Land of Steel REMASTERED

by suplexedatrain

Shirou Emiya, after destroying the Greater Grail, ends up in the world of Campione. This is his journey. (Improved version of the earlier Land of Steel with more action and less plot holes)

1. Chapter 1

Land of Steel

Disclaimer: Fate Stay/Night and Campione belong to their respective creators. I don't get any money doing this.

Chapter I REWRITE

-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\Emiya Shirou's perspective-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\

Near the Tokyo Tower and the Kyu Shiba Rikyu Gardens existed a surprisingly large number of temples and shrines.

Among them was the Nanao Shrine. A shrine right in the heart of Tokyo.

I, Emiya Shirou, and a silver-haired little girl called Athena were trudged up the flight of steps under the gaze of the moon.

Athena was dressed in a thin wool jacket, a miniskirt and knee-high socks. Above her silvery hair she wore a knitted cap.

I had my red tee and my usual pants on. The only change was that the shroud wrapped around my right arm was on my neck, serving as a scarf.

At the end of the stairs was Mariya Yuri. Hands clasped around Athena's prized Gorgoneion, she desperately prayed. Such was her concentration, that she completely failed to notice Athena and me.

Walking up to her, I lightly tapped her on the forehead.

"Mariya-san. You know what I've come for. Surrender the Gorgoneion."

"A-And if I do not?" Inspite of her obvious fear, Mariya-san bravely answered back.

"Then I'll do- this." Giving her a light chop on her shoulder, I rendered her unconscious.

"That was inelegant act for the one who holds the title of a king."

King, huh. Due to certain reasons, I, a 17 year old also bore the title of a 'king'.

"Elegant or not, it was efficient, wasn't it?" Clasped in Mariya-san's fingers was the Gorgoneion. I handed it to Athena.

Smiling, Athena took it from my hands. Clasping it between her fingers, she prayed towards the skies.

"One sings, the carol of the trinity goddess. Connecting skies, earth with darkness, reincarnation with wisdom.

One sings, the melody of the demoted goddess. Born as queen yet seen as snake of forbiddance, to the queen's grievance

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One sings, the ballad of the traumatized goddess. Disgraced by the esteemed father, fell to humiliation as the mother.

One named Athena, daughter of Zeus, patron of Athens, maiden of eternity.

Past, is the nurturing earth mother of all things!

Past, is the dark mistress of the underworld!

Past, is the spreading of heavenly wisdom from the enlightened goddess!

One pledges, Athena shall soon return to the Athena of origin!"

At the conclusion of the prayer, Athena began to change.

The immaturity disappeared from her features.

Her modern clothes were replaced by those of antiquity.

Currently, she looked about seventeen years old.

"Um, have you recovered your power?",I asked the Goddess of Wisdom.

"Yes, the power of The Tripartite Goddesses is now mine. Thou shalt receive thy reward soon."

Since I decided to assist her, she said she would reward me after she had regained her true strength. Even though I insisted I don't need a reward or anything…

"No, it isn't that, I just think something has gone wrong."

Seeing the doubt on my face, she frowned. "Has not my spiritual strength grown? Why doth thou believe so?"

"Have you gained any more Authorities?"

Her frown grew larger. That told me my answer.

"Do you think your ritual went wrong somewhere?"

"I suppose so…" I detected a hint of nervousness in her stoic demeanour.

"Well, why don't you use your Spirit Vision to find out your mistake?" Athena's Spirit Vision was something else. Mariya Yuri had recorded the highest success rate at successful Spirit Vision at 60%. On the contrary, Athena had boasted that her Spirit Vision success rate was 200%.

Athena closed her eyes and calmed herself. After about five minutes later, she opened her eyes.

"To evolve to a true Heretic Goddess, I must obtain all the knowledge recorded in the Gorgoneion. To do so, I must conduct the Ritual of Ascension in a Greek Temple…"

"And unfortunately, we aren't in a Greek temple right now." Athena nodded in response.

"Still, this IS a temple. Can't you conduct the ritual here?"

"It should be possible. I believe that the name of this shrine is Nanao. While the preparations for the ritual are being made, would you guard the temple till the completion of the ritual?"

"What preparations do you need to make?"

