Big Time Baby Sister

Hello ! This is my very first fanfiction, just to let you know. Please let me know whether it is good or bad and maybe give me a helpful tip. :D

Disclaimer: I do not own Big Time Rush AT ALL. I only own Cathy, Jenny & Leslie.


Chapter 1: I Miss You

Cathy lay on the couch, deep in thoughts. It had only been half a year and she felt like she missed her older brother, Carlos, for a century. "Mum … I want to call Carlos …" Cathy asked her mum.

"Cathy, darling. You can only call him on Wednesdays and Fridays. Today's only Monday." Mrs. Garcia said .

Cathy sulked. Her brother always hangs out with his best friends but he would always find time to be with her when he was in Minnesota. Now, she could only hang out with her two best friends, Jenny and Leslie, and some other popular kids in school. She took out her phone from her pocket and sent a text to her brother.


Meanwhile, at the Palm Woods …

"CARLOS! You are so DEAD!" James yelled at Carlos.

Carlos had accidentally dropped James's lucky comb. Even though it didn't break, James thought that his luck might run out. Just then, they heard a tweeting sound. "Dude, dude. Someone just texted me. You can kill me after the text." Carlos said, picking up his phone from the table.

Carlos's grinned.

The text read;

What's up big bro? Mom said I can't call u so I decided 2 text u instead ;) I miss you so much big bro … :(

James read the text and said, "Dude! You're lucky you can communicate with your baby sister, man! I really want to talk to Jenny …"

Carlos pitied his dear pal and sent a reply;

Hey little sis! How r u? Smart thinking btw. ;) I miss u too baby sister. Maybe during your school holidays, you can come and stay w/ us 4 2 weeks. :D


Cathy received Carlos's text. Her summer holidays are in a week's time. She told her mom about it and she gladly approved. "I can't wait to see Carlos, Kendall, Logan, James and one of my dear best friends, Katie, again! Of course, I can't wait to see Mrs. Knight too mama." Cathy said.

Cathy quickly called Leslie and Jenny, "Girls! Carlos wants me to stay with him for 2 weeks! AHH! I wish you guys can come … After all, Logan and James are your brothers …"


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