My motivation to write this story was to write the ultimate Mary Sue. Why? To insult all those other Mary Sues out there. Because I hate them, and I need a good laugh. So, don't flame me because this girl is a Mary Sue because, I know. She is mocking all of those other Sues out there. Anyway, enjoy!
Thunder and lightning dashed the sky. Hard rain poured from the dark, gloomy clouds as it was carried to the ground in the gusting winds.
In the middle of a water stricken field, a dainty figure lay. Her locks were long and silky, a deep ebony of a violet hue that fell to her waist. Two locks fell to her chin gracefully accenting the side of her face with peculiar silver tips on them that looked oddly natural. Her eyes were brilliantly silver, like a beautiful glowing moon, with the most romantically enchanting specks of purple in them that eyes have ever had. She, like select few, had these gorgeous eyes, for they marked the powerful magic that lied within her. But not just any magic, it was the most powerful magic in the world, and she was the last one left with these eyes.
Upon her left arm was a bizarre, yet intriguing, faint scar that was shaped like a lightning bolt. At the tip of the bolt that came down her arm in a curve, which looked like it had been blessed from the gods and added to her beauty in it's perfect form. She wore a tight, violet shirt which accented her perfect, thin waist and her luscious breasts. Her skirt was just as tight, and black which lied several inches above her knees and her silky-smooth legs. Her small feet were perfect for her figure, which was beautifully curvy like a goddess. The last thing to note about her, was that around her slim neck was an enchanted pendant. It was gold, encrusted with the largest moonstone that anyone has ever seen, and it was called "God's Divine Gift." It was specially entrusted to her, for her name was Krystina Mizuu Jump, and she was the most perfect girl in the world.
Not far away from this field, Kurama, Hiei, Yusuke and Kuwabara had been walking in the surrounding forest. As they got closer to the edge, Kuwabara stopped in his tracks. The three others noticed this, and turned to look at him.
"What are you stopping for?" Yusuke asked him. Kuwabara's glance shifted to look at a field.
"Something is in that field," Kuwabara replied.
"Do you suppose it is anything of importance?" Kurama asked Kuwabara. Kuwabara shrugged his shoulders.
"I don't know," Kuwabara answered.
"Let's go check it out," Yusuke suggested. The others nodded to agree, and Kuwabara led the way through the field. They all scanned it, looking for what Kuwabara had sensed. After a few minutes of searching the tall, water stricken grass, Yusuke frowned.
"I don't see anything, Kuwabara." Kurama paused in his tracks as the others recollected in a group, and glanced over to an area where a large patch of grass seemed to be missing.
"Maybe we should look over there." Kuwabara squinted his eyes shut.
"I definitely feel something over there," he added. The four walked over to the patch of grass and peered down at Krystina. Hiei eyed the girl, being quite taken with her astonishing looks. He took in a slow breath as he gazed down at her. Lucky for him, the others were gazing down at her and did not notice how far his mouth was hanging.
"Is it alive?" Yusuke asked. Kurama bent down and held up a small wrist of the girl, pinching it with his thumb and index finger.
"She has a pulse," he said. "But it is a very faint one. And her breathing is too slow." Yusuke yawned.
"Let's just get her in a hospital or something," Yusuke suggested. "Hiei, you carry her, you are the fastest." Without a word, Hiei bent down to pick her up. As he did, he noticed her delicate and serene face. Her cheeks were rosy (even though she was close to dying and they should be pale) and her lips were as red and soft as the petals of a rose. Hiei paused as he looked at her, several moments passing by. A soft groan came from her lips as she stirred. Second, her eyes opened slowly, her long and dark eyelashes opening slowly as she gazed up at Hiei. He noted that in his opinion, she had the most beautiful eyes that he had ever seen, that glowed with the beauty of the full Arabian moon.
She wore a confused and tired look on her face as she stared into his ruby eyes and blinked. her expression soon turned to a frown. She pushed Hiei's chest with her right arm, and back-flipped onto the ground as his grip on her loosened to let her free, and she landed on the ground gracefully, her luscious hair falling to her side dramatically in a gorgeous wave that was free of split ends (even though it was raining, her hair still acted as if it was dry). Her eyes narrowed and flashed a dangerous, darker purple that could make one's insides squirm from fear as she looked at Hiei, turning her gaze to the others and snapping back to him in an instant. "What do you want with me?!" She screamed furiously at them, her voice as beautiful as a romantic melody from a thousand choruses, yet lacking it's normal sereneness.
"Whoa, dude, chill," Yusuke commented as he looked at Krystina. Her intense, deadly glare of deep orchid turned upon him after he spoke. "We don't want anything!"
"How can I be sure of that?" She spat out, her angelic voice ringing through the field as it echoed.
"You just have to trust us," Hiei added. Krystina snarled.
"Look, we just found you lying here," Yusuke said. "You were unconscious, so we picked you up to move you, and you woke up." Krystina didn't believe them.
"You liar!" She screamed. "Get away from me!" With that, she took of at her amazing godlike-speed which was rivaled by only Hiei's. He darted after her, barely able to catch up with her.