"First, I need to make a barrier around the temple. Then, desecrate all the deities in the temple. Later, the place has to be purified. Due to absence of ritual ingredients, I shall have to align to the leylines of the city and unleash my divine aura. Later I…-"

I interrupted her. "I meant, how long will it take? And why can't you help me with Kusanagi and then start the ritual?"

"The only reason I can carry out the ritual is due to the fact that it's a full moon tonight and the fact that I myself am a Goddess of the Night. Also, I must carry out the ritual at midnight. Helping you will remove precious time and stop me from completing the ritual."

I wanted to ask her, couldn't she return to Greece and complete the ritual there. It would save us both a lot of hardship. But I didn't. She was desperate. Desperate to regain her power, desperate to prove her strength to her father Zeus, who had wronged her. As desperate as I had been when I agreed to have Archer's arm implanted in me.

"I understand. Will there be any side effects due to the ritual?"

"After I unleash my divinity, there shall be complete and utter darkness around the city. Fear not; no casualties shall take place."

Divine power. The magic allowed to those who were divine. This was different from the magic used by humans, which was akin to praying. Divine power was similar to commanding something to take place. Only a God could possess divine power. But due to my Authority, I could use divine power too. Athena could turn anything to stone, submerge the area in darkness, send people to sleep,summon a scythe... and this was without the power of the Gorgoneion. Due to being a Greek Goddess with the attributes of Earth, Darkness and Knowledge she had very wide capabilities.

Compared to her, I was rather weak. I could use my divine power to summon a light saber, break curses and reinforce myself with it to protect myself from magic. This was due to the fact that I was a beginner in this world's magic. A Persian Grimoire would help me out a fair bit. Athena also taught me the basics of this world's magic-she called it Herme's Arts- of [Instruction], [Hypnosis] and [Healing].

"I shall do so. Also, what should we do with the miko?"

Miko? Oh… I looked at the unconscious Mariya-san.

"Well, she can't really interfere anymore, can she? At the most, she can ask Kusanagi to get here faster, which he'll be doing anyway. It's best to wake her up and send her out of here."

Agreeing to me, Athena used a quick spell to rouse Mariya-san from her sleep.

Mariya-san, even after just waking up, was fully conscious. After picking herself up from the ground, she fearfully looked at me.

"Last thing I remember is holding the Gorgoneion…the Gorgoneion!? Where is the Gorgoneion?" Forgetting her fear, Mariya-san angrily shouted at me.

Athena flipped the Gorgoneion like a coin. "The Serpent has been returned to me and soon it's power shall be mine! King Shirou has graciously allowed thee to escape. It would be best if you heed his words."

"Um…Mariya…Yuri-san, wasn't it? As you can see, we've already obtained the Gorgoneion. Opposing us won't get you anywhere. So, it's best to leave now."

Looks like she's finally started to understand what kind of opponents she is facing. "I-I thank you for your benevolence, Shirou-sama and Athena-sama. I shall make my leave now." With this hurried greeting, she fled out of the shrine.

"I returned to my conversation with Athena."Since we need to protect the temple, it would be best if I return to the foot of the shrine. If that guy tries to destroy the temple with the boar, everything will be finished."

Athena appears to have agreed with me. Just as I turned to the stairs, Athena moved closer to me and quickly locked lips with me. Earlier, when Athena instructed me in this world's magic, she had kissed me too. But at that time, I was able to shrug it off due to Athena's child-like figure. But now, as her lips were pressed against mine and her soft breasts rubbed against my chest, I felt guilty.

"Emiya Shirou, I wish thee luck. Return victorious."

"Yeah...same to you...Wait. What was the kiss for?" I couldn't detect any magic inserted into me.

"Tradition dictates that a maiden may kiss her protector for luck. To say it in thy manner of speech, a good-luck kiss." That answer took me by surprise. A good luck kiss?!

Embarrassed, I quickly returned her greetings and started my way down the shrine.

I started walking down the stairs. Looking behind, Athena was casting some sort of high-level magic, probably to guard the shrine from intruders. We parted in opposite directions. I walked down the stairs and out of the shrine.

As I made my way below, all the streetlights had lost their power. The area was completely dark, just as Athena had said it would be.

Taking a position directly in front of the gate, I Traced Kanshou and Bakuya. Taking a defensive stance, I took a position to guard the gate. With only the moon for company, I waited.

