just hang in on what's going on because i'm not very good at making stories (or at least thats what i think)

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: Mai's POV:

Mai and Kiba were walking to the ramen shop to met Naruto, "so, Mai, you going to the Chinese new year parade?" "Nah, besides remember the last time?"

:flash back:

We were at Hinata's party, "Naruto, go long!" Kiba threw a football toward Naruto, he jumped and got it, but when he landed, Ino fell into the table full of knifes and slit her arm open, "oops, sorry Ino." Mai smelt the blood, being a vampire and all, she went crazy, it took Konkuro's puppets and Gaara's sand to keep her from attacking Ino.

: End of flash back:

"Oh yeah……but still it will be fun." "Let me guess, you made a bet with Naruto that I would come with you…." "Yes..." I rolled my eyes at Kiba, "fine but I need a kimono…" Kiba whistled and akimaru came running with something blue in his mouth, "I planned for this, here's your kimono." Kiba handed me the kimono the kimono is made of silk! "Aww thanks Kiba." I hugged Kiba unwillingly, we got to the ramen shop and sat down on both sides both of Naruto,"so…..Kiba, is the bet still on or are you dropping out on it?" Naruto took a huge bite of ramen "actually it's still on." Naruto's mouth fell open, all the ramen fell back into the bowl, "what?! Oh I mean, sure ok." I rolled my eyes at them both. We ate our ramen talking the whole time. I had to make an excuse to get home. I went to my room and dropped the kimono on the bed; I can't believe he got it in the right size… I closed my eyes, I let the heat in the center of my body take over, I can see the future when I do this, I could see the fireworks then it went black, I sighed and took off my cloths, I slipped the kimono over my head and brushed my hair, then I had a feeling I wasn't alone, "who's there?" I heard a thud and saw Sakura, "hello Mai, I got worried, and you never came over to help me re-decorate my room." I gasped, "Oh I am so sorry, I was with Kiba the whole day." Sakura smiled and looked at the kimono, "I see that… so you're going with him to the parade?" I laughed, "Unfortunately." Sakura hugged me, "you know he likes you, right?" I almost fell over from shock, "he what?!" Sakura sighed, 'if you don't feel the same way for him just tell the poor guy." With that she left my room and went out of the house. I almost screamed, I actually said yes to him?! Good god…… it was almost time for the parade to start when I heard knocking on my door, I opened it to reveal Kiba, "hi, Kiba." Kiba smiled at me and lead me out into the night. I couldn't believe how awesome the town looked, it had wonderful Chinese lanterns and the smell of all the food was wonderful. Naruto and Hinata decided to join us so we went to watch the fireworks, Naruto and Hinata were on the ground laughing really hard at one of Kiba's jokes, so I decided to sneak off, luckily Kiba didn't notice. I decided to go walking next to the lake, how am I going to tell Kiba I don't like him? ugh, why does this has to be so hard I can't even imag At that moment I tripped over a root that I hadn't noticed, I was falling, yeah down the hill into the lake, but someone grabbed my arm and pulled me back up before the kimono could get dirty and hit the water, I looked up to see a man with black hair in a pony tail, he was wearing a black cloak with red clouds on it, then he disappeared.

: Itachi's POV:

