Hello, there! The first chapter is fairly old and after I re-read it I realized that my writing has changed a lot, so chapter 3 will be much more in depth compared to this one. Here's the summary:

Four girls in New York City live a harsh life with their other friends. Superheroes are supposed to be respected, right? Like Spider-man, Super Man, and Batman. Even the Teen Titans. So how come they are treated like monsters, when their only intentions are to help out? Though I guess it wouldn't be hard for something crazy to happen, oh say, getting sucked into another dimension. Especially when you have a girl who can fly, someone who can control weather, and someone who has the most weirdest powers of all. So what happens when four girls who are outcasts to their own world, are suddenly teleported to another world? And who is this 'Akatsuki'? And why is their leader suddenly interested in the girls' special powers?

Madara/TobixOC with some other minor Akatsuki pairings.

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Naida was different. Well that's what you'd say if you'd want to put it simply. She lived in New York City with a group of people who were all outcasts. Why were they outcasts? Well, there was one, simple answer to that. They all had some strange ability.

But Naida wasn't mutated, drugged, or anything like that. She had superpowers because she wasn't quite human. She was born from another planet, to be exact. Her mother was an alien, ruler of the planet Evallida, and her father was a human, a simple man in a small town with a job that only paid well enough to keep himself alive. How could the two possibly have met? Well, that was unknown to Naida. Though it didn't really matter, seeing as though her father had died in a war on Evallida against an enemy from a planet not too far from their own.

She was only a small girl back then, and because of the dangerous war, she was sent to Earth and placed in an orphanage. But now, she was an 18 year-old girl, living in an abandoned building with her friends who were also known as freaks to the public.

No one ever cared about such 'monsters' as them. All had strange powers, but surprisingly, none of them were born from an alien planet like Naida. Even though they were all hated from the public, they still tried to help out as much as possible. Just like superheros, but minus the whole 'justice thing'. This group of outcasts weren't good nor evil. They helped out when they could, but sometimes they'd have to steal things to stay alive.

"Hey, Naida!" a sudden voice brought Naida out of her thoughts, and she looked up at the three girls standing before her.

"Yeah?" she asked in a quiet voice, not moving from her hunched position on the beat up and torn couch.

"I think you should definitely get off your lazy ass and come to the beach with us!" said the girl in the front of the group. Her dark blue eyes showed leadership and power. Too bad her selfish and cocky attitude prevented her from actually becoming the leader of their team.

Naida scowled at the teenager, a long strand of black hair falling in front of her bright blue, pupil-less eyes. "Oh, your insult definitely makes me want to come with you," she spoke with sarcasm laced in her voice.

The girl rolled her eyes and tucked a strand of blond hair behind her ear, "Just come with us, Naida. You haven't left that damn spot for hours!"

Before the alien could retort, another girl stepped into the conversation. "Stella is right, Naida. You have been very inactive with your training lately, which will only harm you in the future. What do you think would happen if we were put in a dangerous situation, but you were too out of shape to do anything?"

"Mhmm," Stella nodded at her teammate's words, "all you've been doing is moping around this shack and sleeping. You don't even leave the couch when the guys put on football, which you hate."

Naida sighed in annoyance. She knew there was no point in arguing with them any further because they would just end up dragging her outside if she didn't agree. "Fine, whatever. Let's just get this over with."

Stella lead the small group to their usual hang out spot, an empty part of a beach hidden by some trees and large rocks.

"Hey, Stella, why didn't you invite the rest of our team to train with us?" asked a girl with with long, curly blue hair.

"Well why would I, Nerita?" Stella firmly placed her hands on her hips. "They're too busy with their 'guy' stuff. You know, watching football and the sorts."

Nerita frowned, soft, turquoise eyes full of confusion, "Okay, then. But that doesn't explain why you didn't bring Damara with us. She would've loved to come and practice!"

Stella glared at nothing in particular, her tone on the brink of yelling, "Damara's powers are unstable! What if she were to accidentally hurt one of us?"

Naida quickly looked up at the sky. Lightening started to appear, followed by the loud sound of thunder. It wasn't good to get Stella angry. Whenever she was angry, Stella would lose control of her powers- the ability to create storms.

"That's enough!" Naida shouted at the blonde, eyes glowing a bright blue. "Stella, it seems that you too need to work on your powers. Either that, or control your anger."

Stella rolled her eyes, and the weather finally changed back to it's original sunny blue sky. "Alright, let's train already!"

Stella faced Naida in a fighting stance, indicating her chosen opponent. Nerita looked over at the other girl, Bonnie, and faced her in a fighting stance as well.