-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\Kusanagi Godou's perspective-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\

I thought that Athena had retreated after her last encounter. Unfortunately, she hadn't. Touma-san informed me that she was on her way to the Nanao Shrine to retrieve the Gorgoneion.

Due to this, I and Erica found ourselves packed in Anna's crazy car.

Erica had tried to use [Instruction] on me, but due to the car shaking violently I was unable to concentrate on learning.

After an indeterminate amount of time, we finally reached Shobakouen station. From there, I directed the way to Anna-san.

Some distance away from the shrine, Anna stopped her car. The reason was "too dangerous for a non-combatant to be around." Out of the crazy car, both Erica and I heaved sighs of relief.

Both of us started running in the shrine's direction.

Just then, I received a call.

"It's me, Mariya. Kusanagi-san?! Where are you right now?"

"A few minutes away from the Nanao Shrine. Mariya-san, I'll be there in a moment, please wait with the Gorgoneion!"

"I'm sorry Kusanagi-san! I lost the Gorgoneion!"

"What?!"

"Athena arrived to take it from me! She tried to magically take it back. When it didn't work, her companion knocked me out."

On hearing this, Erica replied,"Since she couldn't call your name, the [Wind] Authority didn't work. Looks like we were too late."

"Dammit. What do we do now?"

"After they woke me up, I heard them say that they need to do a ritual to awaken the Gorgoneion's power. It will take her some time to complete the ritual."

"Got it. Mariya-san. Where are you now and what happened to Touma-san?"

"I am spending the night with a H.C.C. member. Touma-san…looks like he retreated. The other H.C.C. members are safe too. Also, before I forget, Athena's had a partner. He is a Campione."

"T-that's impossible!"

I could see Erica's disbelief in her words and expression. Compared to her, I didn't doubt Mariya's analysis. After all, she had correctly found out that I was a Campione.

But that created another question; what were Emiya Shirou's Authorities? Without their knowledge, I couldn't deploy the sword against him.

If Mariya san used her spirit vision, she could find out the God he defeated and make it easier for me. "Mariya-san, could I request you to-"

Mariya-san interrupted me. "I had a divination sometime after fleeing the temple. He has the Authority of Ahura Mazda, the Persian God of Light. He also had the feel of Angra Mainyu, Ahura Mazda's greatest enemy."

"Thank you Mariya-san. We'll…we'll talk again after I get the Gorgoneion back."

"Yes…Good luck, Kusanagi-san."

I turned to Erica. "Erica, could you…well…teach me about Ahura Mazda?" Both of us fully knew what this teaching meant. I wasn't even embarrassed. Looks like I've become used to kissing Erica. "As you command, my king."

Holding my face with both her hands, we kissed.

As our lips intertwined, knowledge about Ahura Mazda & Angra Mainyu flowed into my mind.

-Persian Gods of Good and Evil, the Unborn God, All the Evils of the World…

As our lips parted, I got the sensation that the Authority of the [Sword] had reached it's full potential.

Now that I have the complete power of the sword, all I need to do is to stop Athena's ritual. I have to destroy the temple.

But Athena has somehow allied with a Campione. If I spend too much time fighting him, I may not be able to defeat Athena…

Sensing my thoughts, Erica reassured me. "Relax Godou. I haven't heard of any Campione coming in Japan. The guy who is allied with Athena must have become a Campione very recently, right? If it's like that, you can definitely win!"

"Thanks."

Overthinking the situation won't do any good. I'll save my thoughts about this guy until I meet him. Along with Erica, I ran to the Nanao Shrine.

-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\Kusanagi Godou's perspective-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\

I finally made my way near the Nanao Shrine. Erica said that she would support me from far away. Just as Mariya said, there was a guy guarding the path. Holding two swords, he calmly guarded the stairs. So this was the mysterious Campione…

He hasn't noticed me yet.

Looking at his posture, I could sense that he was a master swordsman. Not as good as Doni maybe, but definitely better than Erica.

Since he hasn't noticed me, I'll activate my Authority-

"As the one who holds all victory in my hands, I am the strongest.

Man and devil - all enemies, all who harbor enmity will be vanquished.

I shall smash through all enemies in my way!"

