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I thought of this a short while back.

Bella

I stood alone and stared into her blood red eyes, "Please Victoria! Please don't kill me or Edward!"

"Your mate killed my mate! Why shouldn't I kill you?" She stalked towards me and he eyes started to darken.

My brain whizzed and thought of something to say then, it would break my heart but it was all I could think of, "What if I said that I wasn't Edward's mate? That I was someone else's?"

Her eyes seemed to soften, "Let me guess! He kissed your sorry butt goodbye because you're human? And now he's returned just so he can kill me and leave you be? Or did he come back expecting you to run into his arms but you already had this new mate?"

I nodded, "Yeah. He left because I'm too fragile for him. He wanted me back but I don't want him anymore!"

Victoria nodded, "This new mate, how much do you love him?" Why is she asking this?

"Not very much. But I don't love Edward one bit anymore! He can go after a stripper or a slut for all I care!" Keep it together, Bella, keep it together!

Victoria nodded, "Well, seeing as he has no mate now. I guess I ought to be going. I'll get used to being alone soon enough!" She turned and sulked off. Bella, what are you doing? If you even think about following her! I didn't obey myself. My legs pushed me forward.

"Victoria, why don't I come with you?" Are you insane? She was trying to kill you a minute ago! Be thankful that she's going!

Her eyes brightened, "Really? Okay, then! I'll make you into a vampire so you can come with me!" My eyes got brighter too when she said that. Then I heard voices and knew it was Jacob and Edward. Oh, shit!

I smiled, hoping that she hadn't heard them yet, somehow. By the look on her face it seemed she thought they were just some hickers. The wind wasn't blowing so she mustn't be able to smell them either. I took one deep breath then nodded and tilted my head slightly. She lunged at me and I felt her taking my blood. I then felt very weak, she must have a certain way of doing this or something. I then felt extremely weak, then I felt the burning I felt the first time with James. It cursed through me. I understood now why she'd removed my blood. The venom filled up my empty veins and changed me a lot faster then the Cullens had told me it would take. I saw all the memories flashed past my eyes, but different. I saw Edward hanging out with me but then staring at Jessica and Angela with lust in his eyes. How had I missed that? No it can't be true, it must be the vampire senses. When I felt the venom leaking to my heart I knew there wouldn't be much of a fight. I had to scream at that point, I knew Edward and Jacob would be very close by now and would have heard me. I estimated it was only a few minutes later. I saw Victoria standing over me and snarling at Edward and Jacob. For a moment I didn't know who they were then I remembered all the things I'd seen Edward doing before we were officially a couple and I felt my blood boil, even thought that probably wasn't what was happening. I stood and growled at them. Edward's face was one of only shook. Jacob's was one of fear. I glared at both of them and knew that my eyes were the colour of blood red. then I felt the thirst but I easily controlled it. I continued to snarl.

Edward stepped forward carefully, "Bella, what happened?" I just glared at him.

Victoria answered for me, "Do you think she's fragile now? She's my friend and doesn't want you anymore!" Edward's face changed.

"It this true Bella?" Edward asked.

"Yes," I was only slightly surprised by my voice, "I fucking hate you, now, you bastard!"

"Bella, what did I do?" Edward asked.

"You were always staring at other girl's, "He was about to answer but I just snarled, "NO! Don't you dare speak to me with lies! I saw you, my human senses were just too blind not to see it!"

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