Alright swinub that's enough" the man said as my vision became clearer. I sat up quickly but immediately regretted it "ack" I groaned in pain. "Take it easy your still hurt" but despite the man's words I tried to stand up but fell right back down again I sat back up and leaned myself against a log as I winced in pain. "good to see your up" I looked up to see the same man and took a close look at him his hair was dirty blonde and it just covered his eye brows he had purple eyes and a head band was tied under his bangs that had purple flames on it the knot came out on top of his hair in the back. He wore a long sleeved black with a collar covering most of his face and a tan unbuttoned short sleeved jacket with a cross on the back over top. And he had purple necklace around his neck he wore baggy blue jeans and had purple and white shoes.

"Who are you" I asked "you can call me S" the man called S replied calmly. "okay..." I said a litlle confused. "Quiii" I turned my head to see a quilava with purple flames stretching out… Wait! A purple flamed quilava "um is that..." "Yes it's a shiny quilava" he interrupted me then he turned to me and asked "who are you"

"I-I don't know..."

Ya I know it was short sue me well until next time - peace-