I activated the [Bull]. It's restriction was that the opponent should be stronger than me.

"Stop hiding and face me. Or are you too afraid to do so?" Looks like he heard the chant and found out about me.

I walked forward to face him. Raising my voice, I asked him, "Who are you?"

The tall, red-haired boy answered me, "My name is Emiya Shirou. You must be Kusanagi Godou, right?"

"Yeah. I need to stop Athena from regaining her power. Would you kindly get out of the way?"

"Sorry, but Athena asked me to stop anyone from passing through. She is conducting some sort of ritual. It would be bad if anyone interferes." If she completes the ritual, she will ascend to a true Heretic God! I'd better stop her before that!

"So, you refuse to get out of the way, do you?" Looks like there is no other option than to fight.

"As you can see. If you try to pass through, I'll be forced to attack you. Retreat now."

"Sorry, I cannot do that! I'll beat you and then destroy the temple!"

I ran behind instead of moving forward to confront him.

Running at him with the [Bull] would be definite suicide. It didn't work on Erica and this guy is stronger than Erica. I'll just be cut down mid-punch.

He wasn't following. Of course, he wouldn't. No guard would move away from the place he is protecting.

There was a street-light nearby. It had stopped working due to Athena's interference. I uprooted it with my boosted strength.

Even though I felt guilty about destroying public property, it was the best path to victory.

Wielding it like a spear, I charged at Emiya.

"Trace on: Rho Aias!"

To confront my makeshift weapon, he summoned a pink seven-layered barrier.

The street-light I was wielding made contact with the barrier.

Even though I was pouring all my strength, I could not break the barrier. Instead, the street-light was breaking.

"O' mighty bull that possesseth the horns of shining gold, grant me your aid!"

Spell words that boosted the power of my Authority. More power flowed into my body. I directed it into my hands.

In exchange, I had only ten minutes left until the strength of the [Bull] receded.

Pouring strength into my fists, I pushed the makeshift spear at the barrier.

No damage. Just WHAT is this damn thing made of?!

"All evil things, fear me! Unjust beings of power, cannot defeat me! - for I am strongest, able to break all barriers!"

I poured even more magic into the spell words, increasing my strength.

-2 minutes left.

My fists were burning. According to my wishes, the entire strength of the [Bull] Authority was concentrated into my fists. It hurt. It felt like they would explode.

On the good side, the barrier was breaking.

At an astonishing speed.

First layer. Second layer. Third layer.

Emiya's face was worried. This was the first time I had seen him like this.

Fourth layer. Fifth layer.

All the seven layers of the barrier were probably of the same level of strength. Hence, when I could successfully penetrate one, the same carried over to the others…

Sixth layer. Seventh…

"Rho Aias!"

The final layer of the barrier… exploded, taking the colliding head of the streetlight with it. Also, I lost the [Bull] Authority. Unable to hold it any longer, the remaining part of the streetlight held by me fell.

A draw. Even though I managed to pierce the barrier, I couldn't directly damage him. The same for him.

"Trace on!" Summoning a sword in his right hand, he easily closed the distance between us.

The thrust of his blade was fast. At this speed, there was no way I could avoid it. Hence…

"Fear of the winged, both the evil and the powerful, all shall fear I who hold these feathered wings. My wings will bring you curse and just deserts!"

Super speed, acceleration and lightness of the body. These were the boosts offered by the [Raptor].

I easily avoided the slash of the sword. But just when I took the moment to counterattack, I missed by around 10 meters.

Avoiding his counter to my failed counter, I forgot the most important part:

I was currently behind Emiya Shirou, some distance away from the steps leading to the Nanao Shrine.

But before I could realize that, I heard a few words behind me:

"Trace set. Accel max!"

Around a dozen swords rained at me at lightning speed. All aimed at my feet.

Caught unaware, they pierced my feet and stopped the [Raptor] Authority.

"Guh!" The injuries were nothing special. Still, this was the first time in the fight that I had been directly damaged.

Due to being attacked on my feet, the [Raptor] was dispelled. Stunned due to my injuries and unreinforced by any Authority, I could not react as Emiya threw me out.

-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\Emiya Shirou's perspective-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\

Damn it. That speed Authority almost got me. I didn't even notice how he ended up behind me… I was lucky I got him unaware.

