You belonged to me the minute I first saw you

My first chapter of you belonged to me the minute I first saw you, purely just fan fiction. Please comment (:

I could have done without this

Today is the day when everything changed for Rachel Berry. It was confirmed that Rachel just got the lead to play Fanny Brice in funny girl. Here's how the morning goes with the phone call-

*Flashback*

Rachel's phone rings.

"Hello Rachel Berry speaking"

"Hello miss Berry it's the producer of Funny girl and I would like to congratulate you for getting the lead part in the play, to play Fanny Brice"

*Squeals and in shock* "omg are you kidding me? I mean thank you very much"

"You're welcome Miss Berry we will see you in rehearsals starting next week"

"Ok thank you, see you then"

*Puts her phone down and screams jumping up and down*

Kurt comes rushing into the room "Rachel are you ok? I heard a scream" Kurt says looking at Rachel with a concerned look on his face "yeah I'm fine, it's just the producer of funny girl on the phone" Rachel says looking down at the floor. "What did they say" he asks. "I got the part" Rachel screams and jumps and down with Kurt. "Omg Rachel that is wonderful news well done" Kurt says still jumping up and down with Rachel.
"Yeah I'm going to go shopping and buy some new clothes so that we can celebrate later" Rachel says "ok see you later" Kurt says walking into the kitchen

*Present*

Rachel's Pov: My life couldn't get any happier, I've just had a phone call saying I'm going to be acting on Broadway. I'm really excited and I can't wait to get started but my first job is to go shopping and buy me some more clothes to celebrate that I got it and so that I have nice clothes to go out in later. Kurt's really happy for me but I need to ring my friends I texted Dianna and she's meeting me at the mall and I need to ring to my friend Puck.

Ringing Puck

"Hi this is Puck sorry I can't take your call at the moment I'm probably busy with some girl or falling asleep or maybe actually doing something good but please feel free to leave a message after the beep"

Beep

"Hi Puck this is Rachel calling I thought I would call you to let you know that I have got the role to play Fanny in the play funny girl and to let you know that me and Kurt with some other friends are going out to celebrate tonight, we're meeting at my apartment first otherwise we will meet you in the club down town ok bye"

Puck Pov: I woke up today and the time was about 1pm, man I must have gone to bed late last night. I looked at my phone to see if I had any texts and found that I had a voice mail by Rachel. I decided to call her back.

Rachel answers her phone while walking

"Oh hi Puck" she says as she walks down the path

"Hi Rachel I just got your voice mail and I wanted to let you know that I am pleased for you and that I will come tonight" Puck says sitting on the sofa drinking a cup of water

"Thanks and ok yeah see you tonight"

"Yeah see you tonight"

They both hang up

2 hours later Rachel is walking back to her apartment but is waiting at traffic lights

Traffic lights turn red and she crosses the road

Rachel screams and there is a bang and a load of people rushing over

So that's the first chapter done please comment (: