Naruto, Curse Or Blessing?

Hi, My name is DescendantOfTheGods and this is my first fanfiction and i ask that you don't be too hard on me or flame it considering i am only 13 years old. That means there WILL be some misspelling and grammar mistakes I will probably only be doing this one for a while as i have school to deal with. I can't update every day, but i will try maybe once a week? Anyway here's your story, hope you enjoy Naru****.

Chapter 1: A world of Darkness

Naruto's POV

Streets of Konoha

They're chasing me again. Why can't they leave me alone, why can't they just leave me alone. This always happens. I'm not allowed into shops anywhere, and they keep looking at me with those cold hateful eyes. They call me demon brat, abomination and demon killer. WHY CAN'T THEY JUST LEAVE ME ALONE! "COME BACK HERE YOU DEMON!" One of the villagers of Konoha screamed. "YOU KILLED MY FAMILY, I'M GONNA MAKE YOU PAY!" A chunin yelled. "WHY CAN'T YOU LEAVE ME ALONE!" I screamed back, just as a kunai hit my left leg and I tumbled and fell to the floor of a dark alley. As they surrounded me, I started trembling and crawled backwards against the wall. " You can't run away now Demon!" A jounin said cackling like a maniac. And it began. Stabbing me. Hitting me with anything they could find.

Normal POV

As his blood splattered on the ground around him, Naruto went trough a mental shutdown, his sky blue eyes going dull, the screams of pain stopping and the hope that it would stop disappearing. An ANBU suddenly appeared, grabbed Naruto and disappeared with him, taking him to the Sandaime Hokage's office.

Hokage Tower, Sandaime's Office

As The ANBU appeared in the room the Sandaime looked up from his archenemy: paperwork, only to see the 5 year old jinchuriki hanging limp in the arms of the ANBU. He scowled as this was the 4th time this week he had seen this. But this time it looked worse. The kid still had shuriken sticking out of his arms. "Get a medic nin here now! That's an order!" He yelled with his voice leaving no room for complaint. The ANBU left Naruto on The old Sarutobi's Desk and shunsined away to the the Hospital while the Sandaime started basic medical treatment on him.

Naruto's POV

I opened my eyes and sat up in the familiar white bed. I even had my own hospital bed now. I looked over the room and met the gaze of a scowling Sandaime. "What happened?" he asked, his voice filled with worry and regret. "The same thing that always happens. They tried to kill me." was my reply, he flinched ad looked, before i stood up, my wounds already healed. I walked out the door and left the hospital. In my thoughts I didn't notice the little girl trailing behind me, hiding behind trash cans and boxes. Everyone yelled their usual profanities, but I just ignored them until one of them hit me in the back of the head with a pole and I blacked out.

Normal POV

The little girl walked up to the boy just lying on the ground out cold. She had been following him all day, everywhere except the Hokage Tower. He was bleeding from the back of his head and his hair was changing color from yellow to being soaked red in blood. Knowing he was watching her, she called out "Ko, come out and help him, he's bleeding!" Ko, Her guardian showed up and said "Of course Lady Hyuuga, let's take him to the hospital right now". As he picked Naruto up, he stirred and opened his eyes and Ko was shocked to see the once bright and cheerful eyes so cold and lifeless.

End of Chapter 1

So what you think? Am i any good or what?

Naruto: Why'd you have to make go trough all that!?

DOTG: Oh don't be a wuss you've been trough rape in other people's fanfics.

Naruto: Please stop reminding me of that, those memories are horrible.

Kyuubi: When do i make an entrance? I wanna be a part of this too!

DOTG: a few chapters probably, in the meantime we will timeskipe to six-year old and academy freshman.

Hinata: I'm joining the academy too! I get to watch Naruto all day long! (faints)

DOTG: Anyway, Hope you all enjoyed my first chapter, and there will be a new one within 72 hours. Remember to push the little button "review" when leaving the story. As for now protect what's important to you!

I rewrote this one