Even before that, due to breaking Rho Aias, I had taken injuries on my left arm and knee. Even though Avalon was healing me, the fact was that a complete amateur had hurt me. I couldn't hold back anymore…

Snapping out of my thoughts, I looked at Kusanagi.

Instinctively, I knew that his [Speed] Authority had been dispelled. Lucky me.

He got up. Looking somewhat dazzled, he started reciting his spellwords.

"I am the dragon of injustice, the strongest and the most wicked of butchers! The sword that protects the men and women of righteousness, obey me!"

Rays of light formed around Kusanagi.

"To become a Campione, you defeated the Persian God of Evil, Angra Mainyu. That is the power you have usurped!"

"That's right." Was my instinctive reply.

The rays of light began turning into swords. Instinctively, I knew the fact that these swords were forged to defeat the God Angra Mainyu.

20%. These swords were not complete. Even though I should attack when those weapons were weak, I decided to wait until they were fully forged and add them to my arsenal. Even though I had defeated Angra Mainyu, I instinctively knew we would meet again and I wanted to be prepared for our meeting…

"Before the arrival of Zoroaster, the Persian prophet, the Iranians worshipped numerous gods. Their greatest foe was Angra Mainyu, the God who represented All the Evil in the World!"

55%. As Kusanagi recited the knowledge of the spellwords, the power of his increased. A golden longsword appeared in his hands.

"Zoroaster denounced the old gods and pronounced Ahura Mazda, the old God of Light as the one true creator god. Likewise, Angra Mainyu was also elevated to the true evil, constantly harassing the God of Light!"

At the same moment, Kusanagi attacked me by launching the incomplete sword at me. I intercepted it with a few D ranked Noble Phantasms.

"Angra Mainyu, the principle of evil, created the Daevas and the Drujs, male and female demons to increase the rule of evil! They were created to overcome the hold of good in the world and to oppose Ahura Mazda!"

85%. Almost complete…

"This is the truth of Angra Mainyu, the God you have defeated! Emiya Shirou, the sword to defeat you has been forged! Brace yourself!"

He swung the golden longsword in his hands. A large number of golden swords were aimed at me.

That said, I didn't need to wait any longer. The [Sword] to defeat Angra Mainyu had been recorded into my collection.

I intercepted the golden swords launched at me by firing my traced swords at them.

"You must have noticed something. All this while, as you were ratting off stuff from a mythology book, I didn't lift a single finger. You must be wondering why?"

"Trace on." With two words, I replicated the entire armory of swords created by Kusanagi.

"Trace bullet: Continuous fire!" With four words, I fired the entire armory at the panicking Kusanagi.

-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\Emiya Shirou's perspective-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\-\

Our fight was locked in a stalemate. Due to having the same type of power, we both knew how to counter each other.

When he launched a sword at me, I intercepted it with a sword from my creation and vice-versa.

Even though I hadn't taken a single injury, I hadn't managed to hurt Kusanagi either. Even though I could keep on dragging this fight on, it was in my best interest to finish this fight early.

"Trace on!" This time, I summoned Archer's bow and Caladbolg, the sword of the Irish hero, Fergus Mac Roich. Applying [Alteration] on Caladbolg, I reshaped it to make it more like an arrow. At the end, it resembled a giant screw more than anything else.

Loading it into my bow, I aimed it at Kusanagi. Seeing my threatening posture, Kusanagi launched his golden blades at me.

"Caladbolg II!" Calling the true name of the blade, I filled it with more [Od] than it could handle, breaking it. I released the Broken Phantasm.

I expected Kusanagi to block the exploding arrow by his golden blades. Instead,

"Leave the arrow alone. Aim for that bastard!" Saying this, he commanded his arrows. Kusanagi was pouring his magical power into the golden sword held by him! He was planning to cut the arrow!

Taking me by surprise, the golden swords cut into my flesh, destroying the essence of Angra Mainyu within me.

Just as the arrow entered his range, Kusanagi slashed it. Unfortunately, an A+ rank projectile wouldn't be stopped from just that.

Kusanagi was thrown away by the explosion that destroyed one of Berserker's lives.