Leader gave Kizame and me a mission, it was to spy on a vampire, she was really pretty and was blonde, her name was Mai .we set off towards Kahona, "do you think leader wants us to spy on her b/c he wants to see if she's akatsuki material, itachi?" "Only one way to find out." I totally forgot it was the Chinese New Year's parade today; this was going to be hard. "Kizame, I think we should split up and find her." "Good idea." So we split up into the village. I was heading towards the lake, it had been an hour since we had split up, I was beginning to doubt myself, but as I was about to head back I saw her, she was walking my way, she had her eyes closed apparently she was thinking because she tripped on a root she didn't see and began to fall down the hill toward the water, without thinking I grabbed her wrist and pulled her back on the hill, she looked up at me, her purple eyes met with mine, then I was pulled up higher into the tree by my neck, Kizame was behind me, "what were you thinking?!She saw you." "I'm sorry, I wasn't thinking…." "Yeah your right, you weren't. Now come on we have to follow her." We leaped from tree to tree following her, then she stopped a couple feet away from a huge tree, she snuck around the tree, we followed her to the spot, she was talking with a boy, no wait two boys and a girl, "mai, calm down, why do you look so scared?" the boy who was standing put his hand on Mai's shoulder, I noticed automatically it was Kiba, "there was a man…he wore a cloak and…he looked like the description Naruto said about an akatsuki member." Naruto jumped up and almost yelled, "the akatsuki are back?!" great, vampire chick is friends with the kyuubi…..lovely, "um….Naruto… do you think we should inform lady tsunade?" "No, she'd freak out and would kill me for not following them!" mai almost looked white, "we better go." Kiba and everyone disappeared. We decided to go back to the H.Q., I went to leader's office, "yes, itachi?" pein was already at his office door, "we have news about our vampire friend." Pein smiled at me, "go on." "Well you see, she knows about us….she friends with the kyuubi kid," pein shrugged, "and that she would be exhalent for the akatsuki." I couldn't believe I said that part out loud, "exactly why I have this second mission for you two. I want you to bring her here; I want to see if she can survive our test. Now go." Pein turned and closed the door behind him.

: Mai's POV:

After that guy saved me from falling in the water I relized why he looked so familiar, so I started to freak out in my head, omigawd I can't believe it, their in kahona! I walked as fast as I could to get back to Kiba and Naruto, when I finally got to them they were still laughing, then Kiba noticed me rushing over to him, "mai. Calm down, why do you look so scared?" Kiba put his hand on my shoulder, "there was a man… he wore a cloak and..he looked like the description naruto said about an akatsuki member." Naruto jumped up and almost yelled , "the akatsuki are back?!" hinata stood up, "um….Naruto… d-do you think we s-should inform lady tsunade?" "no, she'd freak out and would kill me for not following them!" I felt so scared " we'd better go." We all disappeared to my house, "now what?!" naruto was almost jumping, "let me see…" I closed my eyes and let the heat in the center of my body take over, I could see a forest and that was about it, "well?" I opened my eyes, "nothing…."

"nothing at all?!" naruto's you-should-know-everything-since-your-a-phycic look made me feel bad, "well since we can't figure out where they are we might as well leave." Kiba rushed every one out of the house. I changed into a black skort, black long sleeved shirt, and a black cloak, I grabbed my katana and ran out my front door, knowing no one could see me I ran as fast as my vampire speed would let me (which is 90 m/h) I knew I shouldn't be chasing after the bad guys in the middle of the night but I had this strange feeling that wouldn't let me turn back, why had they come into kahona in the first place? It doesn't make any sense. After a while of running around I stopped and rested agenst a tree, " wow, im sure as hell stupid to be out here…" I took a deep breath and tried to get up but there was a sharp pain in my stomach, I groaned and just sat there I must be 1,000 miles away from home… a couple miles away she could smell the scent of fresh blood, Mai's mouth started to water, she got up and ran towards the smell, in a clearing there was a kanai knife with blood on it, Mai grabbed the kanai and slid her finger across the blood on the blade, it was animal blood……gross I hate animal blood, then there was the sound of tapping, like people walking, it was close…too close, Mai turned around to come face to face with a guy,but she soon relized it was the guy who had saved her from getting drenched in water, "hello,mai" the guy was nose to nose with her, neither of them backed away, he smells…..like…I don't know what that smell is… "how do you know my name?" the guy blinked, "that's for me to know." Mai looked into his grey eyes, now she could feel his breath brush agenst her face…like he was tring not to lean in anymore, he wasn't doing a good job of it though, "I can make you tell me if I have to." And it was true she could make him tell her, "then go ahead….make me." Mai grabbed the guy's cloak and flung him into the tree, then she pressed her right hand into his chest, Mai was so close to the guy's face that she could feel his lips brushing agenst hers, "now tell me…" Mai had made her voice sound suductive but at the same time very, very dangerouse, "still for me to know…." This guy was stuborn, Mai felt somone behind her, she turned around in time to see a sword fly infront of her face, mai flipped upward into the tree forgetting about th first guy,how many of them are there? Mai saw a blue man,he looked like a shark, the shark dude jumped up into the tree with her, "say hello to my little friend, Mai." He calls that little? the shark dude swung the sword again, it missed her again, "missed me!" "not exactly." He was right I felt weak all of a sudden, "it's a chakura absorbing sword." A hour or so later I was on the ground gasping for air, "kizame, let me finish this." The first guy walked up and bent down to get level with me, "itachi that might not be a good idea, vampires get their energy back by drinking blood….." kizame walked up behind itachi and went to move him, "no…im fine, she won't bite me, see look." Itachi placed the back of his hand on my face,then he slide it to on my lips, "see…..im fine…" "you never know…now finish it and lets go…" kizame turned and waited, itachi sighed and karate chopped the back of my neck, I fell into the relm of darkness.