Bonnie quickly lunged forward, grabbing her sword from it's sheathe. Her blood-red eyes focused on her friend, her face emotionless. Nerita blocked her attack with her staff and quickly aimed the weapon diagonally at Bonnie. As the two fought with their weapons, Naida and Stella were fighting with their powers.

"Is that all you got, Naida?" Stella dashed towards the alien, bolts of lightening crackling around her hands.

Naida rolled away from the fuming blonde, who fell forward slightly and zapped a hole in the sand. She used the momentary distraction to her advantage and prepared for her own attack. She remained crouched on the ground and brought her hands up in the air, a giant wave suddenly lifting itself out of the shore and crashing towards Stella with full force.

Naida's powers were water. She could create, bend and breathe in water. But also, her species could fly and they were quite strong. But Naida didn't like fighting as much as Stella did, so she barely even used her powers. People from her home planet all had different elements. Some had water, fire, earth, or weather. And in her culture it was tradition to wear clothes that symbolized their element. So, Naida wore a dark blue, sleeveless top, showing a bit of her unnaturally pale skin, a pair of metallic-blue capris, as well as a pair of black boots that went past her ankles.

"Naida!" a young, familiar voice called out, stopping the girls from their brawl.

They all turned to see a girl about 14 years old running over to them. Her long, wavy, multicoloured hair fell in her face, covering her chocolate-brown eyes.

"Damara? What are you doing here?" Stella asked, still a bit in pain from the last attack Naida had thrown at her.

"Look! I learned a new technique!" she said, smiling. Though her smile didn't fool anyone. The last time Damara showed them a 'new technique', they were all teleported to Alaska. Damara's ability to bend the universe and do things that only a five-dimensional creature could do, were very unstable.

"Damara! Are you absolutely sure that you perfected this technique?" Naida said, nervous of what she was about to show them.

"You aren't going to do something as foolish as teleporting us to Alaska again, are you?" Bonnie asked.

Damara frowned, "No way! This has nothing to do with teleportation! Just watch!" Damara closed her eyes and started concentrating. A small, pink light started to glow around her, as she prepared for whatever she was going to show them.

Wow, she actually is concentrating. Maybe she won't mess up this time, Naida thought with a slight smile.

"Hey, look who it is! The freaks!" two teenage boys came into view from atop the rocks, laughing and pointing at the girls from not too far away. Naida was about to make a comeback, when she realized something. Something terrible. Damara had lost her concentration and was now looking at the two boys.

"Damara, focus on your technique!" Naida shouted. But it was too late. Damara's eyes widened as she looked in front of her. Naida looked behind her to see what held Damara's attention. A bright, purple vortex appeared behind the four girls and made a loud hissing sound, as it began to suck in the air around it.

"Wh-what?" Rocks flew passed Nerita into the vortex, and she yelled in fright as she was pulled towards the purple lights.

"Nerita!" Bonnie yelled. She ran towards her and tried to pull her away from the portal, but it was too strong for them. They both let out a scream as they disappeared in the vortex.

"See! I told you! Damara can't handle her powers! Look what she's done!" Stella screeched, grabbing hold of Naida's arm to keep herself from getting sucked in.

Damara had her eyes closed again. She was trying to close the vortex. Stella screamed, as her grip loosened on Naida's arm and she was flung backwards. Naida quickly ran after her, pulling Stella out from the vortex. However the strong force was too much for her, and before she knew it, Naida's firm grip on her rival and the ground had been lost, and she and Stella were pulled into the swirling portal.

"There!" Damara exclaimed, opening her eyes to see the vortex vanish. She had successfully made it disappear. But when she looked around for her friends, she realized that they were no longer with her at the beach. They weren't in New York City anymore, neither were they on Earth. They were in an unknown dimension.

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"Ow..." Naida grunted, as she slowly sat up. She felt long grass beneath her fingertips, and the cool wind through her long, black hair.

"Hey, Itachi, this one's awake!" a rough voice said. Naida's eyes quickly shot open. Who's voice was that?

"Heh...heh...So...should we kill them, Itachi?" Naida looked up and saw two men, one very tall. Both were wearing the same straw hats and black and red cloaks.

"...Who are you?" Naida demanded, standing up.

The taller man looked over at the person that stood beside him and said, "Should we tell her?"

The other man nodded, "I am Uchiha Itachi, and this is my partner Hoshigaki Kisame."

Both names sound weird...are they Japanese names or something? she furrowed her eyebrows in confusion. "Where am I?" Naida said, looking at her surroundings. Enormous trees loomed above them.

"First you tell us who you are," Kisame grunted, grabbing onto the handle of his sword.

"Naida..." she answered, barely even acknowledging Kisame's huge sword. She looked at the ground and saw her friends laying there unconscious. "No! Nerita! Bonnie! Stella!" She ran over to her friends, checking each of their pulses.

"Heh...strange friends you got there..." Kisame was right.

Stella was the only one of the four of them that looked normal. She had simple dirty-blond hair that went past her shoulders, and she wore a green tank-top and a blue skirt that went down to her knees.

But Nerita and Bonnie had strange appearances. Nerita had very curly and frizzy blue hair that went down her back. She wore a bikini top made of shells and a skirt made out of long, tree leaves, covering shorts that were made of shinny, golden scales.

Bonnie's hair was long, wavy, and purple. Her eyes were crimson and her skin was a faint blue. She wore a long sleeved, black shirt with bandages wrapped around her torso and wrists, and her pants were black as well, with bandages wrapped around her ankles and shoes.

"Nerita...wake up..." Naida shook her friend. Unfortunately, Nerita and the others were still out cold.

"Naida...you're not from around here, are you?" Itachi calmly asked.

Naida stopped her attempts to awaken her friends, and stood once more, facing the two strangers, "Well, that depends. Where am I?"

"You're in the forest outside of Konohagakure." Kisame said.

Naida looked puzzled. "Kon...ha...ga...cure? Pardon? I've never heard of a Konhagacure before..."

"It's Konohagak- oh forget it!" Kisame turned to his partner, "She's irritating. Can I kill her?"

Naida's eyes widened. "What...?"

Itachi stayed silent, deciding. "Don't take too long, Kisame. We must get going."

Kisame grinned and pulled off his straw hat, Itachi doing the same. Naida gasped at their appearances. "And you say my friends look weird! You're a fish!" she exclaimed.

"Oh, I'll have fun cutting you up!" Kisame lunged forward, sword in one hand.

Naida ducked from the swing of his giant sword and moved by a tree. "I'm not little!" she grumbled, leaping away from another swing.

"Stay still, brat." Kisame prepared for another attack, but was suddenly knocked backwards. He crashed into a tree, not too far from where Itachi was standing.

Itachi looked at Naida and saw something rather odd. She was floating about two feet off the ground, eyes glowing a bright, blue light. Swirling around her hands was clear water. She brought her hand out in front of her and aimed the water at Kisame, who was still trying to get up.

"Don't you underestimate me, Fish-man!" Naida said, water lashing forward at Kisame. He quickly blocked the attack with his sword, grunting at how surprisingly strong the water's pressure was.

"What kind of technique is this?" he growled.

"Well, what did you expect from a water user?" came a voice from behind Naida.

Naida turned around and saw Nerita smiling. "Nerita!" the alien exclaimed.

What a strange coincidence it was. Naida, Nerita and Kisame were all water users and they were about to get into a serious battle. Unfortunately, Nerita could only breathe underwater and talk to sea creatures. She had to use her weapon, a staff, if she wanted to actually fight.

"So...what's going on here?" Nerita asked, eyebrows furrowed in confusion.

"That fish-looking guy is trying to kill us!" Naida summoned more water from her palm and directed it at the swordsman.

While Kisame was being distracted from the water, Nerita snuck up behind him and whacked him hard on the head with her staff. Kisame stopped blocking the water with his sword and slowly fell to the ground, unconscious.

"Yay! We did it!" Nerita cheered.

"No wait..." Nerita stopped her little victory dance and looked back at Naida in confusion.

"What do you mean?" she asked. Naida nodded in the direction of the limp form a few feet away. Nerita looked at Kisame's still body, only to find it melt away into a puddle of water. "What? How's that possible?" she shouted.

"Heh...heh...you girls are definitely not from around here," came that same, gruff voice that belonged to none other than Hoshigaki Kisame.

The two turned around, only to be whacked with the giant sword. They both fell hard on the ground, grunting in pain.

Kisame's toothy grin suddenly faded and he turned his attention to Itachi, who was silently leaning against a tree, "Itachi...My Samehada isn't working on these brats."

"Indeed. I can't sense any chakra from them," said Itachi.

Kisame closed his eyes briefly and scowled. "Same."

"For some reason they don't have any chakra. Which is strange...chakra is necessary to live," came his only reply.

"What...the hell is chakra?" Stella stood up, finally awake. She looked at her fallen friends and then back at the two men. "You better tell me who you are, or else I'm seriously going to kick your asses all the way to Saturn!"

"Stella..." Nerita mumbled, struggling to stand. Naida stood and helped her friend up.

