This was born out of many wandering plot bunnies and a challenge from Kirra Maree J. Here's the challenge…

Dare

I want to see if anyone can write a story for me.

I'm not good at writing, but I like seeing what other people write, that's why I spend most of my time on fanfiction.

I'm wondering if someone can write a story to do with Lindsay's past. I have an idea where the guy that murdered her friends is released/escapes from jail, and comes back to get her.

The rest is up to you, so happy writing

So without further adieu, enjoy.


In the nearly four years since he had been sentenced to prison he had changed, he'd learned some new skills, made a few friends, if fellow killers could be qualified as friends, and discovered something about himself that he'd never known about, even 14 years ago when he'd killed everyone in that diner, except for the one person who was able to put him here, in this hole they call prison.

He is a beast of legend, never meant to exist outside of old stories and Hollywood's imaginings, the very thing that haunted people's dreams and caused them to be afraid of the woods.

Not only is he a killer, murder of 4(?) innocent people for no real reason, he is a killer beast, known to rip men limb from limb, nearly indestructible and make even the strongest and biggest of men cower in fear. He is a wolf, more correctly a were-wolf, a being stronger, better and higher than any other human alive. Prison is no place for him, for he will be the one to lead humanity into a new era, the era of the were-wolf.

Tonight fellow prisoners and guards alike will know his true nature; tonight will begin the new era. Tonight he will escape, and settle some unfinished business before he goes about creating his new order.

A prisoner and guard walk by, unaware of what will happen. He smiles evilly as the two of them look at him, causing them to walk faster. Good, they should be afraid because he will tear them apart and as soon as he's finished... well let's just say those CSI's won't have much to work with.

And speaking of CSI's, Lindsay Monroe, the one person who survived his massacre in the diner all those years ago, the person who put him here and the person who inadvertently helped him discover his true nature… she will suffer for sending him here and somehow surviving his rampage in the diner. This time, she won't be nearly as lucky, this time she will be on the receiving end.

This time… well she'll know exactly how he feels right now.

Daniel Cadence is back with a vengance.


Yes, I know, not your typical CSI story at all. But I'm hoping that this turns into an excellent story, any and all suggestions are welcome, but please use common sense. Please review.

Also, for no reason other than I can, the first person to review and tell me the names of the three big Goa'uld villains the SG-1 team faces, gets… well a surprise that will be shared later.

Watching way too much Stargate and varying cop dramas (a.k.a., CSI, NCIS, ext.),

NCIS Band Geek

P.S. does anyone happen to know EXACTLY how many people were killed in the diner? It's been a while since I saw that particular episode.