:itachi's POV:

Kizame and I ran off into the forest, it took them a while to find the right spot to hide, "do we ave a plan?" kizame stared at itachi, "yeah…I do." I grabbed a kanai and sliced kizame open eith it, "dude!" "calm down, vampires are atracted to blood." "oh, nice thinking…" itachi flung it onto the nearest tree and hide, kizame did the same. A few minutes later Mai came into the clearing and grabbed the kanai knife, she rinkled her nose and threw it to the ground, I decided to go up behind her, she turned around and came nose to nose with me,she smells like lavader….. "hello, Mai." "how do you knowmy name?" I couldn't stop gradually moving closer to her, "that's for me to know." She looked into my eyes, "I can make you tell me…" her eyes looked deadly, "then go ahead….make me." The next thing I knew I was slammed into the tree, her right hand on my chest keeping me there, I could feel her lips brush agenst mine, "now tell me……" her voice sounded suductive and deadly at the same time , "still for me to know…" out of the corner of my eye I saw kizame come up behind her and sung his sword, she jumped out of the way and landed in the tree, I could feel my chakura being drained by that gust but it stopped really fast, and hour or so later Mai was on the floor gasping for air, "kizame, let me finish this." I walked up and bent down to get leveled with Mai, "itachi that might not be a good idea, vampires get their energy back by drinking blood….." I felt kizame behind me, "no… im fine she won't bite me, see look." I placed the back of my hand on the side of her face, then I swept them across her lips, "see….. im fine…." " you never know……now finish and lets go..." kizame turned and waited, she's going to hate me for this… I karate choped the back of her nack, she passed out and fell forward into my lap, she looked so helpless a sleep. I picked her up and ran to the H.Q. I went to my room and placed her on my bed. I went out of the room and went to pain's office, I didn't even knock,I just opened the door and went in, "did you get her?" "yes,she's in my room unconscious." Pein looked at mewith a raised eyebrow, "and why is she unconscious?" "well she wouldn't come conscious.." pein shrugged, " tell kizame to to tell me when she wakes up, then ypu make sure she stays in the room." I nodded and went to my room, 2 hours later Mai finally woke up, "hnnn? Where am i?" Mai looked at me sleepily, "your at the akatsuki, your new home." Mai's head shot up, "what??" I saw kizame walk in, stare at us,then walk back out, when I wen to look back at Mai she was about to get up, I grabbed her wrist and climbed over her, "what the heck?! Get off of me!" Mai squrmed but I didn't let her up, "no, you're not leaving…." Mai gave be a deadly glare, if looks could kill then I would be dead… "let me up….now." , "shut up already.", "no, now let me go!" , "if you don't stop yelling then I'll make you stop." ,"let me" I leaned my head down and kissed her, she flinched then just laid there, at least she's quite… I pulled my head up so I could look at her, she had her eyes closed,then she slowly opened them, "now be quite…." Mai sighed and laid there,"fine…." I let go of her wrists and got up into a sitting position, she sat up and stared at me, "what?", "huh? Oh..nothing im sorry I must have spaced out." A few minutes later pein and kizame entered the room, out of the corner of my eye I saw Mai flinch I rolled my eyes , her reaction must have been to pein, " hello , Mai,sorry about the kidnapping….but I did it for a reason, you see we need another member, and you just happened to be the strongest we could find." "um…." Mai looked confused, I wouldn't blame her, " you see in order to become a member, you need to pass our special test." Pein walked closer to us now, " a…test?" Mai still looked confused, "yes a test…. The test will start tomarrow…" pein turned and walked away leaving Mai,kizame and me in the room, ''ok…well im just going…..away…." kizame turned and walked out the door, " um….. Itachi is your name,right?" I looked to mai, "yes…why?" "nothing…."Mai got up and started to walk out of the room, "wait…you might get lost.." I got up and walked behind her, "im not an idiot, I can find my way around here….." Mai gave me that deadly glance again, "ok,sure…." Mai grabbed my cloak again and slammed me into the wall, "look,stop with the sarcastic bullcrap!" I looked at her again," im not being sarcastic…" Mai was about to punch me when the door opened, it was tobi, "itachi-samma whats going on in he- oh hay " tobi slowly backed away and closed the door, "what the?"Mai was staring at the door,then she dropped her fist and let go of my cloak, she flung the door open and slammd it shut after her.

