Author's Note:
I'm really sorry to all the people who story alerted this, and now everything's all wonky. It's just that, when I re-read the original Akatsuki no Hime, I was appalled by how inconsistent it was, and how silly some of the wording sounded in the beginning chapters.
So. I fixed what I didn't like about it, and now, I sincerely hope that you all didn't give up on me by now.
I really like the amount of people who added this story into their favorites, and an even greater thanks to all the people who reviewed.
All reviews are welcome, whether they are negative or positive, both help me in my writing, (though I do prefer the positive ones).
If there are any more problems with it, please let me know. I am working on a few other stories, so this one might be put on the back burner if it seems like people have lost interest and given up on it.
A sincere thanks to all the fans, whether they reviewed or not, because a story should have readers, don't you think? Without you all picking up my activity bar graph, I would of trashed this story when it was still in it's infancy, and none of the great ideas that have come to me since would have been created.
Please enjoy the improved version of my favorite of all the fan fictions I've written so far, Akatsuki no Hime.
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