-Chapter end-

_Authorities used_

By Kusanagi Godou

[Bull]

Strength A+

Speed C+

Defence D

{Restriction: Opponent should be physically stronger than you}

{Main: Allows super strength to be used; Concentrated around arms}

{Additional: Pain tolerance increased}

[Golden Sword of the Warrior]

Strength A++ (while attacking an Authority; full incantation)

Strength C (while attacking anything other than an Authority; full incantation)

Speed C+

Defence D+

{Restriction: Should have in-depth information about the God the Authority is to be used against; Usually transferred via [Instruction] spell}

{Main: Seals Authorities}

{Additional: Complete mastery of conventional weapons}

[Raptor]

Strength D+

Speed A++

Defence D+

By Emiya Shirou

Nil

{Restriction: Opponent should be faster than you are; can be triggered by a martial artist's punch, or a surprise attack}

{Main: Allows Godspeed}

{Additional: Will cause heart pains if used for too long}

_Skills used_

By Kusanagi Godou

Nil

By Emiya Shirou

[Reinforcement]

Note- Due to becoming a Campione, the initial strength and the limits of his body have increased many times over.

Strength(Max.) –B++

Speed(Max.)-C+

Defence(Max.)-C+

Max. means maximum at the moment. After further training rank may increase.

_Weapons used_

Kanshou and Bakuya (Archer's favored dual falcions)

Rank-C+ (when wielded together)

Caliburn

Rank-B+

Imitation of the [Sword]

Rank-A++ (on Angra Mainyu/related)

Rank-D(on anything else)

Rho Aias

Rank-?

Caladbolg II(broken)

Rank-A++

This is the remastered version of Land of Steel's rewrite. Remastered not rewritten! The plot is still the same, still the fight has been revamped, more action and less idiocy. Even the Author's Note is revamped! No, really!

Latest:

Gekka Utahime no Magi no Ou : Vilhelm Zest is the best villain ever! He is an awesome swordsman who can slice bullets, good at manipulating people, has the manipulative bastard aura and is even the affably evil type! With zero magic, he easily beats the two female protagonists! The first volume is up on Nanodesu. Even though I didn't really understand whatever happened in the end which caused him to lose, even his death was awesome! The novel's up on Nanodesu. The first volume is complete; the second is on hiatus with 35% done. I recommend you to read it!

Mahou koukou anime: The mahou koukou anime is awesome! Too bad I suck at science and didn't understand the novels! I read until Vol.5 until I finally gave up. Tatsuya is too… emotionless. I think it was described in the novel somewhere, but he does show emotions, just not too many times. I think it was the low point of the show; that and the unexplained magic. That said, I didn't understand the novels with the explanations, so I am probably just dumb after all.

Godslaying Blade Works: The chapters are getting longer, my attention span is getting shorter. Even though this was the fic that inspired me to write my fic, I can't read it now. Don't know whether it is 'ironic' or not, but it sure as hell is 'pitiful'.

A/N - Anyway, was out for almost one month. You probably don't care what I was busy with, so I won't elaborate. The whole chapter was supposed to be up but my tendency to write short interfered. The Authority stats and info is given too. Think something is wrong/ more info is needed, give me a PM.

So, for those who read the earlier (deleted) chapters, the concept is same, the fight is just revamped. If you don't think is better than before, just tell me the points by PM. Notice any plot-holes, the same. OOC-ness, the same.

If you want to contribute any money, forward it to your latest orphanage, childcare, etc. The Butterfly Effect will surely make my update come faster.

I will be using Spirit Vision A LOT. Mostly to give him powers without looking like I am pulling stuff outta my ass. Shirou still isn't getting any Authorities and the difficulty level is increased, so EX-CALIBUR! might be more frequent. Also, the jewel Archer gave him? (In HF! he get's Archer's jewel.) Can I use it in my plot? You know, Heroic Spirits don't carry around stuff for nostalgia. At the very least, I don't think Archer would do so.

On another count, someone said that HF! Shirou is more like Gabriel Blessing!Shirou. Is that right? If possible, I don't want to make him like that.

If you guys think Godou cannot survive a broken Caladbolg, I think the Campione vitality and resistance will help out. If you guys think Godou cannot stand after taking a Caladbolg, WILLING SUSPENSION OF DISBELIEF!

Anyway, I am out now. Will be continued later. Ian nest chaptor. (Intentional Engrish.)

Bye.

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