:Mai'a POV:

I woke up in a bedroom holy cow, i din't know i could be knocked out! (there's a first time for everything) "hnnn? Where am i?" I looked to my right to see itachi, "your at the akatsuki, your new home." my head shot up, "what?!", itachi looked at the door then back to me, I was about to get up and jump out the opened window, then itachi was ontop of me holding my wrists down to the bed,"what the heck?? Get off of me!!", "no,your not leaving…….." I gave itachi a deadly glare, "let me up…..now.", "shut up already." ,"no now let me go!", "if you don't stop yelling then im going to make you." , "let me" itachi cut me off by kissing me, I flinched at his touch,then I just sat there dang……… then he pulled his head back up, "now be quite." , I sighed "fine." I sat up and looked at itachi what the heck? He just kissed me and acts like nothing happpened? he looked at me , "what?'' "huh? Oh nothing…I must have spaced out…." A few minutes later the door opened a man with red hair came in the room,woah! How many--13 peircings?! "hello, mai, im sorry about the kidnapping, but I did it for a reason, you see we need another member and you just happened to be the strongest we could find." Oh well that's nice… "um…." I was kinda confused, "you see, in order to become a member you have to do a special test." "a…test?" "yes a test…the test is tomarrow…" the guy turned and walked out of the room, "ok…well im just going …..away." kizame left the room, "um….itachi is your name, right?" itachi looked at me in a weird way , "yes….why?" ,"nothing…" I got up and started to head out of th room, then itachi started to follow, "wait…you might get lost…", "im not an idiot, I can find my way around here." Hopefully, I gave itachi the death glare again, "ok,sure…." That did it… I grabbed itachi's cloak and slammed him into the wall,"im sick of your sarcastic bull crap!", "im not being sarcastic…", I lifted my fist up and was about to punch him when the door opened, a masked boy came in ,"itachi-samma whats going on in he-oh hay " he slowly backed away and closed the door, I let my fist fall to my side then I let go of his cloak,I flung the door open and slamed it closed behind me.i sped down the stairs and found the kitchen, a red head boy was preparing breakfast when he cut his finger, I thought there would have been blood but instead there was just a hole, I stood gawking in the hall way,some one pushed me and I fell to the ground,I looked up to see a blonde….. what looked like a dude, "watch where you walk you clutz." I got of the ground and the blonde was looking at me, "then don't stand there." Boy got attitude…. "say your sorry…now.",the blonde boy stood right infront of me and looked down, "make me…" I grabbed my katana and was about to slice his head off but some one grabbed the blade,"Mai….no…" I looked to my right to see itachi, "it started it….." all of a sudden there was and explosion in my face, "deidara,stop it!"I could feel a cut on my cheek start oozing blood, "guys…..her eyes are turning red……I think she's hungry…." It was the same boy as before,the kid with the mask, itachi grabbed my shoulders and looked into my eyes, "Mai snap out of it…." There was a low growl in my throught, "someone get a cage for the girl….tobi's scared…" the shark dude was just sitting in a chair ,"get a knife!" itachi looked at the red haired boy,the boy threw a knife at him,he caught it,then he did the unthinkable, he slit his wrist and opened my mouth,I could taste the blood going down my throught," itachi-samma is insane!" all of a sudden I snapped back to my origanal self, "huuh?what happened? Itachi! Your wrist!" I grabbed his wrist and stared at it, "im fine, I did it for you…" I wipped my mouth on my hand sure enough there was blood there, "what were you thinking?! i could have killed you!" itachi shrugged then he passed out.

ok, i hope you liked the first chapter

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