"Nerita, you go and help out Stella while I try to wake up Bonnie," Naida whispered to her, before dashing off to where Bonnie laid.

"Um...Naida didn't tell me their names, but she said that they're trying to kill us," Nerita glanced at Stella.

"Whatever. Why should I even care who these bozos are? Let's end this already so I can get back home and wash this sea water out of my hair," Stella snarled at her drenched appearance caused from Naida's earlier attack, and then looked up at the sky, a large bolt of lightening suddenly zapping the spot where Kisame stood.

Kisame hadn't expected something like that to happen, so he barely managed to jump away and ended up crashing into a tree.

"...Ugh...Where am I?" Bonnie slowly sat up and looked at Naida who had finally managed to wake her up.

"You're in Konhagacure...or something like that..." Naida looked behind her at the battle her friends were having with the fish-guy. It was two against one. Why didn't that Itachi guy come in and help his partner? Wait...Where is that Itachi guy? Naida noticed that the crimson-eyed man was no longer leaning by the tree.

A sudden pain coursed through the back of Bonnie's head and her eyes grew wide, then closed, as she fell back onto the ground. Naida looked up and saw Itachi standing there. He knocked out her friend! She glanced back at her teammates and saw that Kisame was carrying both of them under his arms. And both of them were unconscious.

"You're coming with us," Itachi said. Naida looked back up at him, just in time to see the back of his hand being brought down on her neck, knocking her out.

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"What were you thinking, hmm? Leader's gonna be pissed!"

"Yes, you're not permitted to bring in outsiders."

"I think Leader's gonna like what we have to show him right, Itachi?"

"Yes."

"I don't think Leader will be interested in a group of chicks, yeah."

"That is not the reason why we have brought them."

"Then what is, hmm?"

"That's none of your concern."

The conversation was hushed, but still loud enough to end up disrupting the fuzy thoughts in Naida's head. Her senses were slowly coming back to her. First she heard the voices of four men, and then she felt herself being gently held in what felt like an arm. Next came sight, she could easily tell since figures started to appear in her foggy vision, as her eyes slowly fluttered open.

"Hey, that chick's waking up, un!" Naida suddenly felt four pairs of eyes on her. She glanced at her surroundings. She was in a dark cave-like room, and three people clad in long, black cloaks stood in front of her. Then she realized that one of the figures was carrying Nerita and Stella under his arms. Then where was Bonnie? Oh yeah, Bonnie was being carried by Itachi. Naida glanced up, seeing crimson eyes staring down at her. Yes, apparently Itachi was holding her as well.

"Oh, hyenda," she cursed under her breath in her alien tongue. "Put me down, dammit!" Naida struggled, but his grip only tightened.

"Ooh...you got a feisty one there, Itachi," said a grinning blonde. Naida squinted her eyes up at the blonde. Is that a boy...? Or a girl? she thought.

"It seems that this one tends to wake up faster then the others," Kisame stated. "Well, Itachi, shouldn't we be going to Leader now?"

Itachi nodded. The two started to walk away from the others, Naida pointing out to herself that one of them that they had conversed with looked pretty strange, with his slouched body and mask-covered face. Oh well, she thought, all that matters is getting out of here.

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Naida and her unconscious friends were brought to an even darker room. Though, for some odd reason, she was able to see a lone figure in the darkness, standing before the six.

"Itachi. Kisame. What odd thing occurred to make you bring such strange girls to the hideout?" the voice asked in a menacing voice.

"Leader-sama," Itachi addressed the man, "I apologize for breaking the rules by bringing people back with us, but when we were returning from our mission, Kisame and I had discovered four girls outside of Konoha, unconscious. When one of them woke up, I gave Kisame permission to kill her. When this girl," he gestured by lifting Naida up a bit higher, "tried to fight back, she demonstrated odd powers. Her friends did the same."

"Define 'odd powers'," Leader said.

"For one, these girls don't have any chakra," Kisame said, "and that girl, Naida I think she said her name was, had preformed some kind of water technique without using any chakra or hand signs. She was also...flying."

"Flying?" Leader didn't seem like he believed what they were saying.

"It's true. We brought them here because we think they might be of some use," Itachi said in his monotone voice.

"Hmm...is that so?" Leader looked down at the confused Naida, "Then I guess I'll have to test their abilities."

What dimension are we in? Naida frowned at the lack of knowing her location. And what's this 'Akatsuki'?

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Well that's the first chapter. I hope it was interesting. If you liked it or have any other comments about the story, such as tips for how to improve my writing, then please send me a review!